My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

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Post  jaschier on Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:19 pm

MY MCFLY: MY GIRL-GIRL NEXT DOOR

BY: KENNETH CHRISTOPHER A.K.A. "JASCHIER"




CHARACTER: ASHLEY, TOM, DANNY, HARRY and DOUGIE
DISCLAIMER: I'm just a mcfly lad fan aspiring to be like them and to be one of them and having not enough idea who really mcfly's are. So I give Danny, Harry, Tom and Dougie other faces that you've not seen before. However, still i used some of their natural characteristics that i already knew to maintain their real identity.

CHAPTER 1: A FALLEN ANGEL

McFly became the greatest band in the world, where all countries in the world knows their amazing talent and incomparable charming appeals. Their musics never fails to become no. 1 in various charts all over the world and what makes it more stunning is that its hard to fades.

McFly made incredible records in music industry, having the greatest numbered of fan in the world
and in receiving various diamond awards.

McFly then is invincible, but in just a snap of a finger McFly disappeared in music industry. Its been a weeks that they didn't show themselves since their last and biggest concert tour all over the UK.

There is just something wrong that happened with the 4 boys, and numbered of people who are part of the incident pretend that they didn't knew something like an innocent blind man.

Why? What happen? What is the reason behind the incident? What will happen now to Danny, Harry, Tom, and Dougie? Is this the end of McFly? or its just another start of their exciting life?




And this is her story...

April 4, 2009...

Exactly 1 month and 4 days after Mcfly biggest concert in London coincidently singing emotionally and numbly the- “the last song,” a storm passed by in Northern UK…

Tit-tinth tit-tinth tit-tinth tit-tinth tit-tinth… it’s the wrists watch… he stopped the alarm and looked at the wrist watch…

"Hugh, it’s already 7:30 am," he said and still felt so dizzy. From his bed he can heard Dougie snorting at the next room. He went down stairs to pee and refresh himself in the comfort room.

After that, he went out in the house and he stretched his arms upward trying to reach the gray sky.
“Oh, you are already awaken Tom,” said Harry, while having his hot chocolate on a mug.

Sniff sniff... hmmm... he breathed deeply and said, it still gloomy and cold out here, do you want to get warm up in the beach?

“Okay, thats new routine to me, lets go.” He grinned.

And they started in stirring up their body; running and jogging near by the beach. They got 20,30 up to 40 push ups and curl ups. Seemed, their body is getting hotter than the cold morning day, but Tom still not satisfied so he jogged more over the beach. Harry was just getting hung on and panted.

(“While me,” I was unconsciously lying on the shore, having no idea what will happen to me.. until then...)

“Wait Tom, can we keep pacing off for a while,” trying to catch his breath.

“Oh, thats new to me Harry,”still jogging in place.

“No, my body is just starting to give up here, because its been an hour that I'm warming since I woke up until you joined with me.” Explained by Harry.

"No, what I mean over there! look at it, its something strange over there! I know that the sand is white but not as white over there!" Tom said eagerly.

"What? What is it?" Harry tiredly said.

“Just come on.” He pulled Harry.

“Where the heck they are going?” He said on his mind while jogging in the woods.

Hugghhh hughh... Harry's jaw's were dropped, and tried to rubbed his eyes. “Oh no! A dead girl over here!” He said anxiously.

Tom tried to find my pulse, “no, she's not, she's still alive and can you please calm down.” He tried to fixed me, attempting to carry my body.

“Hey! What happen here?” and who is that girl?" Danny's asked .

“We don't know, but wait we cannot just stand up here and just stare at her while she's helpless lying on the sand, why don't you two try to help me carry her up to the house.” Tom's replied.

Tom and Harry carried me, and little did I know that the two was worried at me, but Danny doubted at me... but still thanks to God.

When we reached their house they putted me on a couch in the living room. They fixed my body and observed my status.

“Now what are we going to her now, don't tell me that we're going to keep her in this house.” freakishly said by Danny.

“Danny, lets just wait her to become conscious over there. Okay here's what you are going to do, Danny open all the curtains and windows, Harry, give me some clean towels and blanket over the cabinet.”Danny's asked.

Harry got some and gave it to Tom. Tom wiped my cold body and soggy dress that soaked in salted sea, and covered me with the blanket as the final touch to neutral my temperature.

“Ok, I think we're done here, all we really need to do now is to wait her to be awake there.” Harry said.

“I don't want to stay here, I'll just wait outside.” Seriously said by Danny. He opened the door and went outside. Tom tried to asked him why but he already closed the door.

Sniff sniff... “Ooh what's up with here its too early to get busy.” He said, while rubbing gently his eyes.

Until... Dougie yelled up...

Waahhhh...! thats... thats aahh...

“Sshhhh … will you keep quite, can't you see now that someone is resting over here.” Tom's whispered.

“I know, but who is that girl?” Dougie asked and he was shocked.

“Its a long story, but in short we found her helpless and unconsciously in the beach and we help her and carried over here with Danny.” Tom's replied.

“Don't worry we will talked about it in the kitchen, lets have some breakfast first, cause my stomach is grumbling now, we can check her later.” Harry said.

“You two can go first I'm not yet hungry, I'll just watched her over here.” Tom said.

The two went over the kitchen and ate their foods, while Tom got a chair and sited in front of me and stared on my face. He looked at me closely and slowly putted his fingers on my face, then he putted off the hairs on my face to saw me clearly. Tom smiled like she was stunned... until then Harry caught him, inclining on the kitchen...

“Tom, are you sure your not hungry?” Harry asked him again.

Tom was surprised and stirred up.

Harry looked at him differently, he raised his right eye brow, thinking that something suspicious thing was happening. Harry smiled at Tom waiting on his reply.

“Nothing, nothing, I was just fixing her hair out of her face.” Nervously said by Tom. He bit his nails, and thinking that Harry was acting like crazy. “What's up with him?” Said from his mind.

“Ok!” Harry's replied, he nodded his head as a sign of understanding; he smiled and still looking at him suspiciously.

When Harry get back, Tom breathed deeply. "Feuwh..." Thats a relief from him.

After Dougie and Harry ate their breakfast, They joined Tom to checked my condition. Dougie looked closer at me and said, “Tom, Harry look at her, I think she's beautiful.”

Harry laughed, “I think that is the effect of not seeing some hot chicks for a month.”

“Nope, Dougie's got a point, I noticed her too; for me, she's like an angel who fell from heaven.”
Tom's insist earnestly. He smiled.

“I hope so, like an angel who will help us.” Continued by Harry.

As the time passed by, the sun started in shinning above the sky, and I felt the heat on my cheeks. My senses are getting conscious and I started to open my eyes and I saw three guys staring at me.

“Are you okay?” Asked by the blonde one, “Can you here me?” Asked by the other guy whose hair was black. I felt so wick and tired and my head was a little bit aching so its hard for me to answered them. I also felt confused with their British accent.

“Hi, I'm Tom, Tom Fletcher," "I'm Harry Judd and I'm Dougie Poynter.” Said by the three lads.

The door opened and another guy came on looking at me seriously.

“And he is Danny, Danny Jones, one of the person who assisted us in carrying you over here, he just went outside while you are unconsciously resting in the couch” Tom explained.

“And who are you?” Danny asked seriously.

"Ohh... me?" Hugh hugh I looked over myself slowly and said, "I don't know... I can't remember... I can't remember anything... I don't know who I am..."


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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  anika on Sun Dec 21, 2008 7:20 pm

Oh my gosh!! hahaha. Like I said, I would support you. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
Love it! haha. Is the girl really an angel? LOL.
I had fun you know. I like the plot. It's pretty cool.
Update, okay? I'll be waiting!
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Post  nicoleaika on Sun Dec 21, 2008 7:46 pm

what a coincidence! I just posted the chap 7 of my fic and... basta! OMG!! Baka related sila XD XD XD Just Kidding, just kidding..
btw, next chap pls!! WEEE!!

Harry laughed “I think that is the effect of not seeing some hot chicks for a month.”

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Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Dec 21, 2008 9:40 pm

wooh new fic!
Very Happy
i love the introduction dude, its exciting!
its kind confusing but i like it!
danny's so snobbish.
and yea, is she really an angel? hahahaha Wink

PS
tom was really sweet ya know Very Happy
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Post  anika on Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:33 am

OMD. I just saw this when I clicked on Home. It's your birthday pala? haha.
Happy Birthday!!!!!!
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Post  jaschier on Mon Dec 22, 2008 1:32 pm

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i forgot to tell, nakakahiya, di ko pa yan na edit kagabi, si dad kasi nagmamadali, nung vinisit ko ung microsoft office ko, shicks, my mga typographical error, what a shame sige edit ko lang ulit... Embarassed HIHIHI.....
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Post  jaschier on Mon Dec 22, 2008 1:43 pm

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ok im finish, sorry guys.... thanks guys for reading my fic... ahmm i think the next chapter, nasa ISA KONG USB, try ko lang ipa ayos kay coz' ko, then i'll post it immidiately.... THANKS ULIT GUYS!!!!!!!! YOU JUST MADE MY BIRTHDAY TODAY SO HAPPY Razz
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Post  nicoleaika on Mon Dec 22, 2008 1:51 pm

yeah, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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Post  jaschier on Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:08 pm

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^^^^^^^^^^THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:35 pm

soory i forgot to greet you, kanina pa kita nabbump sa mga topics, well:

HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
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Post  jaschier on Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:13 pm

Chapter 2: My Knights; My name is ASHLEY


I don’t know who I am…

“What?” It’s all their reactions. They were all shocked, but honestly I really don’t have any idea who I am or how did I go up here. I have lots of Questions in my head but I’m confused of what is happening. Tom drew near to me and comforted me and asked “Are you sure that you don’t know who you are or you can’t remember anything? To your friends or families?” he confirmed.

I looked at him slowly and nodded but I’m a little bit shy to look on him because he stared deeply and worried at me.

“I think she got an anemia.” Dougie said

Harry poked his head, “Ouch!” he reacted, and he amended him that, “Its amnesia not anemia” concluded by Harry.

“You don’t have to do that.” Dougie was hurt.

“Stop that!” Danny’s yelled. “You!” he pointed at me, “Stop those alibis! I am not convince with that excuses, I know you are just pretending, I know what you meant here, I know you want us, I know you want us to find and I know that you knew who we are, its impossible for a girl like you would not know us.” He exclaimed.

I cannot say anything to him; I cannot understand what he is saying to me in that time. Because of ashamed I just bowed my heads and tears in my eyes dripped over my knees.

Then, suddenly the atmosphere became quite… Danny paused for a while and panted… until then…


Tom stood up and pulled Danny in the kitchen. “What is your problem? I can’t believe you could say that to her, what is your basis? Can’t you see her? She looked so helpless; would you not pity her?” Tom’s exclaimed.

“What is my problem? Tom, I thought you are genius. I know she is just playing there, I can feel it.” Danny’s explained.

“What if she is telling the truth that she really lost her memory?” Tom’s replied. “And oh yeah, will you stop talking that you are blaming her, it’s unjust to judge her, I can I assure to you that she don’t have nothing to do in what we are now.” He added.

Harry joined in the argumentation of the two and said “Hey, both of you stop it; this thing might just end for nothing, so calm down.”

“Hmpf… say what you want to say but I still don’t have trust with that girl,” insisted by Danny. “I’m out of here.” He added. Danny went outside he need space and peaceful mind to think. Harry tapped Tom’s shoulder and said “Lets just understand him for a while, he will understand us soon.”

While Tom and Harry are in the kitchen, Dougie sat down beside me and he tried to comfort me, then, he gave me a white handkerchief. I looked at him and he looked so sad for me. I thank him. Then I used the handkerchief to wipe my tears.

In that moment, I really appreciate Tom, Harry, and Dougie for treating me so well but I’m a little bit confounded with Danny for being so cold to me.

Tom went over me and asked for apologize for Danny’s behavior and he said that, “He was not even like that before,” maybe he just have a problem.

But I refused and said “No, I should be the one who should ask for an apologize, you’ve quarreled because of me, and I felt like I’m a big burden here”

“No,” insisted by Tom. “Just forget what he said to you and don’t even think that way, you need our help and we will help you to bring back your memory, but before that I think you need to eat first cause I know you are hungry now, and after that you need to change your clothes cause you might get cold with that dress.”

Tom was even right in that time, I’m so hungry and I need to get change.

Then, we went in the kitchen. Harry brought some foods and fruits from the refrigerator and served on the dinning table. I can’t determine the foods that Harry served on me but they looked so yummy. Because of my hunger I quickly dipped the spoon on the plates with mouth watering foods and putted them on my plate and ate them on haste. The foods really taste so good; I can’t help it to eat them sparingly.

But little did I know, I didn’t realize that Tom, Harry and Dougie were surprised on me, that I’m really hungry… until then…

“You really like my foods eh? I’m the one who cooked that.” said Harry. Then he laughs softly. Tom and Dougie smiled at me.

I looked at them gently I saw their reactions and I started on blushing and bit my lips. It was so shameful for me, so I suddenly stopped in eating and slowly bowed my head. The boys start on laughing out loud.

Dougie sat down beside me and smiled like a cute puppy and said “Can I join you, because it’s like I’m starving in the way you eat.”

“Me too!” both said by Tom and Harry.

So they joined me and started in eating so I could be motivated to finish my foods that Harry served, but, still it’s hard for me to finish my foods because they were staring at me and what’s up with their smile? It makes me felt so insecure.

“What’s the matter? Go on, don’t be shy, eat now your food, and look at me, yum yum yum.” Tom said acting like a kid.

I smiled and laughed softly, because of that a confident was boosted up with me to finish the food.

And then we really start in eating properly…

After we ate the foods they gave me a tooth brush, I was surprised, and so I could brush my teeth. Then after that they guided me up stairs and showed to me their bathroom and Tom said “this is the room where you’ll going to clean yourself. Here is the bathtub and your bathrobe you use this after you clean yourself”

“Ok go on.” Harry said and opened the shower. Because of my being bashful, I’m shy to spit it out. So, I just stood still and started on biting my fore finger.

“Why? What the matter? Did you forget how to take a bath?” Dougie asked. “Ok I’ll just help you to wash yourself.” He added.

“No,” Tom hit him. “Ouch!” Dougie was hurt again.

“Ok I’ll get it, she want us now to leave here; ok we will just wait you outside this door.” Harry said.

“No,” I expressed

“You don’t want us to leave you here?” Dougie asked.

“No I just don’t have any dress to wear for my change.” I explained.

Ahhh… they got it…

They whispered each other and Harry said “I don’t have any underwear or brassiere of a girl.” “Of course you don’t have.” Tom’s replied.

“I know this is a little bit awkward but we don’t have any option; a boxer will do, I’ll just give her my unused boxers.” Dougie suggested.

“You got a point; ok I’ll just give her my unused shorts.” Tom said.

“That’s right and my unused shirts too.” Harry concluded.

“Ok, but how about the brassiere.” Tom asked

“Don’t worry I’ll handle that, I remember that there are some presents that we received from our fans and they were in the basement, I know there’s a brassiere there.” Dougie said.

“Ok!” Harry and Tom looked on him weirdly.

“Ok just wait up here and we will just get the things that you’ll be needed to wear.” I nodded.

After a minute, they got back and I wonder what’s up with the one Dougie’s holding.

“Ok this will be your underwear that you’ll be use, it’s a boxer and its nice cause it’s pink and its like, it’s also for the girls like you,” explained by Dougie.

“This will be your short, I found it in my closet and I think I cannot wear them anymore,” showed by Tom.

“And this will be your shirt its one of my favorite but they don’t fit on me anymore so you can have it,” Generously said by Harry.

I have no any options so I got it from them and hung in on metallic poles.

“Ok I think we will just wait you down stairs; and take care because you might slip on the floor,” sweetly said by Tom with his charming smile.

I bowed them with thanks and they went out and closed the door. I started too undressed myself and suddenly the door opened and I started to screamed.

“Ow, ow, I’m sorry I forgot to knock, I just forgot my head band here.” Panicky said by Dougie.

“What on earth you think you were doing Dougie.” Harry’s yelled.

Then they pulled him out and apologized for the incident. Then, they close the door again. Good thing I covered immediately covered my body, but I felt so sorry for Dougie, because it’s like he didn’t meant to do that and it’s my fault also because I didn’t lock the door. So what I did first is to lock the door and then I continued to strip myself and putted my used things on a basket. I sat down in the bathtub and stretched my legs. In that time I can feel the warm of the water on my skin and the silence and the fragrance of the atmosphere. I closed my eyes and meditated on my inner feelings and think what all happen to me.

I realize the goodness of Tom, Harry and Dougie to me; I’m so glad for Tom in the time he helped me in the beach, defended me against Danny and comforted me in my emotions and so with Harry and Dougie. I felt so safe and comfortable with the three, I really appreciate them.

I stretched my arms and lied down my right hand in the side of the bathtub, I accidentally touched a weird object, I didn’t realized that I pushed the button of it, I wonder what is this, but I was freaked out when it started to play a music, and I almost drop it in the water. But I calmed down, because of the voice of the singer in the music, its like my soul was touched, buts its kind of a sad music because of what it meant.

I was allured with this object, but little did I know, it was an MP3. The title of the music is “not alone” by McFly; that’s what it said on this mini music player. I relaxed myself while listening to the music, I meditated in the lyrics and until my head started in aching; a hurtle beam passed in my head; it’s kind of sort of my memory but its kind of vague. I was so scared so I hasted on washing myself. After cleaning myself I used the bathrobe to dry my skin, then, I used the clothes that they gave to me a while ago and I felt so comfortable with it. I looked in the mirror and thought I almost looked like a boy, good thing I have my long hair.

I went outside and walked down stairs (it’s like I felt so strong). I saw Tom and Harry waiting me sitting in chairs. They stood up and Harry said “I think you are finish now.”

“Are you ready?” Tom’s asked.

“In what?” I replied.

“To see your room in this house, because we already decided that we are going to keep you here until you get back your memory.” Willingly said by Tom.

“Wait, why you are doing this to me? Why? What makes you three treat me so good? Cause I think this is too much.” I asked fervently.

“Why do you have any options?” Tom’s replied. Then, he smiled.

I know, you got a point but… but? There’s no but’s… come on follow us.

Then we went up again up stairs and showed to me my room. “Wait where Dougie is?” I asked.

“He is in the kitchen, he is cleaning.”

“Ok this is your room; you can do anything you want here.” Tom said.

It’s not that big but it’s not that small, it’s alright for me.

“I’m sorry if it’s not that big as our room.” Harry said.

“Its ok, I’m ok with this.” I replied.

“Wait; there is something we forgot to tell you, we forgot to give you a name.” Tom said.

“Yeah, that’s right.” Added by Harry.

Dougie in the kitchen saw a big mess under the dinning table, and yelled out to Tom and Harry, “What up with the ashes over here!?”

“That’s right! We will call you Ashe, Ahley! That’s a good name.” Tom exclaimed.

“Ashe? Ashley?” I said.

“Why you don’t like it?” Harry’s asked.

“No, its ok, you can call me Ashley.” I replied.

“Ok, we have to go down stairs and check Dougie. So just stay up here Ashe, we will just call you in dinner time.” Humbly said by Tom.

“Ok and thank you for all.” I replied fervently.

“Now you get used to it!” Tom said, and they start to smile.
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Post  anika on Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:21 pm

AW!!!!!! That's so cuute! poor Dougie. I can imagine him holding up a bra. hahaha. Aw... They're all so sweet. Especially Tom! I enjoyed! cheers cheers cheers
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Post  jaschier on Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:27 pm

mcfly

^ thanks Razz
i'll just post the next chapter next week monday or tuesday...
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:41 pm

Shucks... my Danny, what happened to you??

Oh, btw, Tom, Dougie, and Harry were sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!

jaschier wrote:“I think she got an anemia.” Dougie said

Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:51 pm

oh, another mean danny? Suspect

“I think she got an anemia.” Dougie said

Harry poked his head, “Ouch!” he reacted, and he amended him that, “Its amnesia not anemia” concluded by Harry.

“You don’t have to do that.” Dougie was hurt.

hahahahhaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha *super laugh*
that was mega funny Hahaha

Dougie sat down beside me and smiled like a cute puppy and said “Can I join you, because it’s like I’m starving in the way you eat.”

and that was super cute ^_^

“Why? What the matter? Did you forget how to take a bath?” Dougie asked. “Ok I’ll just help you to wash yourself.” He added.

“No,” Tom hit him. “Ouch!” Dougie was hurt again.

I bowed them with thanks and they went out and closed the door. I started too undressed myself and suddenly the door opened and I started to screamed.

“Ow, ow, I’m sorry I forgot to knock, I just forgot my head band here.” Panicky said by Dougie.

“What on earth you think you were doing Dougie.” Harry’s yelled.

LMFAO naughty dougie!!!
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lol nice add dude Approve! more? :]
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Post  jaschier on Tue Dec 30, 2008 5:20 pm

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guys sorry bukas ko nalang i post grounded ako ngayon wala sa akin ung USB xenxa na, cge guys i have to go..
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Post  jaschier on Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:00 pm

Chapter 3: My Dream; The Light Beyond The Dark

It was night and it’s full moon today.

Ashe… Ashe…

I wondered… “What’s that?”

Ashe… Ashley! Ashley!

Someone called my name.

“Who’s that?” I thought

Ashley!

It sounds like it came from the outside… beyond that door. I ran and opened the door.

“Ashe… I’m here! Ashley come here!” He yelled again.

I ran again, and then i stopped in-front of a big tree. I focused and searched where the voiced came from.

In the midst of trees where I’m illuminated by the moon light; I heard another yell“Ashley I'm over here!”

“Who are you? Why are you calling me?” I shouted while I’m searching where the voice came from.

“Just follow my voice!” He replied.

Then… Tsrk!

I heard a noise that caught my attention. It’s like he stepped on a twigs and I sensed that it came from my west. I quietly drew near to looked who is it but it seemed , he ran away.

I chased him and followed his direction but it seemed he ran so fast beneath the shadow of darkness.

Until, in just a blink of my eye he was loss in my sight, and so, I stopped in the area where he disappeared. I grasped on my knees and tried to catch my breath. hugh hugh...

Ashley! the voice again came out and it looks like that it came from my north. I slowly looked over it, and I saw the pure bright light of the moon beyond this perplex trees. But it’s a like a little bit way too far. So I decided to continue to run to reach the end and to know who is the person behind that voice that summoning me.

On the run, I sensed something on my behind, that, someone was following me. In the second moment of secondness- time by time, his getting so near on me.

So, I was frighten and motivated to run up and run through this narrow trees. Because of fear to be catch up with this mysterious stranger, I cried and sobbed and panicked and wondered who is that?

Because of haste…

I got so close with this bright side…

Until, I was about to enter this bright side, but as I reached the edge of the woods, everything appeared to moved in slow motion; even I, it’s like I’m running in the moon at the end…

Surprisingly, like a falling star that falls in the sky, another mysterious guy that suddenly blocked my way.

Bzgghh…!

My body pumped-off over him…

He tried to stopped my speed plus my acceleration plus my strength that molded in me with just his body. Because of the impact, my tears were thrown away in the white sand.

I squealed when he held me so tight and we got turned around so fast to control the inertia that I brought to him. After the collision, we still stood straight because of his strength, and still, he was holding me.

Then, he comforted me but I cannot see his face because he was lied at the back of my shoulder. We just stood along.

Until… he hugged me so tight that I cannot almost even breath. I cannot explain the tightness of his arms that wrapped in my body, but the feeling was so warm; the feeling is like he really missed me for so long, I wonder why? But I get carried away by the emotions.

Until slowly he cried, he cried and cried deeply and said fervently

“Ashe, I don’t want to lose you, but I love you.”

Then all my emotions were mixed up, I’m speechless; I cannot say anything, its like I was surprised in what he said. I even forgot the stranger who was chasing me a while ago was already gone, but all I can do in that time was to comfort him.

Until, he disappeared like a bubble that blown-up in front of me and stood up hugging with nothing. I was confused then, I wondered why? What happen? Where is he now? It really cracks my head off.

Until I heard a soft laugh. I wondered who was that again. I looked over and I saw another guy stood up in the shore; wearing white sleeves, red neck tie, with black suits and black pants, but barely in foots that soaks in the wet white sand, while staring at the clear sky.

However, I never doubted why he was stared at the sky. The sky is so clear and bright because of the lustrous moonlight and full with radiant star. Even the white sands are glowing because of the brightness. The sea became the big mirror of the sky, the mountains and hills in the edge way are so visible. I was amazed with this spectacular scene but I was hindered in the landscape when the mysterious guy who was looking at the sky said

“Ashley… you did it… you came up here! Its beautiful here Ashe… I want it to show this to you.”

I recognized his voice, that he was the one, the one who kept calling on me a while ago, the reason why I am here.

“You are the one who called me here, why are you calling me? What do you want?”

“Yes I’m the one who have been calling you, and you’d just recognized me at all, I just want to share what I just felt all this time, up to this point with you.” He bit his lips and felt an excitement in his heart.

Then… he putted his arms on his pocket, he breathed deeply and bowed. He chuckled and said

“Hmm… You listened to my voice… You just really love me, do ya?” He smiled.

I don’t know what he is talking about.

“I don’t know what are you saying to me and I don’t know even who you are?”

He slowly turned around with a smile on his face. But I cannot still see him because of the shadow on his face; because he is facing off the bright moonlight but I can see his sweet smile. I really don’t have any idea who really is him? So I still asked him.

“Ok just give me your name. what is your name?”

“Ashe… listen to your heart.” He said earnestly.

I listened, and meditated, and seemed everything got quite. I can hear my heart and it beats so fast. Until he rouse me up in his silly things.

“Just joking , as if your heart have a mouth that could tell you what is my name.” He laughed.

He just mocked me. I got angered. I shoveled my hands on the white sand and threw it over him. He just smirk when he was hit on his caot.

“Are you really serious? I’m getting serious over here! And still you have the guts to give some jokes!” I exclaime.

He just laughed!

“Ow, and still you get to laugh along?”

He stopped and smiled!

“Are you just going to stand and smile there? Are you with me? Or you really just want to have fun with me, Is this what you want?”

Then he got rid of it, he started to got firm in his voice and mending his neck tie… ehemm…!

“Ashe, if you really want to know me, just look up at the moon, you can see my heart there and it’s your’s.” He said seriously.

I doubted but I still looked over it.

“Just stare closely, you’ll find out.” He said.

I just listened to him and I wondered why I just immediately gave my trust like that to him. As I look in the moon I felt something in my heart, feelings that I can’t explain. Then, it started to beat so fast.

The moon appeared, to became brighter and brighter. It slowly glows and glows. I covered my face from the beaming light. “What is happening?” I said.

Then I looked at the mysterious guy, and because of brightness I saw his cheek and still it bumps because of his smile. The moon got brighter and brighter like a sun. It’s like we are getting to swallow by the moon light… until I cannot even see the mysterious guy and even my body… until I got faded…

And then…

I was stirred up, I shrilled and panted… hugh hugh…

It was just a dream, and the light that’s getting brighter was just the sun that reflected on my window. I covered myself in my hand from the radiant light of the sun and yawn. I stood up and looked up in the window. I just realized that its already morning. I think about my dream, and wondered what does it mean.





(to be continued)


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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:01 pm

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happy new year guys... bye... i have to go... Razz
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  nicoleaika on Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:39 pm

Wow... it's so literary...

who's the mysterious guy??

wee... Happy New Year too
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Post  jaschier on Fri Jan 02, 2009 3:29 pm

Chapter 4: The Unblinking Stare Battle; Ashley VS Danny

I still felt a little bit weak but I’m so alive today because of my dream last night -I think they are all mysterious, the one I chased, the one who chased on me, the one who blocked and hugged me then cried and blown-up like a bubble and the silly guy with his silly jokes whom always smile or laughed, and the reason of all my dreams. I wonder what they all said to me…

However, that’s not the only thing that makes me so alive in that day; it’s about what happen last night in our dinner time.



(Flashback)

Knock knock…! Someone knock the door

“Ashe? Its dinner time, come down now”

I immediately stood up from my bed; it’s just what I wait all the time after I entered in this room, because I felt so alone in this empty room and a little bit scared.

“I’m coming.” I said.

I opened he door and I saw Tom smiling while his right arm was hung up on the edge of the wall. Before we went down, Tom taught me something, it’s a tip on how to survive to night in the dinner if Danny will be joining us tonight. He whispered it on my ear, and I listened carefully.

Then, he advised me not to forget about that. I wondered what will happen then.

We went down in the kitchen. The foods are already served in the dinning table. Then Harry held on my hands and guided me on my chair. I sat on the end; on my left was Tom, on my right was Harry and next to him was Dougie who was playing the salad in his fork.

Harry tap Dougie to not to play with the food and he added that “Ok let pray for the food, I think its Dougie’s turn.”

“So they pray for there food before eating.” I said to my mind.

“Ok!” Dougie agreed. Then, they fold their arms and Dougie lead the prayer. I sneaked on them and I saw Dougie really praying solemnly, he was such a polite guy.

“Dear God, we thank thee for the foods and blessings that you gave to us. We ask thee to help us and guide us in our problems especially to our new friend, Ashe, whom she lost her memory, please help her to bring back her memory, and we ask for more of your blessings and food and we leave all this things in the name of your son Jesus Christ. Amen.”

“Amen!”

I was touched from the prayer of Dougie especially when she pray for me; Simple but meaningful and priceless.

After the prayer I looked at Dougie and smiled, then Dougie also looked at me, and he smiled like a kid, it was so childish, but it’s cute. Then they started on eating.

“I think Danny will not be with us tonight.” Harry said.

Then the door in the kitchen opened. It was Danny who directly sat at the opposite end of the table, in other words I’m facing him.
“Or he was,” ironically said by Harry.

Danny arranged the napkin on his table then he slowly looked at the foods, until, he saw me. He started on gnashing his teeth and lips.

I started to get nervous. Tom noticed me then he offered me the salad with lots of broccoli. He smiled and winked at me.

Oh yeah, I remember what Tom said about to me up stairs. He taught me about how to survive in the dinner if and when Danny is with us tonight.

The plan A; is just to concentrate on my food but if I still feel uncomfortable because he still looking at me I should star on the plan B.

Plan B; is just to look only either in the three guys- Tom, Harry and Dougie.

I did the plan A and was seemed, it’s not working. I shifted to plan B, but still I can feel the cold aura of Danny, he still staring at me differently. I looked at Tom and he reminds me about the Plan C. He signed his arms into a shaped of C. But I refused because I’m scared with that plan.

He dropped his fork and said “Owps! Sorry, so clumsy.” He laughed in phony.

“Ow, that’s so pathetic Tom.” Harry said.

“Ok, ok, I’m going to get it and change.” Tom’s replied.

Tom hid under the table and whispered to me that “Do it!” he is talking about the Plan C. Tom stood up and change the fork “Ok I’m going to change my fork.”

“Just change your fork, you don’t have too.” Harry said.

“Ok.” I said to my mind. I don’t have any options so, I relaxed myself and breathe deeply, and prepared for the Plan C.

Then I started it… I looked directly at the eyes of Danny with a neutral feeling on my face. All I have to do is just should not give a blink on my eyes and let him to be exhaust in his eye until he blink to beat him. Even a wink will not do.

Danny was surprised and seemed he was challenge, so he really stared at me. We both concentrated in our eyes.

While others are eating we really give our best not to blink. Tom in my left supports me.

But little did I know Dougie is the first one who noticed us. He noticed that Danny still not eating his foods so he looked at him was he was doing.

He realized that I and Danny are staring deeply. So he wondered why? He looked us alternately; side by side.

Harry was concentrated on his food. Until his right eyebrow rose up; it detected something –something strange was happening. He stopped in eating and looked on us.

“I really kept on this unblinking stare battle but I think I’m going to blink, I’m going to lose. I’m going to blink now, I’m doom.” I said.

Then suddenly the window opened a strong wind passed in the kitchen particularly in the area of Danny. His hairs were moved and his eyes started to itched and move…

Until… until… he blinked!

Bgghh… he slam the table with great force!

“I’ll just eat my food later.” Danny said

“Why? It will get cold if you’ll eat your dinner later.” Harry said.

But Danny already went away.

Then, everyone looked at me and smiled.

“Bloody hell, that’s brilliantly impressive,” exclaimed by Harry.

Tom clapped

“Congrats! You are the first ever person who beat him!”

“Maybe I’m just lucky today?” I replied with doubt.

“Don’t worry, he is ok, just forget him. Lets cheers! Cheers for Ashe!” gladly said by Dougie.

Yeah cheers…!


After we ate our foods Tom guided me up stairs in my room.

“Thanks.” I expressed my gratitude to him

“Your welcome.” His replied. “I wish our time will come also that we will do that battle.” He added and smiled.

“No, I’m not good at it; maybe it’s just my luck.” I replied.

“No, even if you blink your eye, I know you still be the winner.” He explained

“How come?” I asked.

“If you don’t have any choice, just do it, don’t push yourself, its ok to give up, just let yourself to blink your eyes and you’ll find it out and that’s a secret.” He smiled again but with his cute dimples.

I’m so glad with Tom in that time. I cannot help myself to give him hug. I hugged him as a sign of my deepest gratitude to him for being so kind and nice to me.

He was surprised, it’s liked he can’t believe that I hugged him.

“Good night Tom.” I said.

“Good night.” He chuckled like a kid.

Then I entered to my room and closed the door leaving Tom with happiness in our heart. I immediately lay on the bed and think of him…

I think what I saw to him…

I think what saw to Danny...

I think what I also saw to Tom, Harry, and Dougie; when every time they smile, I observed it to them.

Good thing for the three that they can smile sweetly. I wondered how about Danny.

But beyond their beautiful smile and happiness in their hearts, I saw something different in their eyes especially to Danny – as I stared on his eyes in the battle, I saw something strange, it’s like his eyes were drawn in a deep sadness and so with the other three guys.

It’s like something sorrow that hides in their eyes… or heart…





“And that’s what I’m going to do, to find it out what is their problem also, I’ll help them in their problems as the way they help me.”

“I’m going to help myself also, I will going to find who really am I? And find out also what my dream means.” I promised to myself, while staring at the blue sky.




(to be continue)


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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Fri Jan 02, 2009 10:37 pm

I squealed when he held me so tight and we got turned around so fast to control the inertia that I brought to him. After the collision, we still stood straight because of his strength, and still, he was holding me.

Whoa, you're talking Physics, man! Nagpaparamdam na ang school sakin. Noooo! Okay sorry that was random but i can't help it. Sorry(:
Wow. The first part was pretty freaky with all those name calling and hugging and disappearing. My heart thumped louder!
Whoa weird dream!!
Moree?
cheers
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  anika on Sat Jan 03, 2009 1:10 pm

Danny lost!! haha. That was pretty cool! Razz
"Second moment of secondness". LOL. That is so Danny!
Aw... He's still pretty cold but the other boys are brilliant. I love you
The dream was very interesting. I'd love to find out who the guy was. It was sweet!
Nice! Update! cheers
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Jan 03, 2009 9:36 pm

Whoa? I didn't read your latest update? Stupid.

LOL Dougie! So religious!!!
Hahahahaha. That was sooo funny! The unblinking stare battle!!!
Aw. I thought that will be the start of out normal Danny, but I guess I'm wrong. Sigh. But still, yay Ashe! PBJT! she beat Danny for the first time ever! PBJT!
Aw huuuug!!!! Group hug
Wow the last part was pretty deep. Good job Rock On!
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Sun Jan 04, 2009 4:18 pm

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i'll just post the next chapter on wed cause my sister brought it sa tuge with my dad... shopping nanaman!!!! Razz

thank nga pala guys!!!!
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  anika on Sun Jan 04, 2009 4:25 pm

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i'll just post the next chapter on wed cause my sister brought it sa tuge with my dad... shopping nanaman!!!! Razz

thank nga pala guys!!!!

Cool! I can't wait! Razz Razz
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