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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:52 pm

OMG that was gooooood!!!!! bounce
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:01 pm

Hi kai! thanks for dropping by! i hope i can add more soon. =) where are all the people here?
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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:42 pm

suree Smile
uhh.
idk. haha.
i think they're, busy it's exam week.
don't worry they'll be back.
sem break's coming Very Happy
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Tue Oct 21, 2008 9:56 pm

true...really lonely here =(
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Re: Worlds Apart (FINALLY AN ADD: Chapter 33)--bABUMP!

Post  jaschier on Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:44 pm

oh my oh my!!! this is wery entertaining, julienne is so cool, i like how the way he disgust his manager and his co-workers, actually she got a point! i love her, she is even so funny!!! especially to the part that MC? is sounds like a stupid name, that cracks me up... i like the story line... i'm going to read more with this... wait... continue mo lang sa pag update, i think, you still didnt finish this fic... wait, i have to rread more!!! Razz

PS, this moment was like when i first read the fic of anika... i really appreciated it much Razz
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Re: Worlds Apart (FINALLY AN ADD: Chapter 33)--bABUMP!

Post  anika on Fri Mar 06, 2009 10:54 pm

Waah! You know, I really really like this fic! It's awesome and I loove the way you write! Very Happy Very Happy
I dunno. I get really really hyper and happy when I read this. It's so cute! And it stars Danny! So double cute! Razz Razz Razz
Please continue this. I'm dying to know what's gonna happen next! cheers
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Re: Worlds Apart (FINALLY AN ADD: Chapter 33)--bABUMP!

Post  flyhighstargirl on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:36 pm

Chapter Fourteen: Julienne's POV

GOodness.. I sighed as I walk into a conference room...AGAIN...just like when I was about to hear the bad news about the Quintet. Something tells me this isn't going to be any better than that. "SIt down", Mr. Peterson gestured on a small office chair opposite to him. The other three bozos has already sat down, while Danny was waiting for me to sit, and he carefully positioned himself to my left. "Perfect..The place of the devil."

"So why did you abduct me here?" I asked immediately. All of them looked at me like I'm sort of an idiot. "Well, before that, let me introduce myself. I am Henry Peterson, general manager of.." his voice trailed off. "Of Sissy Records. PLEASE! Tell me something I don't know yet!" I rudely interrupted. He just let out a sigh. "I'm Dougie Poynter. I play bass." the little boy who pried Jones off me earlier said. He extended his hand and gave me a really cute smile. I didn't know what to do with that hand. I glanced at the wall hoping an answer will just pop out. "Fair enough." Dougie pulled his hand away. "I'm Tom Fletcher, I play guitars and do the vocals." I didn't say or look at him. "I'm Harry Judd, the drummer. Ignored him too. The Danny cleared his throat. He was about to open his mouth when I said, "Please. Save it Jones." He pressed his lips together.

"NOw! that we know each other, let's talk about business.You see, Julienne, after four years with Universal Records, McFLY started this record company called Super Records. We are looking at a direction that would clearly show what McFLY is truly made of without the hindrances of management." Henry chimed. "Julienne, the reason I called you is because I want you to join the band." That's the first time i looked at anyone since the painful roll-call. "And be Miss McFLY?" I asked. "We were talking about how we want a little of classical music to mix with the pop-rock music of McFLY." he continued. No one said anything. "We want you to be our pianist." Danny Jones said. I shook a bit when I heard his voice. "That's true Miss Julienne." Tom agreed. "WE think you are perfect for the job." Harry encouraged. The guys started nodding and agreeing that it got a little annoying for me. "I'm a classical pianist. Back when i still have the Quintet, we are planted firmly on classical music doing a little of pop. How do you expect me to be able to adjust the other way around? And don't you think I need more time to think about this?" I defended. They all fell quiet. "We don't want to force you, Julienne. We are just making a proposal." Henry reminded me. My head spun. This is too much for me to handle. True that i wanted my career to move on but not this way. I was thinking maybe I could go solo but ...I stood up. The moment I did, all of them did too. "This is not going to work. I'm heading home." with that I opened the door. "Told you she's pathetic." Harry jeered. I froze between freedom, and the open door. My blood started to boil inside. "Pathetic?" I repeated without looking back at them. "Yes. Want me to spell that for you?" Harry was insulting me. I heard a loud smack before I heard an "Ouch" from Harry. I spun back. "What makes you think I'm pathetic, Judd?" I challenged him. "YOu can't take it. You're wallow in your own depression because the company you are in folded! You think music is that easy?! Well, for you maybe. You had instant success--not anymore you do! We didn't! We had to go through far more than you are going through right now! It wasn't easy Julienne! That time when you were bathing in your success, others were working hard to get to where you were. Don't think we're just some useless crap! Music changes, people have their chances. You just lost yours. What are you going to do about it? Blame your failure to other bands?" His breathing was clearly labored. His face was flushed. Dimple-man was patting his back. Danny looked like someone who just got hit by a truck, his eyes blank at Harry. Dougie just looked at me. I can't quite tell what he is thinking. Henry was massaging his forehead. I was....shocked of what Harry said... What he said is....true.
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Re: Worlds Apart (FINALLY AN ADD: Chapter 33)--bABUMP!

Post  flyhighstargirl on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:38 pm

Thanks for dropping by and reading guys Smile

just got so busy with work that i wasn't able to write in a long time. Ciao!
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Re: Worlds Apart (FINALLY AN ADD: Chapter 33)--bABUMP!

Post  anika on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:52 pm

OH MY GOSH!!!!!
I am so so so so so so so happy you updated!!!! Joy! Joy! Joy! Joy!
I love love love this fic!
AW!!! Harry's so great here!!! Yeah. Tell it to her face. haha. Dance Dance
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Sun Mar 22, 2009 6:40 pm

MOre ADD! Smile

Chapter Fifteen: Danny's POV

I felt like I wanted to smack Harry when my eyes landed on Julienne who looked like she was about to burst. An evidence of that was when a single tear fell from her eyes. My stomach tied into knots. I wanted to go hug her again but then again, I think it's a horrible idea and that would only push her away. "Julienne...". My whole body ached just having to stand and watch her break. She didn't say anything, her dark eyes just looked at Harry. Harry on the other hand is still red with fury. "You see what I mean now? You can't just blame it all on us." He continued, but now his voice was gentle. "You can't be famous all the time. We know that truth too that sooner or later, we will be standing in the same position as you are now...a has-been." "Ouch..that's got to hurt her. But what Harry is saying is right." Julienne didn't move from her spot. Neither of us did for the past few minutes. "If you don't want to do it, then it's fine. But don't put the blame on us." With that Harry brushed past her and went upstairs to his room. We just stood there listening to his footsteps and his bedroom door shutting.

My eyes travelled to the rest of the band, and our manager. Clearly, no one knew what to do next. Harry has never given such an outburst before. I looked at Julienne. Her eyes were on the floor, she is uncomfortably shifting her weight from side to side. "I'm sorry." She blurted out. All of us locked our eyes on her. "I lost my career, had a bad publicity, lost my friends, the company...and I have no one to talk to all in a couple of days. I don't expect you all to understand." She murmured. "I'm sorry I rushed things too, Julienne." Henry apologized. "I was just afraid we are going to lose you to some record label." He admitted. Something in her face changed...her lips...She's smiling! My soul jumped and I almost died when I saw that smile from her. I felt a lot better. "LEt me give you time to think and you could always get back to us when you're ready." Tom suggested. Dougie nodded. I nodded and she did too. "This is getter better. "I better get home."

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I walked her out of the house while Dougie and Tom stayed with Henry to do more brainstorming. I don't know about them but my mind has been through a lot already. It was silent having to walk those blocks to where her car was parked. I sneaked a glance of her. I couldn't quite tell what she was feeling. She scratched her cute nose gently and tucked her hands inside her hoodie-pockets. I took off my leather jacket. I wrapped it around her. It felt like I hugged her all over again. She managed a weak smile and a little thank you. I just smiled back. I glanced back at my watch. It registered a few minutes to seven. My stomach growled wildly inside and I'm doing every effort to hide it. "Hey, Julienne." I started. I feel like a school-boy asking some girl to the prom. "Uhmm..It's close to dinner time." I started. She looked at me, her eyes dancing wildly. The streetlight outlined her beautiful face in a soft glow. I almost lost it. "Easy, Jones. It's never difficult for you to ask any girl out, remember?". I cleared my throat. "Would you like to go grab a bite?" She looked down. She's hesitating. "There's a good pasta place I know." I coaxed. She giggled. The cutes giggle in the world. "Gross Jones. That's so pathetic." I shoved my nagging conscience at the back of my head. "How'd you know i love pasta?" She asked with a smile. "I....I did my research." I admitted, my face turning pink. She giggled again. I can die happy now. "You see. We're going to hire you. Definately, we should do our homework and do a background check just to see if you're capable." Trying to sound confident. She gave me a gentle push while she laughed. "Convincing me again, ei?" She concluded. "I didn't say that." I joked. She smiled. "Pasta would be great..Danny." She said my NAME!! Is it possible to go to die all over again?
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Sun Mar 22, 2009 6:42 pm

anika wrote:OH MY GOSH!!!!!
I am so so so so so so so happy you updated!!!! Joy! Joy! Joy! Joy!
I love love love this fic!
AW!!! Harry's so great here!!! Yeah. Tell it to her face. haha. Dance Dance

LOL! heheh! thank you for dropping by Smile
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World's Apart (Updated: Chapters 14-16 added)

Post  flyhighstargirl on Sun Mar 22, 2009 6:58 pm

Chapter Sixteen: Julienne's POV

The words of Harry Judd still rung in my ear while Danny suggested to walk me home. I would have probably gone deaf because of Harry's words that i mindlessly nodded to the suggestion of Danny without thinking twice. I didn't want to cause any commotion already so I didn't change my mind. Honestly, I'm thankful someone is walking me to the car. With my bad sense of direction, I'd be lost again.

The blistering cold is absolutely mental. I swore this is my thickest hoodie. But it's not helping at all. My heart started to speed up like crazy when I saw in the corner of my eye that Danny took off his jacket. My eyes travelled to that nicely chisled chest that is outlined so beautifully through his white shirt. I mentally kicked myself of that thought. "Now is not the right time to be perving on Danny." I reminded myself. No wonder the girls are so crazy about this guy. He's.... "DOn't even think about it, Bayley."..Gorgeous. There! I said it. My mind screamed in agony when I said that. Then my senses shut-down when his jacket fell heavily on my shoulders. I felt warm. By instinct, I grabbed on it. I felt myself blush. I hope he didn't notice it. We were only a block away from my car when he invited me for dinner. My thoughts danced crazily when I looked into his eyes, and he held my gaze. Truth is, that is what I needed. A lovely dinner. Pasta! I am craving for it again. My heart did the gymnastics when he suggested pasta. "Can he read my mind?" What a stupid question. Who doesn't love pasta?

***
Danny and I walked into to Italy's Finest, a fine-dining restaurant a few blocks away from the car. It was just hilarious for him to tell me directions while I was driving. I felt like a student in driving school. "Danny. We're not dressed for the occassion." I whispered as my eyes travelled to ladies in cocktail dresses, and men in suits. "That shouldn't be a problem." He whispered back. My whole body tingled when his breath slid up on neck and ear. "This way please, Maam and Sir." Some guy directed us to a huge flight of stairs that led up to the balcony. When we got there a small table for two with candles and flowers stood before us. I felt like a girl in her first date. "Date.." That word repeated in my mind.... Duke.


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Post  anika on Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:19 pm

I am so so glad you updated once more today. I am overjoyed that you continued this. Seriously. This is awesome. They like each other eh? Aw... How sweet!! I am getting really excited now!!!! Nice date. Pasta! Adorable, really.

Razz
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:48 pm

hehe! thanks for reading and following the story. heheh! i hope i can still think of something. Smile cheers!
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Post  anika on Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:56 pm

flyhighstargirl wrote:hehe! thanks for reading and following the story. heheh! i hope i can still think of something. Smile cheers!

Of course! haha. I've been a fan. And I've been always checking out if you updated. Either that or I read it all over again. lol!
Ooh! Sure, sure! I'll definitely read once you post! I'm so excited now! Yeeeyy!!! Dance Dance Dance Dance Dance
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:58 pm

anika wrote:
flyhighstargirl wrote:hehe! thanks for reading and following the story. heheh! i hope i can still think of something. Smile cheers!

Of course! haha. I've been a fan. And I've been always checking out if you updated. Either that or I read it all over again. lol!
Ooh! Sure, sure! I'll definitely read once you post! I'm so excited now! Yeeeyy!!! Dance Dance Dance Dance Dance

LOL! i havent updated in a loooong time ya know that i had to read it all over again just to know what to write next! heheheeh! LOL! yey! i got a fan. teehee!
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Post  jaschier on Mon Mar 23, 2009 11:37 am

uy, buti nag update ka, actually busy ako, buti nalang tapos na ang summer, kaya balik actve na ako, wait read lang me... Razz
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Post  jaschier on Mon Mar 23, 2009 12:13 pm

jullien..

oh great! i love the way you use some expressions, actually i stopped at chap 3 and 5 at this point, and it really push me to go on, but before that, i really pity jullien, i can feel his anger as danny shiver from his sight, but how dare the others look at him like a street rat! whats that, cheap bozos! i love it... and yeah danny thought about him like weird poor stray... sort of like that which little did he know, its not... this really kill me for the next chap, after danny saw him again, i really love to see what's next, i love jullien, she is so cool, so excited fro how they will get through with this fic.. wait read lang more... Razz
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Post  jaschier on Mon Mar 23, 2009 12:44 pm

oh, this is so wicked, i'm already half way through of the fic.. good thing that the driver is a fan, i was thinking about that, its a rapist... actually like jullien, me too, though i live here in isabela, i really dont know how to get rid with the roads, i mean i just stay at school, house, church, in my friends, and only in our town, and nothing else where but i know for the other place..! i can feel the anger of jullien... corrupt she is so rich! however, she likes to wear boxer... that's way too cool, even my ashe do so.. haha it just reminds me... wait it will be jullien for the orchestra... that's wicked with mcfly... with the news, that's really shocking at the point you have something to do with the news...! i really like your fic.. but i have to cut in here coz, i have to deposit pa sa BPI, i'm going to buy some mcfly shirt!

well sana ma shock si tom if she play the piano! Razz

sige tommorow na lang! Very Happy
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:42 pm

Chapter Seventeen: Julienne's POV

That's when I remembered him..Duke..my boyfriend, who I havent' seen in 4 months since he was stationed in Germany. "This is not a date, Julienne. Just some dinner with a guy who you are going to be working with...that if I decided such." My conscience reminded me. Danny pulled out the chair and with the sweetest gesture, offered me to sit down. I feel pretty ridiculous when I sat down. I wouldn't if I had been wearing a gown. But jeans and a hoodie? That's a sight. Danny sat down right in front of me. For a moment, he just looked at me. A smile started to form in his lips. If I weren't seated, I would have fainted! His blue eyes locked and held my gaze. Feeling a little weird, I blurted out. "What?" intrigued by what he would say. "Nothing, Julienne. I'm just happy you're no longer mad and fuming." He said while he got the goblet before drinking down the water. I gave a giggle. "You've been giggling quite a lot, girl." I started to blush. "Shall I call the waiter?" He suggested. I simply nodded while I drank down the water in my goblet. I just wanted to extinguish the fire that was already burning inside me.

Danny's POV
I felt like dancing when she finally agreed to have dinner with me. I mentally thanked myself for doing that little research. If I knew that research would land me a date with her, then I'll definately research some more! "Turn right over here." I instructed her as her car danced its way on the street. "And then, go straight for about a two hundred meters...before you take a left." I said simply. She laughed like crazy. "Sorry, Danny. I don't measure distances." She admitted in between laughs. I laughed with her. That made her laugh even more. We're absolutely mental. "Okay..okay.." I managed. "Now.....Here! turn here!" I gestured. She seemed startled and made a sharp turn that caused cars from every direction to angrily honk their horns. She laughed and panted. I love her laugh. I'm glad she's feeling a lot better.

We parked outside Italy's Finest after a few minutes of roller-coaster-like ride. When we entered the place, clearly we are not properly dressed. The hostess raised an eyebrow at the sight of us. "Get us a table." I whispered to the hostess while slipping in 10 pounds to her hand. She smiled, and called out for a guy to escort us to the balcony. The best seat in the house. When we were finally seated, my eyes just unwillingly stayed glued to hers. I just realized I'm having dinner with an absolute knock-out. Her dark hair, with matching dark eyes, her cute little nose, and those perfect lips. I would just give anything in the world to taste them. If they look as good as it taste, then I would probably be in heaven already. "What?" from Julienne interrupted my thoughts.

I raised my hand and gestured for the waiter. Even the waiter looked more posh that me. "We'll start with your tomato-basil soup, and Cesar's salad please. To share." I started while eyeing the menu. Julienne on the other hand looked like a little girl while looking at the menu. I swear she looked like she's ready to devour the menu itself. "What would you want to have?" I asked her. "Uhhmm.... I guess I'd like to have their Pesto Angel Hair." She told me. I nodded to the waiter, who carefully jotted down on her fancy notepad. "I'd have your mushroom-cheese risotto." I added. "Would you like to share a pizza, Danny?" She asked me while her eyes scanned the menu. "Would I ever?!" "That would be great. You choose." I offered. She had the quizzical look again which made her nose wrinkle. I smiled as I looked at her. "We'll haavvveee.....your chef's speacialty." she said finally. "Excellent choice!" The waiter spoke. She closed the menu and so did I. That signalled the waiter to repeat our orders and then he left.

The room was quiet. You can only hear the chattering and clinking of the utensils from below. We were the only ones in the floor. Clearly the 10 pounds helped. "Oh wow!" Julienne wowed at something behind me. Intrigued of what caught her attention, I looked behind me. There it was, standing on platform, a white baby grand piano. "Would you like to play it?" I asked her. Clearly she wanted to do that. "I don't know if we can touch that." Julienne leaned back on her chair. "Not if I can give another ten pounds." I schemed. "I'm sure it's all right." I said as i stood up and walked towards the piano. I opened it up and revealed the shiny black and white keys. "What a beautiful instrument." I noticed for the first time. Sure, we had keyboards in the band but I rarely play it. Tom is the one who plays the keyboard a lot. During our Motion in the Ocean Arena tour, we really had the piano on stage. Yet again, Tom played it. "Is it tuned?" An angelic voice asked behind me. That startled me a bit. I didn't realize she was alraedy behind me. She pressed a note and it's glorious sound filled the room. "It is." She concluded. "How can she tell that by just pressing one note?" "You think I can play it?" she asked me like a little girl. "Of course you can, by the time you're playing, the waiter would have recognized the great Julienne." I assured her. "Play something." I urged her. I went back to my seat as she positioned herself on the bench. She was facing me. She looked at me one last time before shifting her gaze on the piano. She played a tune. My brain rattled as it tried to find an answer in the dusty corner under Classical Music. She continued playing. Her playing was...gentle. It reached my soul. My heart was running a mile. It felt really weird. I didn't know the piano could produce such a wonderful sound. I didn't know someone can play it this way. Her hands were really fast but yet it revealed every note with clarity. So Beautiful. "What is this? A piece from some guy named Ludwig (beethoven)? Mozart? Rachmaninoff? What is this? It sounds so familiar to me. Yet...I can't seem to get it." My brain started to spin because of the intoxication of Julienne's music. "She's amazing.." She glanced at me, and back to the piano again as my mind rattled on to find the title of the song. That's when it hit me. "I know this song!" Goosebumps started to form in my body at my new-found realization.
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:46 pm

jaschier wrote:oh, this is so wicked, i'm already half way through of the fic.. good thing that the driver is a fan, i was thinking about that, its a rapist... actually like jullien, me too, though i live here in isabela, i really dont know how to get rid with the roads, i mean i just stay at school, house, church, in my friends, and only in our town, and nothing else where but i know for the other place..! i can feel the anger of jullien... corrupt she is so rich! however, she likes to wear boxer... that's way too cool, even my ashe do so.. haha it just reminds me... wait it will be jullien for the orchestra... that's wicked with mcfly... with the news, that's really shocking at the point you have something to do with the news...! i really like your fic.. but i have to cut in here coz, i have to deposit pa sa BPI, i'm going to buy some mcfly shirt!

well sana ma shock si tom if she play the piano! Razz

sige tommorow na lang! Very Happy

Thanks for reading Smile
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Re: Worlds Apart (FINALLY AN ADD: Chapter 33)--bABUMP!

Post  anika on Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:52 pm

WEE!!!! I am overjoyed that you updated once again! haha. cheers cheers cheers
Aw... Duke's been away. So Danny should take his place. They're so cute together, seriously. The piano scene was nice.
They're so cute! Especially with the reckless driving!! Aww!!!!!!!
lub lub lub lub
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:49 pm

anika wrote:WEE!!!! I am overjoyed that you updated once again! haha. cheers cheers cheers
Aw... Duke's been away. So Danny should take his place. They're so cute together, seriously. The piano scene was nice.
They're so cute! Especially with the reckless driving!! Aww!!!!!!!
lub lub lub lub

LOL! hehehehe! reckless driving. I thought that was a lousy scene! hehehe! glad you liked it. Smile i hope to get more readers!
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Post  flyhighstargirl on Tue Mar 24, 2009 6:45 pm

Chapter Eighteen: Harry's POV

It hasn't been easy being in this band to begin with. I had to put up with two idiots, and a guy who can't do anything but write songs. True, it's because of them that the band is famous. Danny gets the girls. Dougie gets more girls no matter what he does. Even if he has to chop his own head off, he would still look 'fit'. Tom sweeps girls off their feet because of his voice and the songs that he writes. I shook my head as I sat on the edge of my bed. Sometimes Tom writes the craziest thing it's worth to be a last-song-syndrome song! And last, and definately the least, the drummer. The member that's left in the background. I don't think fans go insane if I beat the drums. I don't sing in any of the songs, and I don't have the good looks that matches to Danny's or Dougie's. True, they say I have woman-power. But the girls attracted to me only wants one thing from me...even Izzy. She has never been there for me. She's always busy touring and when we get to talk on the phone, she's always in a hurry to hang up.

I don't know why I even mind. I don't know why I'm being insecure to begin with. I plopped my body on the bed as images of Julienne filled my mind. Her startled look when my voice raised. Her flushed cheeks. And how she looked at Danny when she stumbled her way to him. I can still remember how Danny held her. I know Danny likes her. Unfortunately for Danny, I like her too. It's true. I like Julienne Bayley. I have liked her ever since I saw her concert at the Royal Albert Hall when Izzy opened the show for the Quintet about three months ago. I fell in love with her piano, and I fell in love with her. I was so attracted to her it hurts. It's like a new window of realization has opened when she played. Realization that I don't love Izzy. I love Julienne. And I want to know her more.

Izzy and I are still together, generally speaking. But we are not really 'together'. I haven't seen her in weeks. Last time I talked to her she was 'tired' and wanted to get to bed after her show in Germany. With that, it only made me realize that my feelings are growing stronger for Julienne. I flipped when I saw her in that hoodie, in front of our building...on Danny. I scratched the back of my head at that thought.

But why did I yell at her? Simple. I don't want the other guys to know I am mad about her. It made me a little mad that she's blaming us. I can't stand her hating us so much. It hurts. But i took it a little further and just burst! I don't regret what I did though. I can never have her. She hates the band, hates our music. But I still want her. I want to break up with Izzy just because of her. But the thing is, if I can't have her in the first place.....Neither can Danny.
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Post  anika on Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:12 pm

Oh my gosh!!! Another update!!! Yeyy!!!
Don't worry. That was so not a lousy scene. It was wonderful! Razz Razz
OMD!!!! Harry's in love with her?? What's he gonna do to Danny?? Oooh. I smell a conspiracy. haha.
wooow! This is so so so so nice! I'm getting sooo excited!! Joy! Joy! Joy! Joy!
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