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Post  nicoleaika on Wed Nov 19, 2008 9:28 pm

So, yeah, I've been making fanfics inspired by mcfly since 2006... and here's one of it.. ok, the characters are:

Danny- a rich guy, but a very nice guy
Leah- Danny's girl, a girl who has a simple life but has a mysterious secret
Tom- Danny's best friend, supportive
Harry- I will describe him as the story flows
Dougie- Leah's soon to be best friend (just follow the story and you'll understand)
Kelly- Leah's best friend, she's not the lead girl but she got 5 colours in her hair..
note: I'm sure I'm gramatically incorrect......
and those Kelly and Leah are fictional characters...

~~ Danny's going to introduce his girl to his family when something happens... (it's hard to explain, just follow the flow)



~~~~~
Chapter 1: Readying for the new family

Danny's so excited and nervous because he's going to introduce Leah to his family...

Danny: "Dude, I'm so nervous. Do you think they will like her??"
Tom: (while eating a piece of cake) "Yes. Swear. Leah's cool, she's simple, she's nice, she loves you, you loves her, she's great.."
Danny: "No, seriously, do you think they will?"
Tom: (finished eating the cake, and turned serious) "Look, they will love her the way you love her"

Tom's compliment helped Danny to get over of being nervous.. while on Leah's apartment...

Leah: "I'm chilled. Oh my God. I don't know what to say... I'm... I'm blank.."
Kelly: "Oh, girl, relax. Just calm down. Ok.."
Leah: "Ok... I will..." (sighed) "BUT, um.. how about my looks? Do you think they will love me?"
Kelly: (while finding her phone coz it's ringing) "Yes yes, you do.." (answer the call) "Hello? Oh, Tom..."
Tom: "Hi, Kels, is Leah's ready?"
Kelly: "Yes, she does, I think... why?"
Tom: "Danny's parents were already here. They look like they expect much from Leah. They're on their best clothes"
Kelly: "OH, really? Oh my gosh, I must tell her now to really get ready. Bye" Tom: "Bye"
Kelly: "Leah, Danny's parents. They're already there."
Leah: "Oh my.. Okay, ok, calm down Leah, they will love you. Promise Leah, promise. They will love you much. Very much, they will like you Leah, just calm down, relax.."
Kelly: "Wow, is it the new thing to do to relax, talking to yourself?"
Leah: (sighed) "Nevermind it anyway. I'm ready. Let's go"

and they're ready to go...

Ok, so I will cut now because it's already late... again, I'm gramatically incorrect... swear and if you have questions, just post it..

(reason for editing:readers will surely, be, confuse... Ashley, one of her nicknames, is Leah. AshLEAH... it has a story but I don't have the time to tell it coz it's already late that day.. and now I'm still tamad to post it.. lol)


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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  jaschier on Fri Nov 21, 2008 10:42 am

hey who is ashley there in the story... she's my main character in my fan fic, im just typing on my pc, not yet finished... not kinda angry, just asking so curious..

its okay to use it, i got a friend name danny... lol.. really, (so what jasc,.. i mean its fine to use ashley)... hehe
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Post  jaschier on Fri Nov 21, 2008 10:43 am

hope we dont have the same ashley... Very Happy so excited to my fan fic, so many episodes to type...
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Fri Nov 21, 2008 6:43 pm

^Oops.. sorry... I used it because I don't know... my cousin insists (she's the one who give me the names, coz I cant think)... But I can change it now.... oops...
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Fri Nov 21, 2008 6:47 pm

Jeez, I'm one of the worst writers of fanfic ever.... What a Face
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  jaschier on Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:23 pm

no you can... its okay, i've just get a dilema in my fan fic, i cant continue here, we're got flood here, ngayon lang nag ka ilaw... so im rushing everything... dont worry if i have time i'll read it... study
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Nov 24, 2008 7:45 pm

wooh!
another fanfic! Very Happy
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:17 pm

Part 2 of Chapter 1

Kelly: "Oops, before we go, I think I must take the driver seat" (shows her key and driver's license to Leah)
Leah: "Oh... my... God!! Congrats!! But are you sure we will able to arrive there?"
Kelly: "Ha-ha-ha, that's actually...not funny" (both laughs)

Kelly drives the car while Leah on the back because "it's one of her special days." After just about 10 minutes of ride, Leah felt bad and told Kelly to stop over on a Gasoline Station.

Kelly: "What, what is..."
Leah: "Just wait here, I will...I just need to go to CR"
Kelly: "Ok..."

Silence. Kelly went out of the car because she felt something wasn't right at that time. She knocked on the door of the CR.

Kelly: (she knocked again when no one answered) "Leah?! Leah,are you there?! Leah?!" (panting) "Oh my..."
Leah: (opened the door) "Hey, Kels, I'm here. I just having a hard time. You know..."
Kelly: (exhaled) "Oh my God! You make me nervous you know."
Leah: (smiles) "Don't worry, I'm alright..."

Both of them returned to the car. While on the way, Leah falls asleep. After half an hour, someone's calling. Kelly parked the car on a side to answer the call. Leah's still asleep.

Kelly: "Hello?"
Unknown: "You know Mr. Jones?!"
Kelly: "Wait, wait, who are you??"
Unknown: "Just tell me where can I find him!"
Kelly: "Wait, first, I don't know you, second, what do you want from him?!"
Unknown: "You don't need to know who am I. But I insist I need to know where can I find him or else..."

Kelly ended the call. She's so scared. She thought that the caller has a very bad intention to Danny. She also thought that Danny has a very bad secret or plan. She walked out of the car and disappeared while Leah, was still sleeping inside the car. The atmosphere at that time was mysterious. It's dull, grey, weird, silent... While on Danny's side, anyone's getting a little impatient.

Danny: "It's weird."
Tom: "What?"
Danny: "It's weird. Leah's never late. Actually she is early, most of the times. It's like..."
Tom: "C'mon, dude, maybe she was just nervous and she wanted to get ready for it."
Danny: "No, it's still not, usual."
Danny's Mother: "Danny, where's that Leah?"
Danny: "I don't know... wait, I will call her." (Danny calls but...) "Its ringing, the phone's ringing but no one's answering..."

Back to Leah's side... Leah opens her eyes... and feels cold...

Leah: "Where am I?"

To be continue...
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  jaschier on Fri Nov 28, 2008 6:10 pm

haha i thought danny's mother or danny is the one whose calling leah, my mistake, wee, what happen to leah, abduction of mcfly's girls really happens..

next please..
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Mon Dec 01, 2008 5:34 pm

Chapter 2: Another life

Leah can't see anything, but white. She feels really cold.

Leah: "Oh my God. Where am I?"
Dougie: "The place you where meant to be"

Leah's surprised. Dougie walk a little closer to Leah.

Dougie: "So.." (holding a white notebook, and looking something inside it) "You're Leah?"
Leah: "OMG. How do you know my name? Who are you? Where am I? Am I... No way! Am I... dead?!?"
Dougie: "First question, your name's here" (showing the notebook to Leah) "Second question, I am Dougie. Third question, you're in here."
Leah: "Huh?"
Dougie: "And you guessed it.You're dead"
Leah: "I'm...I'm... I'm DEAD?! But... b-b-b-but how?!"
Dougie: "Based on this notebook, uhm... let's see... ooh, you have... a heart problem."
Leah: "Heart Problem?! No, no way. It's not gonna happen. You must be joking me. Maybe this is just a dream, ok. And you, you're just a pigment of my imagination. I mean, no, no you can't be a pigment

because I don't know you, erm... you're a little bit cute though. And, wait, OMG,if this is just a dream, I need to wake up now because Danny's waiting.Hey, you, where's the door?!"
Dougie: "There's no door because this is not an ordinary room. This is an extraordinary room!"
Leah: "Well, it's funny, haha. Now tell me how can I get out of this room."
Dougie: "Why you want to go?"
Leah: "Because someone's still waiting for me."
Dougie: "Wow.sweet... But look, face it. You're dead. Your heart fails."
Leah: "But I still can't understand it why my heart fails. FYI I'm just 21 years old and..."
Dougie: "Wait! We're the same, I'm 21 too."
Leah: "...and my heart's... how?"
Dougie: "It must be... kind of... hmm... hereditary I think."
Leah: "Ha?! But no one from my family has heart disease, neither I."
Dougie: "I don't know, don't ask me...Hmm... maybe someone from your family that you really don't know..."
Leah: "Oh c'mon, like who??" (suddenly, Leah became sad... and remembered a thing..) "like my mother..."
Dougie: "What's up with your mother?"
Leah: "She died when she gave birth... to me..."
Dougie: "Oooohh... WAIT! Maybe she's the one who have heart disease and she passed it on to you!"
Leah: "I don't know... maybe..." (sobs)
Dougie: "Oh, ok, why are you crying?"
Leah: (still crying) "I hate destiny's timing. Look, my mother gave birth to me but destiny decided to kill her before we hang up with each other. And now, I died because minutes later, I'm going to be the

happiest girl in the world..."
Dougie: "Ok, I'm not good in giving advice, mostly to girls... but why not trying to tell the one who will make you the happiest girl in the world about this?"
Leah: "But how, by haunting him?! No, I will not.. and beside, you said that I just face it, face that I'm dead."
Dougie: "I told you I'm not good in giving advice or anything... (sighs) but... c'mon, let's go"
Leah: "Where are we going?"
Dougie: "We're going to find some way to tell him the truth"
Leah: "Are you sure?"
Dougie: "Yeah... you don't like?"
Leah: (wiping her tears and smiles) "No, no, I mean, yes, let's go..."

And they went out of the room. Outside the room's another room, then another room, then another room, then another room..... until they reach the room with other colors, aside from white.

Leah: "Where are we?"
Dougie: "The place where you died"
Leah: "Hmm... wait, it's... it's my car. Wait a minute, where's Kelly?"
Dougie: "Who's Kelly?"
Leah: "My best friend..." (thinks deeply) "No way, don't tell me she left me when she knew I'm dead?!"
Dougie: "Maybe not." (shows Kelly's phone to Leah) "Whose phone is this?"
Leah: "It was Kels. But she never left her cellphone... OMG, what if something also happened to her?!"
Dougie: "Someone called her. Unknown caller. And the caller sent her messages too. It was like... threatening her"
Leah: (reads the messages) "Tell me where can I find Mr. Jones or else I will kill you..." (stops) "Oh my God."
Dougie: "Mr. Jones? Who's Jones?"
Leah: "Danny..."
Dougie: "Who's Danny?"
Leah: "The guy who will make my life happier than ever... by the way, did you see any other phone?"
Dougie: "Like this?" (shows Leah's phone)
Leah: "Yeah! Let's see... the caller called me too but I wasn't able to answer the call because I'm already dead... what does he wants from Danny?"
Dougie: "It seems like, you got more things to say to that Danny when we see him."
Leah: "Hmm... wait, is my body's still..."
Dougie: "No... no body in sight.."
Leah: "I didn't ask. Why you bring me here?"
Dougie: "To give you more clues on what happened to the world you left."

Leah wants to say something to Dougie but something caught her attention. A guy riding on a Bike smiles and greets her and Dougie with "Hello!"

Leah: "Tell me, living can still see us?"
Dougie: "No. Why he..." (both of them stares on each other)
Leah and Dougie: "He can see us!"
Leah: "Maybe he can help me to tell Danny the truth!"
Dougie: "YEAH!"
Leah: "Maybe he can help me to tell Kelly the truth!"
Dougie: "YEAH!"
Leah: "And maybe he can help me to find my body!"
Dougie: "Yeah! Only if we're able to talk to him..."
Leah: "What, we can't talk to him?"
Dougie: "He rides on a bike and now he's getting away"
Leah: "Oh... HEY!! WAIT!! YOU!!" (while running) "guy who rides on a bike!! WAIT!!!"

And they keep on running until they reach the guy. The guy stops and parks his bike on a "bakanteng lote"

Guy: "What do you want?"
Leah: "I need you"
Guy: "What?"
Dougie: "Look, you can see us, right?"
Guy: "Of course I can see... don't tell me both of you were dead..."
Leah: "Yeah..."
Guy: "Oh my God! Jesus Christ! Help me.."
Dougie: "We're not going to hurt you... she just need your help because you can see her, and me.."
Guy: "Still,you're dead..."
Leah: "Please, I will just tell someone about my dead because he didn't know it yet and no one knows I'm dead..."
Guy: "Who's that someone?"
Leah: "Someone who's really special to me."
Guy: (sigh) "But everyone will think I'm crazy..."
Dougie: "Don't worry, we will help you about it."
Leah: "Please help me..."
Guy: (thinks... and breaths deeply) "Ok..."
Leah: "Thank you!! So, erm... wait, Dougie, how are we going to start?"
Dougie: "Umm... hey, by the way, I'm Dougie, and she's Leah."
Guy: "I'm Harry."
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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:53 pm

wow, haha, this is weird, but i like it!!!
keep em coming!!
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Post  Kerstien on Mon Dec 01, 2008 10:55 pm

I was thinking of Dougie as San Pedro or something like that! laugh together
cool fic though! Approve!
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Post  jaschier on Tue Dec 02, 2008 6:03 pm

hahahaha this fan fic really makes me laugh, because think of it with this guy... Hahaha

look at his picture, after life this guy will be the one who will talk or investigate with you (to have knowledge for what happen to the world you left or the world Sleep )


ok guys, if iwhere you, i'll sucide myself to, kill yourself now!!! haha lol! (oops i forgot its a fan fic)

dougie really kills me at laughing, bad boy gone good!!! haha...

nice one, i like it, so hilarious when i think dougie will do that Hahaha man, its to good to be different. Approve!

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Post  kaisthelimit on Tue Dec 02, 2008 6:32 pm

haha yeah, bad boy gone good 8P
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Post  Kerstien on Tue Dec 02, 2008 7:41 pm

^OH YEAH!
Imagine Dougie with wings...
laugh together
soooo cute!
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Post  jaschier on Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:49 am

haha, i remember it again, your guardian is half evil and an angel, how's that!! Razz
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Post  nicoleaika on Thu Dec 04, 2008 5:30 pm

Yeah, I will kill myself too if I'm going to meet Dougie after life... lol... yet you're right, it's just a fanfic..
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Post  McFly(nick) on Fri Dec 05, 2008 8:00 pm

nice fanfic.. is it over??? or to be continued??? cmon.. tell me pls.. hehehe ^_^ Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:05 pm

to be continue... I just unfortunately didn't save the next chapter and I accidentally delete it.. Shocked But I'm currently typing the next chapter... thanks for reading it ^_^
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Post  McFly(nick) on Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:57 pm

i just wanna know if leah is really going to be dead.. and nice.. the biker is harry.. XD

hilarious and dramatic.. hahaa lol! lol! lol!
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Dec 06, 2008 11:21 pm

Chapter 3: It's Danny

The next day...
Danny still can't believe that Leah isn't able to make it. He thinks of some reasons why Leah didn't come while riding on a yatch.

Danny: "Do you think why?"
Tom: "What why? Why Leah didn't come?"
Danny: "Yeah..."
Tom: "Maybe there's an emergency or something. Or she backs up or... she doesn't like you anymore."
Danny: "I don't think so..."
Tom: "But she didn't even answer her phone. Or email you or didn't do anything to tell you sorry."
Danny: "I don't know... but I feel she still loves me... maybe there's something... something bad happened to her..."
Tom: "Like what? Like an accident?"
Danny: "Maybe... I hope not."
Tom: (sighs) "C'mon, just try to call her again... maybe she isn't feeling well because she isn't able to come..."
Danny: "Well... hmm.... by the way, about the mum's new guard.."
Tom: "I don't want to help but I found one. Actually the new guard's here to meet you personally."
Danny: "Oh, where?"

And Harry showed up. Oh, and Leah and Dougie are not there.

Harry: "Hi sir, I'm Harry, your mother's new bodyguard."
Danny: "Oh, Harry... Danny. Danny Jones" (shake hands with Harry)
Tom: "Dude, you know I really don't like to help... don't forget. And gotta go."
Danny: "WAIT! The Yatch's in the middle of nowhere."
Tom: "Oops. Sorry. I'm going to tell the captain to 'park'" (laughs)

Tom leaves and talks to the captain.

Harry: "So, can I ask you sir..."
Danny: "Just call me Danny"
Harry: "Oh, ok, Danny... why your mother look for a bodyguard? Is there a threat or something?"
Danny: "I don't know. I think it's something about my dad."
Harry: "Sir, I mean, Danny, not that I want to break in on your family's personal life but, what's up with your dad?"
Danny: "My dad.."
Harry: "AHH!!!" (Dougie shouts to Harry's ear)

Danny looked to Harry surprisingly.

Danny: "What happened to you? Are you alright?"
Harry: "Someone... wait sir.. I mean Danny"

Harry went to a room inside the yatch

Harry: "Ok, why you surprised me?"
Dougie: "What, I just want to hang out with you! Leah's still sleeping and I'm bored that's why I'm here!" (laughs) "Don't you love ghost company?"
Harry: "Don't you break anything inside this yatch because I'm newly employed as the owner's bodyguard."
Dougie: "Oh, that guy outside?" (laughs) "For me, he doesn't need bodyguard! What a funny man" (laughs)
Harry: "Are you crazy?! I didn't say that he's the one I'm going to guard. His mother!"
Dougie: "Oh, ok... I thought that guy..." (laughs)
Harry: "Remember that I didn't own this yatch. And please behave."
Dougie: "It doesn't matter if I didn't behave because they'll not able to hear me."
Harry: (while opening the door) "But they will able to hear me."

Harry was so surprised to see Tom and Danny.

Tom: "You are talking to who?"
Harry: "Huh? Me?"
Danny: "Yes, we hear you talking"
Tom: "Not that we didn't respect your privacy, it was just the 'his mother!' phrase caught our attention."
Harry: "Aaaahh.... ummm.... it's my friend. We're talking about his another friend's mother." (smiles) "I thought you will go....?"
Tom: "Oh, yeah, last time I will go... but now I think there must something you need to tell us"

While Harry's talking to Danny and Tom, Dougie went back to the place where Leah's meant to be. Yes, it's like their home.

Dougie: "LEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!"
Leah: "OH MY GOD! I'M GOING TO BE LATE!"
Dougie: "Ooohh, you're not going to be late. You're dead." (smiles)
Leah: "Then why you wake me up?!"
Dougie: "Oh, sorry, Harry just got a job. And it's being a body guard."
Leah: "To whom?"
Dougie: (sighs) "Leah... it's..."
Leah: "Who?"
Dougie: "I DON'T KNOW!"(laughs)
Leah: "Well, hahaha, very funny... Where is he?"
Dougie: "Who?"
Leah: "Harry"
Dougie: "On a yatch"
Leah: "YATCH?! Harry's on a Yatch?! Last time he was just riding on a bicycle and now on a yatch?!"
Dougie: "Harry didn't own the yatch. I will die because of super shock if so. Oh, I forgot I'm already dead.."
Leah: "You mention... I didn't ask you... how are you die?"
Dougie: "Me??? (Dougie, surprisingly become serious) "A guy accidentally killed me and my mother... It was so surprising.. because we're just watching something then that guy, I don't know! He was like he

gone crazy!"
Leah: "Oh... sorry... and condolence..."
Dougie: "It's ok... by the way,you got a mission..let's go"
Leah: "You know what, what if we solve our own problems... you know... we will help each other, together with Harry, on telling Danny that I'm dead, if I'm really dead... and we will help each other too on

finding the guy who killed you and your mother..."
Dougie: "But why?"
Leah: "Just take it as a... gift"
Dougie: "thanks" (smiles)
Leah: "No prob... let's go"

Dougie and Leah went to the yatch...

Leah: "Wow, this yatch is cool... lucky Harry..."
Dougie: "Ooh, that's the guy who owned this yatch..."

Leah saw Danny... and she can't believe it... she finally saw him again. The guy who will make her life happier than ever.

Leah: (whispering) "Danny..."
Dougie: "Huh? Who?"
Leah: "Oh my God..." (cries..) "Danny..."
Dougie: "Oh my goodness... don't tell me..."
Leah: "He's Danny... the guy who will make my life happier..."
Harry: "Sir.. I mean Danny... your Mom's (see Leah and Dougie) OH MY!"
Danny: "Huh? What happened to my mom?"
Harry: "Huh? I mean... I forgot something inside.. wait.."

Harry went inside the room, again, this time, with Leah and Dougie...

Harry: "You both shocked me... You're on the front of my boss."
Leah: (wiping her tears) "Danny's your boss?!"
Harry: "Wait, is he your boyfriend?"
Leah: "Yes... it's Danny"
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  McFly(nick) on Sun Dec 07, 2008 9:22 am

weeeeeeeeeeeeeee...

poor leah.. she's face to face with danny but dabby cant see her cause shes actually dead.. is this a dream or something?? hhehehe Razz Razz Razz Razz
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Post  nicoleaika on Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:04 am

McFly(nick) wrote:weeeeeeeeeeeeeee...

poor leah.. she's face to face with danny but dabby cant see her cause shes actually dead.. is this a dream or something?? hhehehe Razz Razz Razz Razz

yeah... sometimes I want to change the story and let her live.. but it's boring if so.. lol.... if she's still alive she will not meet Dougie... lol!
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Post  McFly(nick) on Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:31 am

soooo.. leah is going to be with dougie in heaven??? kewl... hahaha

but poor danny.. hahaha

and harry has 3rd eye.. freaky.. hahaha Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool
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Post  nicoleaika on Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:49 am

McFly(nick) wrote:soooo.. leah is going to be with dougie in heaven??? kewl... hahaha

but poor danny.. hahaha

and harry has 3rd eye.. freaky.. hahaha Cool Cool Cool Cool Cool

yeah.. freaky like in Ghosthunting with McFLY where they said that Harry seen one...
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