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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Fri Jul 25, 2008 10:17 pm

Jessica! wrote:It's all good Smile
I didn't think you came off as mean!

Anyways, I can't wait for new adds clap

And I do agree with you, this place is so empty nowadays Sad I miss summer too!

Yeah. I just felt the need to say sorry. Thanks though. Very Happy

KAI wrote:im alive!
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Hey you! I haven't received replies in a while and it's been quite lonely.
I understand though. How's life?



Okie. My computer is fixed now but my effin USB got lost. I have to find it. I'll post an add ASAP. Hold tight!

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Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:37 pm

carmzy_sweetness wrote:

Hey you! I haven't received replies in a while and it's been quite lonely.
I understand though. How's life?


im sorry Embarassed
my computer went boom.
lol
but its okay now.
im ookay.
i guess.
lol.
how bout you?
how are you?
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:58 pm

^Nah. Don't be sorry. Very Happy
The world is playing with my patience is a good start.
Other than that, I'm good. XD

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Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:01 pm

Smile Very Happy
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Sun Jul 27, 2008 1:40 pm

I finally found my USB. Thank gawd!!! I'm sorry to have kept you waiting. Here's the add though.
I'm sorry if you found the other add crap. Here's a much better one. I hope you like it.




CHAPTER 17

Mum tended to my wound while she scolded Marco for, I quote, "being irresponsible". I felt like I was seven again and just got pushed off the swing because Marco didn't take care of me. It was actually kind of funny.

Later on that night, I sat on my bed waiting for the pictures to finish uploading. I had taken so many that the upload was taking long.

I felt my phone vibrate in my pocket and I automatically pulled it out. I looked at the screen. Max.

Can we talk? You need to hear this.

She sounded serious and I was concerned for a moment. Then I decided to call her.

"What's up?" I said the moment she answered.
"Uhhhh."
"Spit it out, Max. What's wrong."
"I really don't want to be the one telling you this." She said.
"What do you mean?"
"It's Dougie." She said hesitantly. My heart started beating fast.
"What's happened to him?"
"Don't be alarmed. Nothing. It's just..."
"What?"
"I think he's seeing Angela again. It might sound hard to believe but I just saw them together."
My jaw ropped open and I stared at my wall. I was speechless and my mind was going overdrive. I wanted to scream and cry and throw things.
"No. Not Dougie." I said faintly.
"I'm sorry."
"It could've been someone else!" I protested.
"I saw him, Bella. It was him. They were together at the bar in town."
I stayed quiet again; my mouth opening and closing. The memory of them together in the foodcourt played over in my mind for the first time in a long time. My eyes started getting watery and I swallowed the lump on my throat. But then it hit me...Max has always liked Dougie. I remember the first time we met how animatedly she talked about him when I asked who he was. He said hi to me that day and she could have seen that as a chance to get close to him.
How could she?
"You know Max? You don't have to lie anymore. I can see through you." I said angrily.
"What?" She said with a confused ring in her voice.
"You don't have to pretend anymore. I know you like him. You're trying to get me to break up with him so you can have him for yourself! How selfish of you!" I breathed in deep trying to calm down and catch my breathe.
"I can't believe you think of me like that!" She protested.
"Well isn't it true?" I said sarcastically.
"I'm not having this conversation if you're going to be that way!"
"Neither am I! We're not friends anymore!" I closed my phone with a loud snap and threw it on my bed.

How could I have not known she was just using me to get to Dougie?

To be continued...

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Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:16 pm

OMG noo.
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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:39 pm

wooow!!! i missed aallooooooooooooooooot!!!!
just got the bloody pc fixed..
never visited this site for a looooong time..
but yeeey!! im here now.. sooo yeah..


pleaaaasssee put up mooooree!!! weeee!!! cant wait!!!

btw,, ari's getting kinda annoying.. such a creep... but shes fictional.. Laughing
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:43 pm

Grabe Cy!!! Perfect timing ka talaga ahhh! I just put that chap up.
And yeah........don't mind her...

I'll try ASAP

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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Sun Jul 27, 2008 7:14 pm

yiiipeeeee!!!! good for me!!! i've been missing quite a lot.. haha!!!
im not done reading the other posts in the other topics pahh.. hahah!!
canntt waaait!!! weee!!!
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Post  Jessica! on Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:41 pm

YAAY thanks for the add Very Happy

Pff, what's Dougie playing at?! *taps foot*
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:44 pm

Cyra:
You go do that. I've missed you na nga. The other day I was wondering where you were kasi when I checked your last visit...it had been a while.

Good to have you back.

Jessica:
Hahaha. Don't look at me. *sticks hands up*

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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:29 pm

You go do that. I've missed you na nga. The other day I was wondering where you were kasi when I checked your last visit...it had been a while.

Good to have you back.

haha. its the computer's fault.. haha!! good 2 be back!!! Smile
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Mon Jul 28, 2008 9:08 pm

Was actually just writing this. Read a couple of Hallmark cards about friendship and all that stuff and suddenly had some inspiration.
Anyways....kinda bored at the mo and have nothing to do so here it is...an add.
Hope you like it. Enjoy!




CHAPTER 18

I can't believe Max would do that to me. I trusted her. I believed everything she told me. Gawd! How could I have been so naive? That was how she treats her best friend?! Or ex-best friend now.

I punched the pillow beside me and threw it on the wall in frustration.

"Fu*ck her! Fu*ck!" I muttered before getting up.

I walked downstairs and headed to the front door, grabbing my jumper angrily from the chair where it innocently hung from.
"Where are you off to?" Marco called from the kitchen.
"Out. I don't know where and I don't blody care when I'm coming back." I slammed the door with a loud bang and put on my jumper.

--

I hummed a random tune while I swung my feet from the top of the monkey bars.

I found myself riding a cab to my old elementary school asfter I walked out of the house.

The old playground gave me a sense of freedom and somehow, it calmed me down. It allowed me to forget about everything and everyone and it, being deserted most of the time, was a perfect place to escape.

My phone vibrated in my pocket and I let it be. Finally feeling a bit guilty, I pulled it out and answered it.

"Where the hell are you? It's been three hours. Mum and dad will be home any minute now." Marco. I sighed.
"I'll be over at Dougie's in a while. Tell them I'll be home late."
"Seriously. Where are you?" His voice grew softer; probably sensing the sadness in my voice.
"I'll tell you some other time. And don't worry. I'm safe." I said in my most convincing tone.
"Tel me-" I shut off my phone before my brother finished his protest. I didn't feel like arguing and Marco was the least of my problems. He's my brother. I know he'll understand.

I walked to the corner down the street where cabs often stopped to pick up passengers. The night was cold and the walk was lonely. Street lights began to flick on slowly as the darkness engulfed everything. I wrapped my arms around myself and shivered. It was the loneliness I couldn't stand feeling.

Finally, I reached the stop. A few stray people roamed the streets as I surveyed everything around me. A little boy with an ice cream cone walked happily with his other hand tucked in his mother's hand. Two girls all dressed up chatted away with genuine smiles on their faces. A man in his sweat pants and loose shirt jogged beside his Golden Retriever.

They all had one thing I didn't have. They had company.

--

"Ari?" Dougie was wide-eyed when he opened his front door to me. I gave him a small smile and let my gaze drop on the floor.
"Are you busy?" I said softly.
"No. Uhh...come on in." He glanced inside the house and held the door for me.
"Are you sure? I'd feel bad if you were doing something and I interrupted."
"Yeah. It's okay. My family is in there though." He shot another glance to a room which I assumed was the living room. It hit me then that I have never ever met his family. I've been in his house with Marco several times but they weren't around most of the time. If they were, we didn't stick around long enough to have formal talk.
"'Bout time I met them then?"I said with a light chuckle. He looked at me with a sweet smile and stuck out his arm.
"Right this way, madam." He said in a posh voice.

I don't feel so alone anymore. I now have company.........at least for the time being.

To be continued...

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Post  Jessica! on Tue Jul 29, 2008 6:37 pm

OMG! She's meeting his family?! XD


Thank you for the add. Not worthy

(I hope things don't go wrong ... AGAIN. dead )
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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Tue Jul 29, 2008 8:55 pm

yipee!! an add!!!
woow... that was a nice add.. shes all emo.. haha!
mooooooorreeee please.. Smile Hahaha

i hope everythings gana be fine with ari and doug.. Razz
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:00 pm

Jessica! wrote:OMG! She's meeting his family?! XD


Thank you for the add. Not worthy

(I hope things don't go wrong ... AGAIN. dead )

lols. Yeah she's lucky. And thank YOU for reading.
More soon. Just got out of a very effin hard Long Test (150 points in Chem!) and weirdly in a writing mood.

Thanks again Not worthy Joy!


mcflyJBdarch wrote:yipee!! an add!!!
woow... that was a nice add.. shes all emo.. haha!
mooooooorreeee please.. Smile Hahaha

i hope everythings gana be fine with ari and doug.. Razz

Hahaha. Vulnerability at best.

I hope so to. lols. Thanks for readin Cy! PBJT!

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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Wed Jul 30, 2008 9:47 pm

I hope so to. lols. Thanks for readin Cy!

More soon.

^ nooo problemoo!! Smile still cant wait for more. Razz PBJT!
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Post  Jessica! on Thu Jul 31, 2008 5:50 pm

I thought we were the only ones with Long Tests Laughing
I just had one today.
It was alright. But my brain is now mush.

and weirdly in a writing mood.
Approve!
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Post  kaisthelimit on Fri Aug 01, 2008 10:34 pm

oh yeah
oh yeah
PBJT!
she's meeting HIS family PBJT!
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Sat Aug 02, 2008 2:02 am

Thank gawd for the weekend!!!
And thank you for the replies. Fic is nearing the end so boooooo. But anyways...will be out for most part of the day of August 2 so here's the addage that you can think about.
I wrote it during English class.
Enjoy!!!




CHAPTER 19
"Will you excuse us please?" Dougie looked at his family with a fake, innocent smile.
"Yes, but you're not safe from helping with clearing up." His mom replied with a knowing smile. Dougie pouted and mumbled something to himself.
"Don't worry Mrs. Poynter. We'll be right down to help you and Jaz." I chuckled and got up to my feet.

Dougie's family was real nice. Very chatty and open. Despite not having their dad around, they were quite contented with what they had at the moment and that kind of made me cheery. Being happy was what mattered more to them.

"Using me as an excuse to escape chores, I see." I said with a smile.
"Objective of the game. Try to make use of what you have." He said in playful monotone.
"Are you kidding me?" I laughed. He stopped in front of a door and faced me.
"Maybe so." He threw the door open and stepped inside with me in tow.

The room we entered was a faint cream color and heavily covered with posters. Pin-ups of bands were scattered on the walls and the back of doors. A bass and acoustic guitar lay in one corner.
In general, the room was lived-in and untidy.

"Woah. Pigsty." I commented as Dougie picked up stray shirts that were on the floor.
"Stop complaining and get comfy. You have some explaining to do."
"Now?" I pouted and sank on his bed.
"Yeahp." He plopped down beside me.
"But I just cheered up. Do I really really have to?" I batted my eyelashes at him.
"I guess not." He pulled me in his arms and enclosed me in a tight hug.
I sighed contentedly and pulled away slightly to look into his eyes. So blue, deep, concerned.
"Come on. Jazzie and your mum need our help in the kitchen." I tugged on his shirt as I started towards the kitchen.
Jazzie smiled fondly at us as we came through the doorframe.
Without a word, we started picking up plates from the table and stuffed them in the dishwasher.

--

After cleaning up, we gathered in the living room and chatted over some tea.

Dougie wass a warm and loving person, and now I knew where he got that wonderful quality. His mum and sister were real sweet and fun, too.

As much as I wanted to stay, guilt got the best of me and I decided to head home. The Poynters didn't want me to go unless I promised to come by again someday so I did, not like they had to make me come back. They were quit an amazing bunch.
Dougie volunteered to walk me home and we waved to the two who were left in the household.

"I'm hoping you're finally ready to talk to me." He stuck his hands down his jumper pockets and looked over at me.
"I guess." I sighed. "What do you want to know?"
"What made you show up at my house?"
"Long story short: Max and I had a fight earlier on. I just needed to be away for a while." I sighed again.
"So, did my family help?" He chuckled.
"Mind you, they created the prefect distraction. Please thank them for me."
"I will." He assured me, "And what do you plan to do when you get home?"
"Considering I walked out on my brother without telling him where I'll be going and considering I've been gone for quite a long time now, I don't know. I'd be lucky enough to get grounded for three weeks."
"Good luck with that." He pointed at my house right across the street.
"I will need it. And hey, thanks for tonight." I smiled.

Dougie Poynter. He'll never stop amazing me. Being with him gives me a rason to smile. Somehow, he just makes things feel better and it's like I know everything will be okay.

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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:27 am

woooow!!! awww.. Razz

add soon?? Smile

i love ur sig btw.. Razz

MOOOOOORE!!! we want, we want more! we want, we want MORE.. Razz kidding.. no pressure.. Razz
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Post  Jessica! on Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:34 am

Awwww, how sweet Smile

WHAT?! It's going to end soon!? affraid

More, please, then. Feed our hunger for your fic. Laughing
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Aug 02, 2008 11:36 am

awwww
i love your sig.
harry's lookin at you Laughing
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Sat Aug 02, 2008 9:22 pm

mcflyJBdarch wrote:woooow!!! awww.. Razz

add soon?? Smile

i love ur sig btw.. Razz

MOOOOOORE!!! we want, we want more! we want, we want MORE.. Razz kidding.. no pressure.. Razz

lol lol lol. I'll try adding ASAP.
And thanks. My feet got lost in the contrast!!! Nyahaha. Crappy but had fun making it.


Jessica! wrote:Awwww, how sweet Smile

WHAT?! It's going to end soon!? affraid

More, please, then. Feed our hunger for your fic. Laughing

lol. Yeah......I'll try adding as often as I can since we're nearing the end. Razz

KAI wrote:awwww
i love your sig.
harry's lookin at you Smile

lol lol lol. That made me smile. Hahaha

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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Sat Aug 02, 2008 9:30 pm

lol lol lol. I'll try adding ASAP.
And thanks. My feet got lost in the contrast!!! Nyahaha. Crappy but had fun making it.

^ lol! lol! its not crappy.. i cant even do that.. XD Not worthy
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