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Post  Kerstien on Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:27 pm

TITLE:Do Ya
AUTHOR: Kerstien!
CHARACTERS: Ashley and Danny
DISCLAIMER: I don't know Danny or the rest of McFLY. I just own Ashley.
SUMMARY: How could I be so blind? bear with me, I suck!


I was sitting alone on a bench in the park. It was a cold night.
"What happened?" someone from behind me asked.
I wiped my tears quickly.
"Nothing" I replied.
I turned around and saw Danny, my bestfriend, with a concerned look on his face.
"He didn't show up, did he?" he sat beside me.
I didn't say anything. I hugged him and cried my heart out.
"Aww, c'mon Ash," he hugged me back "it's not like he's the only guy left in this planet."

I stopped crying now. Danny's right. I shouldn't cry. There are a lot of guys out there, guys who are sane.
"I'm sorry Danny, you're shirt's a bit wet now." I sniffed.
"It's alright. At least I helped somehow," he handed me a handkerchief "here."
"Thanks.."
He smiled. Then, it hit me.

Do I love him, more than a friend?
After all, he's always there for me. He knows every little thing about me and we've been inseparable since we were kids.
How could I be so blind?! The right guy is beside me and has always been there. How stupid!

"Ashley," he spoke.
I just realized, it's so beautiful when he says my name. It's perfect.
I looked at him and our eyes met.
As I closed my eyes, I felt his lips touching mine.

It was my first kiss.

Suddenly, fireworks filled the air and we watched them as they were merrily dancing in the sky.
"Merry Christmas.." he smirked.
"Merry Christmas." I said.

We gave each other a tight hug and went home to celebrate Christmas with our families.

-Fin-


Sorry, if it's not that good. I suck at making fics...
but I'm trying my best to improve..
Merry Christmas!


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Post  anika on Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:30 pm

You don't suck. This was soo sweet!! hahaha. I loved it. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
Danny's so sweet!! He was there for the girl! Aw.... It totally melted my heart!!! I love you I love you I love you
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Post  Kerstien on Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:32 pm

Awww, thanks..
It's weird making a Danny fic. I've always wanted him to be my brother! Laughing
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Post  anika on Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:35 pm

Kerstien wrote:Awww, thanks..
It's weird making a Danny fic. I've always wanted him to be my brother! Laughing

haha. Really? Well, he does look pretty sweet! And the goofy smile just wants to make you laugh. LOL. I know he'd make a good brother. lol! lol!
AW... Danny as a brother! How cuutee!!! I love you I love you
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Post  Kerstien on Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:37 pm

I say that every day.. Razz Razz Razz
he's my long lost brother!
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:18 pm

maganda talaga kung ang pagiibigan ng 2 tao ay nagsisimula sa friendship... cute...

Danny!!!!

BTW,I'm curious, who's the one who didn't show up?
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:05 am

walang name eh! XD
pero siya sana yung date ni Ashley...
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Post  anika on Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:09 am

Kerstien wrote:I say that every day.. Razz Razz Razz
he's my long lost brother!

LOL. Really?? hahaha. He'd be sweet!! Anyone would definitely want him. Music Music Music
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Post  McFly(nick) on Sun Dec 21, 2008 9:58 am

yeah.. nice FIC.. BTW.. i was very shocked..when i went to thr robinsons.. i SAW A HURLEY T-SHIRT!!!!! woooooooooooooooooooo!!! i bought 3 T-Shirts! white blue and black!.. GO HURLEY!!!
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Post  jaschier on Sun Dec 21, 2008 4:32 pm

Razz Approve!


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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:39 pm

just read this.
awww it was so sweet, danny's really sweet.

PS
no you dont suck.
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Post  nicoleaika on Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:58 pm

KAI wrote:just read this.
awww it was so sweet, danny's really sweet.

PS
no you dont suck.

Second the motion ^_^
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Post  Kerstien on Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:04 pm

thanks guys!
you're making it all better..I'll try improving my skills!
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Post  jaschier on Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:21 pm



hey i like it, its siple but cute... Razz
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Post  Kerstien on Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:22 pm

Thanks..
5 minutes ko lang kasi ginawa to kasi bored talaga, so it's not that good.
I'mma post a fanfic siguro, if I'm contented na with what I wrote.
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Post  nicoleaika on Tue Dec 23, 2008 9:32 pm

Kerstien wrote:Thanks..
5 minutes ko lang kasi ginawa to kasi bored talaga, so it's not that good.
I'mma post a fanfic siguro, if I'm contented na with what I wrote.

5 mins?!?! Wow!
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:27 pm

ganda naman ah....you're good at one-shots....make some more... cheers
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Post  Kerstien on Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:47 pm

nicoleaika wrote:
Kerstien wrote:Thanks..
5 minutes ko lang kasi ginawa to kasi bored talaga, so it's not that good.
I'mma post a fanfic siguro, if I'm contented na with what I wrote.

5 mins?!?! Wow!

well it was a maximum of 10 minutes..XD
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Post  Kerstien on Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:49 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:ganda naman ah....you're good at one-shots....make some more... cheers
I'm not that good at fics right? XD
'cause I get bored and I right another one, then another one! I never finish my fics! That's why I write one shots.
Post ka rin kaya! Very Happy You make fics naman eh!
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:48 pm

Kerstien wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:ganda naman ah....you're good at one-shots....make some more... cheers
I'm not that good at fics right? XD
'cause I get bored and I right another one, then another one! I never finish my fics! That's why I write one shots.
Post ka rin kaya! Very Happy You make fics naman eh!

nagpopost na nga...'di ko lang alam kung ano ang plot basta royal thingy xa...pero modern..basta...anyways...i'm really comfortable speaking in tagalog here...i don't know why but i don't like speaking tagalog at JB forums though...LOL lol!
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Post  Kerstien on Thu Dec 25, 2008 7:59 am

sshhh...LOL!
OP na ako dun eh..stop talking about that place na, it's really pretty comfy here! XD
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Dec 27, 2008 11:31 am

Kerstien wrote:sshhh...LOL!
OP na ako dun eh..stop talking about that place na, it's really pretty comfy here! XD

ssssshhhhh....don't speak negative things around here about JB....i think lia's registered in this forums... lol! ...pero pumupunta pa rin ako sa JB forums in fairness....
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:11 pm

Kerstien wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:
Kerstien wrote:Thanks..
5 minutes ko lang kasi ginawa to kasi bored talaga, so it's not that good.
I'mma post a fanfic siguro, if I'm contented na with what I wrote.

5 mins?!?! Wow!

well it was a maximum of 10 minutes..XD

ows?? Approve!
pero kahit na, ako nga isang chapter inaabot ng mga 1 hour... XD
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Dec 28, 2008 8:11 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
Kerstien wrote:sshhh...LOL!
OP na ako dun eh..stop talking about that place na, it's really pretty comfy here! XD

ssssshhhhh....don't speak negative things around here about JB....i think lia's registered in this forums... lol! ...pero pumupunta pa rin ako sa JB forums in fairness....

pumupunta rin naman ako eh! Moderator kaya ako so I have to do my job! XD
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sun Dec 28, 2008 8:41 pm

Kerstien wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
Kerstien wrote:sshhh...LOL!
OP na ako dun eh..stop talking about that place na, it's really pretty comfy here! XD

ssssshhhhh....don't speak negative things around here about JB....i think lia's registered in this forums... lol! ...pero pumupunta pa rin ako sa JB forums in fairness....

pumupunta rin naman ako eh! Moderator kaya ako so I have to do my job! XD

good thing i didn't applied for moderator thing....i get tired sometimes... Cool
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