My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Wed Jan 07, 2009 6:26 pm

Chapter 5: A Home In The Midst Of Woods


Yes, I promised to help Tom, Harry, Dougie and Danny. But I don’t know where I shall start; where will I begin.

Come what may…

However it’s a lovely morning today, it’s like I want to go outside but I’m a little bit scared and shy to roam around. So there’s nothing I can do but to wait Tom… or Dougie… or Harry…

I sat down beside on a stool near beside the window and look in the mirror; I look on my face. I realize that, it’s like I’m a different person compared with the lads, even in the way we speak, they have different accent.

I wondered who really I am.

I felt sad about it.

As I looked on my face in the mirror, I noticed the drawer – it’s a little bit open. I wondered why. I looked over it and I saw a white handkerchief. I got it. I remembered that, this was the handkerchief gave by Dougie to me.

I didn’t know that it’s in here. I opened it widely and I saw a printed name in the lower left corner on the handkerchief; and the name was Harry.

I thought if Harry owns it but its Dougie was the one who gave it to me when I’m crying.

Then suddenly, a strange hurtle beam again that passed on my head, and its aching like the other day – it’s another vague thing on my mind. I grasped on the window and in the drawer and tried to control it.

Until, suddenly, it stopped itself… I cannot understand what that is.

I breathed deeply and relaxed. Until I noticed that the white handkerchief was already gone in my hand.

“Where is it?” I asked to myself.

I didn’t realize that I dropped it on the window. I tried to find it but I cannot see from where I am standing. I looked over the window and I saw it on the ground; I didn’t realize that I dropped it.

“I think I need to get that.” I said. “Now there’s a reason for me now to get out.” I added.

I opened the door gently and sneaked out of it, seemed no one still awake. I tried to walk as light as the feather. Until I was about to step on the stair way and someone called me.

“Ashe, where are you going?” He said.

I was shocked I stopped and said “Please, not Danny, not Danny, please.” I bit my lips. I started to sweat colds. I turned around and closed my eyes.

“What are you doing?” He asked.

I opened my eyes… and I saw nothing… “Huh? Who’s that?” I wondered.

“Ashe come here, there is something I want to ask to you.” He meant.

It’s like it came from beyond of that room. I quietly came closed. I opened the door gently and looked who it is.

“Ashe, can you hug me?” sweetly he said while hugging his pillow.

“Oh it’s just Dougie, why didn’t I know that. He was just dreaming verbally.”

Feuw… that a relief… “Sleep tight.” I whispered.

I closed the door gently, to not disturb him. “Aghh.” It’s like he was satisfied. I wondered what he was dreaming. Then he started on snorting.

I continued to go down in the stairs. I decided to walk in the kitchen for the short cut. Until I heard a noise; below in the drawer, between the cabinet and cooking table – someone’s clashing the cooking tools or sort of arranging it.

I turned around quietly and attempted to flee and try the main door.

Until…

“Oh, here is it.” He stood up and he saw me while holding the pan.

“Oh, Ashe good morning!” He greeted.

I turned around slowly, and it was Harry, but he was naked; he was only wearing his short white towel that tied on his waist. I saw the structure of his body, he was well physically shaped, he was so fit, his chest was a little bit hairy and his underarms was so whitish which was so exposed in his position.

I immediately closed my eyes and covered with my hands to double it.

“Good morning?” I said.

He noticed me; he looked on his body and realized the situation.

“Oh, I’m sorry, did I scared you? I didn’t mean to scared you.” He smiled awkwardly. He came closer to me and tapped my shoulder and held on it.

I felt a little bit anxious.

“I’ve just took my bath a while ago, and I’m just preparing now for our meal in breakfast, but I was harden to find this mighty pan.” He explained.

“I’m sorry, if I didn’t manage to get some clothes, and I’m sorry because I forgot that you were here; that there’s just already a girl in this house, because when we are still just four boys here in this house, we are immune to saw others naked, so we just walked around naked sometimes.” He added.

“Ok don’t worry, you can open now your eyes and put off your hands in your face, just wait me here, I’ll just go and get some clothes and underwear.”

“Ok.” I just sneaked.

Before that, he went back in the kitchen’s cabinet to closed the drawer

Then Dougie was in the middle of stair way walking so dizzy and he was just only in his black trouser.

Harry saw him and said “Oh no, wait Dougie!” He yelled. Attempting to stop him to be not totally exposed beyond the bars of the stairs, fearing that I might see him, and I might be totally scared.

He closed the drawer immediately and ran, but his white short towel was attached on the drawer when he closed it. So when he ran, his white short towel was loosened and fell on the carpeted floor. Then, he became totally naked.

I squealed and turned around quickly and covered my eyes again.

Harry was shocked and he covered himself with the pan that he was holding all along.

Dougie saw it but he was still sleepy and said

“Oh, I love fried eggs and hot sausage for our breakfast.” He smiled dizzily.

Harry felt he was so humiliated, his cheeks started to got red as rose. He picked quickly the towel and tied it again on haste, then he asked for an apology “Ashe I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to.”

Then he ran immediately on the stairs then he poked the pan on the head of Dougie and said

“Wake up now and get your shirts on.”

“Ouch!” Dougie was stirred up

“I don’t want to look back again.” I said to myself. Seemed Harry was already gone. I ran and went out on the door in the kitchen while covering my face. I closed the door and lied on it while holding the knob. I sighed for relief.

My emotions were all drain out when I saw the surroundings, its full of tall and big trees with the slush of green grass on its base. It’s so greenly out here. It’s so relaxing on the eyes to look on it, plus the blue sky. It’s my first time to go outside, so I was amazed.

“Ok here we go, just forget what happen a while ago.” I stood up firmly and wondered where that handkerchief is.

I searched on the ground, between the pebbles and grasses but it was not there. I sought for the window of my room, so it would be an easy for me to find which part of this rear area of the house it fell. But all windows in this house are all the same. So I just looked and looked.

Until I realized something in the house; that the house was so big and almost as tall as the trees.

I widen my eyes and looked closely in the big wall of the house. I was stunned.

“I didn’t know that this house was big like this.”

I ran over the length of it and I got tired when I reached the end.

I was also amazed on its simple details and elegant light colors; the golden Mellon of the wall with the touched of pitch, flesh, cream and white to its side lines, medians, windows and base.

I ran on the side while gazing on the unique almond colored roof top desiring to see the front part of the house.

Until in just a gleam of sunlight to its beauty, I bumped against his body. He was pushed down on the ground.

“Oh no! I’m sorry; I didn’t notice that you were there. Are you okay?” I asked.

Then he slowly carried himself, and yet his head was still bowed. He removed the dirt on his shirt and his short.

“I’m sorry.” I said sincerely.

Then he slowly showed looked at me. I was shocked because it was Danny. He really looked so mad that he was so annoyed with me. He gnashed and gripped his hands so tight. He started to come near on me lightly. It’s like he is also wants to push me so hard in his angry hands.

So I just closed my eyes and said in my mind that “I’m doom.”

Then… He hugged me… I was pulled from my imagination to reality that it was Danny who I bumped but it was Tom all along.

“I’m just okay Ashe, how about you, are you okay Ashe?” worriedly said by Tom.

Then, I hugged him so tight and sobbed lightly behind his shoulders and said “I’m so scared.”

Sshhh… He comforted me; he began stroking my hairs softly.

“I’m just trying to find …”

“This?” He continued and showed the white handkerchief that I dropped.

I paused and get off of him.

Sniff, sniff...

“I’m just trying to find that handkerchief because I dropped it on the window but I cannot see it, because I felt a little bit confounded with this area.” I said.

“I just so this handkerchief on the ground while walking, so I tried to pick it and wondered who owns it but I didn’t know that you were in my way while you are running, so when I stood up, we got collided. But not too bad, you are strong.” He smiled sweetly.

“I’m sorry.” I asked again.

“It’s ok, but what up with this handkerchief?” He asked.

“Actually I don’t know who really owns it, but I’m sure it’s Dougie was the one who gave it to me, but Harry’s name was printed on its corner.” I replied.

He looked over the handkerchief and said “Oh, yes, Harry owned this, but I don’t know how Dougie had it.”

“Ok will just ask him. But, wait, did you eat already?” He smiled.

“Not yet, but I wondered about the house?” I replied.

“Why what is it?” he asked

I looked on the house and said “Why it’s in here? In the midst of woods you established this beautiful house.” I asked curiously.

“Wait I think you did not yet see this before.” Then he held my hands and brought me in the front of their house.

“It’s not what I expected, but the front part of their house was simple but beautiful.”

“Ashe can you find now your answer to your question?” He asked. Then he smiled.

“What do you mean?” I asked.

“Ok let’s go inside.”

Then we went inside of the house through the main door and he toured me all over the house… I was surprised and stunned to its being simple but beautiful.

“Why didn’t I realize this before? I appreciated it so much, the greatness of this house, I cannot explain the feelings, but I cannot yet understand the answer of my question to him.” I said to my mind.

So I confronted him “Tom I really appreciate the house, but I still don’t have any idea about the answer of my question.”
He smiled, then he brought me in the kitchen where Dougie was in there while taking his breakfast. We sat down and he said to me “Ashe, it’s the place where we found the true meaning of home.”

I’m a little bit confused.

“Ashe, we found are sanctuary here, peace of mind, happiness and freedom.” He added

“If you can’t still understand me, just wait, and you’ll know soon.” He concluded and smiled again.

“Ok, I’ll just wait for the right time.” I replied with smile.

Then I looked at Dougie, he was also smiling. He offered as an egg sandwich. Then we start on eating.

Seemed everything was so mysterious today… lots of question in my head, hoping to find the answers. But what it is important at that point, was that, I have friends that I can asked for help and cheers me up with their lovely smile.
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Wed Jan 07, 2009 7:03 pm

Hahahhaa. Dougie!!! “Ashe, can you hug me?”
Hahahahahah. Harry naked? Hmmm. Razz
Whoa, that was weird.
I imagine the house looked like the house in Do Ya LOL and Dougie on the stairs. Haha. Razz
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  nikka! on Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:02 pm

I just read this.. nice story plot! Very Happy
the guys are so funny. UPDATE. bounce I'll be tuning in to this.. Very Happy
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Mon Jan 12, 2009 1:54 pm

i'm so busy, next wed naland yung next chapter(my quiz pa kami bukas sa major ko... at di pa me prepare...)... hehe, guys thanks you so much. i really appreciate. dont worry you'll enjoy i'm sure for upcoming chapters after 5 chapters more, and i'm excited too.....

sige guys love lots... Razz
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:34 pm

jaschier wrote:i'm so busy, next wed naland yung next chapter(my quiz pa kami bukas sa major ko... at di pa me prepare...)... hehe, guys thanks you so much. i really appreciate. dont worry you'll enjoy i'm sure for upcoming chapters after 5 chapters more, and i'm excited too.....

sige guys love lots... Razz

Wednesday? Can't wait! bounce Well, good luck to your quiz(: We'll enjoy? Really? Yay, can't wait! bounce
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:12 pm

pasensya na guys busy talaga ako... i'm sorry kasi maraming asignment ako ngayon, at bday kasi ng litle sister ko.. maraming ginagawa, but sure na ito bukas na ang next chap ko.. sorry po talaga... sorry guys... i have to go... Neutral
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  sapphire on Wed Jan 14, 2009 7:38 pm

^ Happy Birthday sa sis mo, bro. Smile

Kaya mo yan jasch! Smile Good luck with your homework, mate. Very Happy
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Wed Jan 14, 2009 8:42 pm

S'okay dude.
No pressure!
*Post it post it*
I kid! I kid! Razz
BTW happy birthday to your sis(:
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Thu Jan 15, 2009 6:53 pm

Chapter 6: Star Girl


Yesterday, it was a long day, and it still plays in my mind what happen. I can’t believe I got paranoid with Danny. I’m just so scared of him. When every time I saw him or even passed on my way, his cold aura creeps on my skin, my world stops and my senses get numb. Like what happen to me yesterday morning.


(Flashback)


I’m with Tom and Dougie in their firm wooden dining table, eating egg sandwich. But Dougie said it’s his version cause Harry didn’t cook.

I’m just about to swallow the last piece of the sandwich when I saw Danny in the window, staring at me like a zombie. I was shaken, fear was in my eyes.

Then, the sandwich got stuck on my throat and coughed when I can’t swallow or throw out in my throat.

Tom and Dougie got worried.

“Dougie get some water,” commanded by Tom.

Then Tom gave me a strong pat at my back, and the piece of sandwich on my throat, hurled over the table.

Then, Dougie gave me a glass of water, and I drank them immediately.

“Are you ok now?” Tom asked.

I thumbed up and nodded “I’m ok.” But I almost die with that. “I owe you again with you two.” My voiced were cleared and unobstructed.

“It’s ok, what was important is you.” Dougie replied.

I looked back in the window where I saw Danny, but he vanished.

“I think his gone.” I sighed and whispered.

“What?” The two both asked. Then they looked where I am looking at.

“Why? What’s up with there?” Tom asked.

“No, it’s just nothing, I just thought that someone’s over there.” I replied.


….


Shucks, that was so creepy; I hope it will not happen again. In that morning also, Dougie explained to us about the handkerchief that he gave to me.


(Flashback)


We are in the living room while sitting in Dougie’s favorite white couch, while watching news in their 38 super flat plasma screen, 3D television, and it’s my first time to watch over it with Tom beside me.

“Hey Dougie, I forgot to ask you about the handkerchief that you gave to me, remember this?” I showed it to him.

Tom turned off the television through the remote control and sat up firmly and confronted Dougie.

“Hey I’m watching.” Dougie complained like a kid.

“Shh-s-shut up! I almost forgot. How did you get Harry’s handkerchief? Did you steal it?” Tom asked.

“Well, Harry uses my boxers and socks without my permission and he don’t even wash them all after he use.” He replied.

“So you mean it, that you steal that to him.” Tom’s follow up question.

“Of course not!” He shrugged.

“So how come?” Tom asked him again.

“Ok, ok, I’m going to tell now the story, of how did I get that handkerchief… ehemm…” He cleared his voice.

He called his story as the happy handkerchief.

“Once upon a time, not so long ago…” He started on telling the story, with his hands and his eyes that are gazing on the atmosphere, trying his best to remember what really happen in that time.

Even I and Tom got carried away with his actions.

“W-w-wow wows… wait, could you just directly answer my question.” Tom suggested.

“But you will miss the most interesting part.” Dougie looked like he was interrupted.

Tom tapped his forehead, “Just please, answer my question, please, I am begging with a cherry and sugar on top.”

Dougie looked at me and I just smiled. Then he got started to be serious. He sat down and confronted us.

“Ok, when I saw Ashe crying, I felt so sorry to her in that time. So I thought that if I can give Ashe a handkerchief. I plunged my hands in my pockets, but when I pulled it, it’s nothing but a wrapper of chocolates. Harry noticed me, so he thought that if I can give his handkerchief to Ashe; and so, he gave it to me, then he went on you Tom, with Danny. I came closer to Ashe and comforted her. I gave the handkerchief and she got it and used to wipe her tears. And the handkerchief live happily ever after with Ashe.”

Then Dougie snatched the handkerchief on my hand and puppet it on his hands and said

“But I think I’m not going to be happy forever after all, because I think they will going to bring me back to my old and unhappy life.” He talked like a kid.

“Will you cut it off?” Tom said.

“Bye Ashe, I’ll miss to stay in your pocket and in your warm hands”

“Aw… Mr. Handkerchief now is sad.” Dougie added.

“Don’t worry, I’ll still keep you.” I got rid with Dougie.

“Yes!” Mr. Handkerchief yelled.

“I said stop that.” Tom got the handkerchief and gave it back to me.





I felt a little bit shame in the time but when every time I look back to what happen when Dougie gave the handkerchief, I can really say that Dougie and Harry are good guys.

So I planned to give it back this handkerchief to Harry and thank him. But seemed we don’t see each other or talk too much now. I wondered what happen to him.

I also got tired yesterday with their big house with Tom, but my exhaustion were set off when Tom toured me in other rooms that I’ve never been on.

Tom showed to me first, their second bathroom complimented with comfort room. It’s adjacent to the kitchen. It’s wider and bigger but it’s not colorful than the other one on the second floor.

The room was simple with its marbled white floor and wooden black edges and medians. The shower rooms was made of fine glass, but what was amazing, was that there’s water that flows on its surface so it will be look blur. The comfort room was given a touched of privacy. The cabinet was smooth with the big rectangular mirror. The lavatory and faucets are classic. Beside of their shower room, there’s a lane for their prototype hot tub and black Jacuzzi.

I could say that the theme of the room was simple but elegant. I’m so allured. Tom said I can try this room anytime I want.

The next room was the laundry area where all our used clothes are washed, placed to dry and ironed. The area was adjacent to the bathroom and in the kitchen.

The wall was painted in gray with a traced of blue and white colors, and bubble details. The windows there are widely opened for the heat of the sunlight will come in to dry the newly washed clothes. There are also four different LCD washing machine and they are all cute because they have different colors, the teal one owned by Tom, the magenta owned by Dougie, the blue owned by Danny and the crimson owned by Harry.

Tom taught me on how to use it so I can wash my personal clothes like what they are doing; they wash their own clothes.

Tom also said that I can also used his washing machine and ask for a help if I’ll be need him. Tom was really nice and sweet.

Then we went back in the living room for the next room.

Below the stair way there’s a three door, the other one was locked. Tom said it’s the way down for the basement. Opposite of it was a random area where random things are placed in there; taught to me by Tom. We entered on there and I saw different cleaning materials, like their vacuum cleaner and floor polisher. There are also some different tools like fixing tools and cutting tools. There are also some unused things that are fixed on the corners like chairs and tables. Even wardrobes, where inside of it are bunch of unused shirts, pants, jackets, shoes and anything that can be ware.

Tom said that, that was the room where he got my dress that I used yesterday. But they didn’t look old, they looked vintage. I was astonished.

Between the way for the basement and random area, was the mini gym that they called. When we entered there, like in the random room, the walls are painted in plane white. Only the color of the materials and items there makes the odd.

We saw Dougie there playing his dumbbells in his toes. Tom said this was the area where fitted up for physical exercise or training, so they could have a better body structure.

Dougie noticed us, and he invited us to join him but Tom refused because there’s something more he wants to show with me. And so, we leave him with sweats on his smiling face.

Then we went upstairs and Tom wanted to show his room. I told him that I already saw the room of Dougie, but not yet with Harry and Danny. Tom was surprised when he heard it. When we are already in front of his room, he just pointed the room of Danny and Harry.


(Flashback)


“It was just next to your room.” He pointed at the room of Danny.

I was shocked… when he noticed me he said

“There’s nothing to be scared with Danny, because he is a real good guy.”

He also gave me a tip to become closer to Danny. He just said that

“Just ride with his actions and always give him smile.”

I just listened and nodded and hope for the good of my relationship with Danny.

Then Tom invited me to enter first in his room with a guide of his hand

“Wow!” I was pleased with its neatness.

“You are always welcome here to enter.” He expressed.

I can say that the room was big and colorful. Everything are organize.

I went over in his cream cabinet and I saw different collection of toys.

“Wow, there are so many toys in here, you really like toys, eh?” I said.

“Why do you want one?” He asked.

“No, I’m just…”

“Wait, I have something here for you.” He complimented.

He looked over in his toys and he gave me a small cute toy

“It’s a cuddly sheep.” I smiled.

“Yeah, it’s a sheep, I love sheep.” He chuckled.

“Are you really giving this to me?” I asked.

“Yes you can have it, and besides your room was empty, you can display it on the top of your drawer or any where you want.” He replied.

“Really? Wow thanks, I love it, it so cute.” I rubbed it with gladness.

Then I sat down on his bed, I bounced when Tom jumped over it.

“Aw… sorry.” He grinned.

“Not bad, your bed is so soft and comfy.” Then I looked over on the frames that hung’s on the walls. They are all made of arts.

“I painted those.” He proudly said. I adored his talent.

But I noticed something different in this room that caught my attention. It’s a big picture of Tom with some people that surrounds him; it’s the focal part of the wall.

“Wait Tom, is that your family, with you in that big picture.” I asked.

“Actually its one of my paintings.” He chuckled.

“Aw, they look real.” I was stirred up with gladness.

“Wait is that your family?”I asked him again.

But he ignored and attempted to change my attention to other

“Wait, if you really want to see some of my picture, here look at this.” He showed me his album, “This is me when I’m still 8 years old… and when I’m in high school…” He fancied himself.

“You really looked so cute Tom, especially when your dimples glint on your cuddly face.” I expressed fervently.

“Really?” He cheered up with his dimples. He was flattered and touched.

Then I sneaked back on his big realistic painting.

But he caught my attention when he held on my hands.

I felt his warm hands. I looked slowly at his face and wondered why.

I almost toast when I saw his eyes that he deeply stared at me. My soul was shaken with strange emotion.

Then suddenly, he slowly loosens the buttons on his checkered polo shirt from the top… to bottom…

I almost pump off my eyes out of its socket when he slowly opened his polo shirt, when he already fastened out the buttons. Good thing he got shirt on.

I was moved...

It’s like its getting so intense in that moment.

Then I stood up and opened the windows of his room so that there will be a cool air that will circulate inside the room. But Tom tried to stop me and held on my arms and gave me an intense stare.

Seemed he acts weirdly.

“Why?” I asked.

“No... Closed the windows and untie these curtains.” He commanded.

“Why? It’s getting hot in here; I just want to have a cooler air to come in.” I explained.

“Ashley, there’s an air-con here.” He replied.

Then he turned on the air-con.

Then he helped me to close all the windows and put on the curtains. Even the door he locked and put on a curtain.

Then everything got dark.

However he switched on the light and gave me an instruction.

“Ashe, get lie on my bed, before we will start.”

I was confounded, “Why? What are we going to do?”

“Just trust me… I just want you to experience what I’ve just experience.” He said seriously.

Then I lay on his bed, I felt anxious, but I trust him.

“Don’t worry; I’m sure you’ll enjoy it.” He smiled genuinely.

Then he turned off again the lights.

I cannot even see any single light that can pass on the room, it was so dark. I felt like a blind, I’m so nervous.

Then, I felt Tom… he lay beside me… I’m getting scared…

Then he said “Are you ready?”

“Tom… I trust you…” I whispered softly but in shudder voice.

Then he held my hands tightly…

1, 2, 3…

Then he pushed a button, and I heard a gadget that some sort that operates…

Then the room became bright but not as bright when he switches on his light…

I was surprised… I was stunned to its spectacular scene… It was exceedingly great… my fear were overcome with great happiness.

It’s like I’m traveling in galaxy. The room was field with heavenly bodies. The stars shine brightly and they are so many.

His room became a planetarium.

I gaze them slowly.

Then Tom starts on humming…

Then he sings:

Hey, I'm looking up for my star girl
I guess I'm stuck in this mad world
With things that I wanna say
But you're a million miles away

And I was afraid when you kissed me
On your intergalactical frisbee
I wonder why, I wonder why
You never asked me to stay

So wouldn't you like to come with me
Surfin' the sun as it starts to rise
Woah, your gravity's makin' me dizzy
Girl I gotta tell ya,
I'm feelin' much better
Make a little love in the moonlight

Hey, there's nothing on Earth that could save us
When I feel in love with Uranus
I don't wanna give you away
Cause it makes no sense at all

Houston we got a problem
Ground control couldn't stop them
I wonder why, I wonder why
You never asked me to stay

So wouldn't you like to come with me
Surfin' the sun as it starts to rise
Woah, your gravity's makin' me dizzy
Girl I gotta tell ya,
I'm feelin' much better
Make a little love in the moonlight…

His voice is so beautiful, I was amazed; I almost melt because of happiness…

“Can you feel now what I felt when you said that I’m cute especially when I glint my dimples in my cuddly face.” Tom said while staring in the stars

I got perplex in what he said…

“Ashe, my mom loves me so much and I love her too. She always cared about me. She makes me happy when I’m sad. She helps me when I have a problem. She always makes me felt that I’m important to her. And she’s always saying to me that I’m cute especially when my dimples puff out in my face. But when I left the house, I miss that to hear that to her. So when you said that to me a while ago. I felt this kind of happiness that you’ve just felt now. You’d just make me so happy now. But I miss her now… I miss my parents… I miss my family…” He said emotionally

I looked at him… I comforted her, “Tom I’m sorry.”

“No, you should not. I’m just so happy today. Thanks Ashe.” He expressed his gratitude

“No, I should be the one who gave thanks… Thank you Tom for everything that you’ve done to me, I don’t even know how I can pay you.” I said.

Then he smiled…


“A hug will do.” He showed his charming face.

Then I hugged him tightly and we chuckled softly.






We are so happy in that time but I’m happier for him because I made him smiled genuinely even he got a sad problem.

Then Tom was already finished to change after he took his bath.

“Are you ready now?” He said while standing at the top of the stairs.

I just smiled. But I really don’t have any idea what are we going to do…



(To be continued)
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Post  nikka! on Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:11 pm

happy handkerchief! aww.. dougie's so cute in that part. hahaha. and tom was so sweet when he sang to ashley! I love you
i love it! update soon again.. Approve!
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Post  anika on Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:41 pm

awww.. That was sweet! TOOM!!! I love you I love you I love you
The room is nice. I wish I had one too. I'd have the faces of Danny, Dougie, Tom and Harry glowing back at me. LOL.
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Post  jaschier on Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:47 am

^
^ thank you thank you thank you... i'll post it nalang ung next chap sa wed... hehe... so excited..
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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:30 pm

38 super flat plasma screen, 3D television -- Wow. Haha.
Awww. OMG Dougie's so cute!!!
I love it that you really explain every detail of the house. It really makes me imagine the exact house that they are staying(:
Sheeeeep!!!!
Wow. Tom has his own planetarium? Coool!
I thought something magical will happen eh. Hahahahahhaa.
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Post  jaschier on Fri Jan 23, 2009 6:52 pm

Chapter:7 The Town; The Start of Something New

I’m in the living room sitting in a flabby sofa. Soliloquizing and fancying Harry’s handkerchief… the house… and Tom while waiting him.

He said yesterday before we got to sleep, that I should wake up early, because there’s an important thing that we will going to do.

However, while waiting Tom to get change, I’m also waiting Harry to pass by, because I really need to talk with him, and I’m ready to give it back his handkerchief, but seemed he was not yet around.

That was strange, because all I know, was that he always wake up early on his bed…

However, about the house, everything I saw yesterday was strange for me, it was just Tom who introduced and described everything. I just don’t know why they are playing on my mind, but what I’d just observed was that I learned quickly. Maybe, I used to know them before.

I hope I get well soon; I really want to know who really I am…

However, I also want to help Tom and the other guys in their problems as my payment for keeping me here. I knew it’s not enough, but that’s the only thing I think I can do for them.

Good thing Tom opened a problem with me yesterday. I got some idea what he really felts beyond his being nice and sweet to me, but I knew there’s something more. There’s something deeper reason. I can feel it when every time I look on his eyes.

Then suddenly Tom appeared on the stairs.

“Are you ready now?” He said.

I just smiled, but I really don’t have any idea what are we going to do.

I noticed that his complexion was given more emphasis because he wore dark outfits like his black slick sleeves and pants, and gray hood with matching black shades. But his shoes made the odd, because it’s a plain white.

“What’s up with your outfit?” I asked.

“We are going to town.” He replied.

“Huh? What? Town? Why?” I wondered.

“We are going to shop!” He smiled.

“What!? You two are going to town just to shop?” Danny asked, while he was in the stairs, looking on us that he was surprised in what just Tom said. “Are you out of your mind Tom!?” Danny exclaimed.

“Why, do we have a problem with that?” Tom asked.

Danny pulled Tom out near from me and he insists in whispered that, “Did you just forget why we are staying here in the midst of the woods? Why we are hiding here? Do you remember what we just promised to our self before we live here?”

“Yes, I didn’t forget why we are in here, and I still remember what we promised to our self.” Tom replied secretly.

“So what are you thinking? You are putting our life in jeopardy, even the life of Harry and Dougie, just because of you two wants to shop.” Danny said vividly.

“You still didn’t know… you never finish me a while ago to talk with Ashe.” Tom dug his pocket.

Then Tom showed a bunch of list written in a paper.

“What’s that?” Danny asked and snatched the paper.

“It’s a list of our groceries, medicines and other things that we need in this house, so if you will stop us on our outing, you are not only putting our life in jeopardy, even our promise and secrets.” Tom explained.

“Outing?” Danny asked awkwardly but he was convinced with Tom’s explanation.

“Don’t worry, I’ll handle this like the same thing we did before.” Tom snatched back the list and went back to me.

Danny gnashed his tongue and teeth, and looked like he lose with Tom in their discussion.

“Are you two ok?” I asked Tom.

“Yes, we are ok; we just got misunderstanding on our outing today.” He smiled sweetly.

I smiled back as a sign that everything was ok with me.

“Ok let’s go.” Tom opened the main door, and held my arms.

I looked back at Danny. He stared us, as we walked by, but he looks like his not ok, he looks anxious on his face.

So, I smiled at him for the first time, to cheer him up, and waved a hand for a goodbye. But I didn’t see his reaction because I was already tugged out by Tom in the main door.

We went in front of the garage. Tom pushed a taupe button and it automatically opened.

“We will use this van to get there.” He was looking at the automobile.

Then he opened the door for me.

“Get inside.” He said.

Then he guided me. I went inside and sat stiffly. I felt strange.

Tom entered on the other door. Then he fastened his seatbelt and arranged the front mirror, and looked over the side mirrors.

He noticed me that I looked some sort of thinking deeply.

“Are you ok Ashe?” He asked.

“Yes I am.” I smiled.

Then he fastened my seatbelt and smiled back.

He putted his key on the keyhole and started to heat the engine. He stepped on the clutch and tugged the transmission. He shifted mildly his foot to the accelerator and began to turn the steering wheel.

Then the van started to move out in the garage. It passed beneath the trees and it’s like it’s meant to be a thoroughfare.

I looked back at the house but it’s already concealed by the big trunks.

In a short time, the van got moved along in a plane gray lane with white stripe that divides the lane.

“We are already in the road. Just hang on; it will take 17 to 25 minutes before we reach the town.” Tom said.

I just nodded. I wondered back in the view of my right window; I wondered if the trees have an end.

Tom noticed me again that I’m so quite.

“Are you really ok Ashe?” He asked.

“Yeah, I am fine.” I replied.

“Is there something that bothers you?” He asked again.

“None.” I said

“Then why are you quite? Are you bored with me?” He asked once again.

“No Tom… I’m really fine. I just can’t believe that we are getting far from the house now.” I explained.

“Don’t worry you’ll enjoy there.” He grinned.

Then he opened my window. A sudden mild gust rushed on my cheeks. I hung out my hands at the window to feel the flurry on my palm that agitates my hair. I felt cool.

Tom noticed me that I’m enjoying the ride. So to make the atmosphere become more happy and lively, he played a music that caught my attention.

It sounds spooky, but Tom was singing with the music. Seemed, he like the music.

However, when the music reached the chorus, I felt a little bit carried away with the tune. It’s like I want also to sing and move, like Tom does:

…People marching to the drums,
Everybody's having fun to the sound of love,
Ugly is the world we're on
If I'm right then prove me wrong
I'm stunned (to find a place we belong)

Who is your lover,
I couldn't tell,
When hell freezes over,
That's when I'll tell,
Who is your lover,
I couldn't tell,
When will this stop…

We are really enjoying the music in that moment. I love the way Tom sings it, his like a kid when he jive with the music. It’s like I want to pinch his cuddly dimples.

To conclude the sublime, I relapsed in the cool breeze of the wind while listening to a good music… with Tom beside me…


After a joyful ride, it was already 7:50 when we reach the town.

"Seem, there’s only few people in the town… or maybe they are just still sleeping like Dougie at this moment…"

“Hatchcoo!” Dougie sniffed in his bed…

Then Tom parked the van in front of a store.

The name of the store was MODEST. It looks like a wander land because of the colorful paint on its wall.

Tom putted his hood and black shade. We went outside the van and began to move.

However, before we entered the store, I asked Tom

“Tom, why do we need to shop?”

"Because you need to get change." Tom replied.

"We are going to shop for me?" I was surprised.

“Ashely, you cannot stay like that forever; you need to buy your own personal things as a girl. You need to look feminine. Look at yourself; you almost look like a guy with your shirt. And look what happen to Harry, he unconsciously forgot that you are a girl.” He explained.

“What? You know what happen to harry?” I asked.

“Yeah, it’s Dougie who told to me in what happen to him.” Tom replied.

“Ouch!” Dougie bit his lips unconsciously…

I reflected my whole body in the mirror of the store; I stared myself. I realized that Tom was right.

“Yeah, you’re right Tom, I think I need to get change.” I said.

“Alright, then come in.” he opened for the door.

I closed my eyes and slowly went inside. I smelled the fragrant scent of the store; I can feel its different aura that trances my soul - it’s like a start of something new for me.

Then suddenly a sassy sales lady welcomed us

“Hello ma’am, hello sir, welcome to our store where all our clothes here are made modest.” Courteously said by the sales lady.

I was pleased with her.

“Ok, give everything he needs to wear for a month. She needs to be look like a real girl. Make it sure she will be look like great and she will like it.” Firmly said by Tom.

“Ok sir, I understand.” The sales lady bowed.

Then she pulled me immediately at the women section. I was surprised. I just saw Tom smiled.

Then the sales lady grabbed various kinds of modest dress. She accommodated me in the fitting room. She gave me 5 different vintage modest dress paired some sorts of sandals and flat shoes. She helped me to wear them.

After a second, I look myself in the mirror with my first collection. A blue casual off-shoulder dress with silk black ribbon tied on its waist, with a crepe twist on its skirt.

I felt great with it but I’m so shy to show it to Tom. However, there’s nothing I can do but to show myself to him. So I just went out bashfully.

I saw Tom sitting in a bench with an excitement on his face. The sales lady caught her attention and proud to show me.

Tom gazed at me slowly, and he gave a perfect 10 smile on me. I blushed when I saw his reaction.

“Wow Ashe, you look amazing.” He thumbed up.

“Ok, continue.” He gladly said.

Then the sales lady accommodated me again in the fitting room.

I tried the other dress:

The second dress was a great white casual dress with yellow sash and yellow color that fades in the tip of the lovely skirt paired with flamboyant flat sandals. The third one was an ever green edgy dress with a cute small teal vest and ruffled flounced skirt, paired with fluffy flat ballet shoes. The fourth one was a classic black satiny casual dress with silver ribbon on its shoulder and white sash and flat sandals.

All of the dress are perfectly fit on me, and they were adored by Tom, every dress that I showed to him, welcomed me with a remarkable charming face.

But the fifth one made the difference in his great reaction. The dress was pink with a shade of peach. It’s simple but vintage in its plunging neck and flimsy smooth skirt, paired with colorful flat sandals.

I felt rejuvenated with it; it’s like I was born again. I felt like it was me.

Then, once again, the sales lady proudly showed me again at Tom. She called me to go out in the fitting room with an excitement to her voice.

I showed myself slyly. Then I gently looked at Tom and smiled at him… but my expectation to him was shuttered…

He looks like he was not impressed, he didn’t even smile or move. It’s like he saw a ghost. His jaws were hung and his mouth is widely opened.

I was dazed on his reaction; I felt bad for myself. I bowed down my head

But little did I know he was exceedingly surprised and stunned to my real beauty. He even almost drool.

“A-a-a-ah…” Tom wiped his mouth. “Ashley.” He came near on me…

Then he gently pulled my chin and softly flipped my hair to see me clearly.

I pouted; I’m so shy to look at him.

“Ashe, you looked pretty.” Tom said cheerfully.

Then I looked at him and smiled genuinely.

He grinned softly. I saw his dimples turned into pink: it was a contagious blushed, so I blushed too. I thought I was wrong for his first impression…

Then suddenly the sales lady pothered.

“You two are like cute couple, are you?” She asked, and smiled.

Tom and I were moved, we were surprised.

“No-no, A-a-Ashe is just my friend.” He smiled awkwardly and blushed extremely, and started to sweat cold. I just blushed meekly.

“Really? Aw…sorry… he he… because you two look some sort of a good couple.” She asked for an apology.

“But wait, can I asked you ma’am? … You have slim arms, sexy hips and slender thighs, are you a professional model? I’m sure you are…” The sales lady confidently said.

Tom and I looked each other and started to laugh.

“He he… I didn’t know that some sales lady's here are funny.” Tom chuckled.

The sales lady blushed…

But deep inside in the mind of Tom, he was totally agreed with the sales lady…

After a burning cheek conversation, we continued to shop… tom bought me also some vintage t-shirts, jeans, shorts, jackets, rubber shoes, boots and accessories, and other personal things that I need…

We brought lots of bags in the van; even the sales lady helped us to carry them.

“Bye-bye… come back again sir, ma’am.” Courteously said by the sales lady.

Before we parted, Tom gave her a tip for his excellent job with me. He was impressed by the sales lady. We promised that we will back soon.

And lastly, “Goodbye…” We said…


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Post  jaschier on Fri Jan 23, 2009 6:53 pm

(Continue:)


Then we went in our next pits stop; to the market.

Tom bought there different medicines and different ingredients like onions, garlics, gingers, olive oils, flour, white wines, organic honey and any thing that we will need for cooking. Tom also bought several of vegetables like parsley, broccoli, cabbage… fruits like strawberries, orange apple, mango, grapes… and various of meats.

While searching on the other things that we need for the house, I saw a book store, and beyond on its translucent mirror, there was a big colorful book that placed there.

I came drew to look at it, and I found out that it was a cooking book.

In that moment, I remember Harry who always cook for our food… I wondered then, if I’ll use the book to help him in cooking.

I went inside the book store. I grabbed the book and tried to view on its page. All the recipes look delicious.

Until I saw the last page of the book. It denotes a phrase:

…The way to a man's heart is through his stomach…

I wondered what it means…

While I’m in the book store, Tom was left behind.

Until he realized that I’m already gone in his side, and saw me in the book store…

He tried to approach me, but he was allured with the beautiful flower shop beside the book store. He saw a different lively plants and colorful flowers like oleande blossoms, carnations, jasmines, magnolia, roses... He wondered if he’ll buy flowers and plant it on the house.

Tom asked the florist and bought different flowers…

Tom then approached me in the book store while I'm looking at the different recipes.

He surprised me with a bouquet of white roses. He gave it to me.

“Is this really for me?” I grinned.

“Nah… not really… its for Ashley.” He smiled.

I felt a little bit confounded with the twist, when he refused that it was for me, but when he cracked my name, i express my simple gratitude, “Thanks.”

I smelled the flower, and they were sweet-smelling.

“Wait, what are you looking with that book?” He asked.

“It’s a cooking book…” I said. “Ahmm… Tom can I asked for a favor…” I added with a big smile on my face.

“Why, do you want me to buy that?” He got it.

“Please… I just want to learn how to cook… so I can help Harry to cook some foods, and so there will be something I can do inside the house.” I shyly said.

“No problem, you can have that.” He replied.

“Really? Thank you so much!” I hugged him because of happiness.

Then Tom bought the cooking book. When he gave me the book, suddenly my stomach grounched. Tom heard it and laugh softly.

“I think, I know now where will be our next pits stop.” He grinned.

I blushed…

Then we went in the van and went to a food store. The named of the store was AUTUM DESERTS.

We entered there and sat to a stiff black chair.

We saw the menu on the table and they are all like scrumptious. But I don’t have any idea what kind of foods are those.

Tom noticed me, so he just ordered me a plate of strawberry crepes paired with strawberry short cake.

He said that I will going to like that, I should not worry.

"Of course i'll do, and i don't have any worries about the foods." I said.

He ordered a chocolate crepes paired with chocolate mousse.

After a minute, they served up that foods that we ordered. I was stunned to its beautiful design. Because of hungry I immidiately ate the crepe, and it taste so yummy. The cake was so sweet with the delight flavor of strawberry.

Tom was also enjoying in his food until he suddenly saw me that I have a smudge on my face of a strawberry fillings. Tom got his handkerchief and suddenly wiped the smudge on my face gently.

I paused, and blushed. I cant believe that I got a smudge because of my hungry.

I looked at Tom bashfully...

Tom smiled sweetly, but i saw a smudge on his dimples. I hasted to look a handkerchief on my pocket, but i don't have, so, I just dipped lightly my spoon to the smudge on his face.

Tom was surprised, he blushed. But when I showed the chocolate filling that I got on my spoon, he just ate it in a blink of an eye. I was surprised then, I can’t believe that he just ate it like that.

Then we laughed all along...

After we ate, we decided to go home, we need to have rest, its been a long day.

Before we got ride to the van, we saw a beggar on the street playing his old guitar.

I asked Tom, "What does the oldman doing in the street?"

Tom said "Ashe, he entertains the people that pass by, so they could give him a money to buy for his food."

"Why? does he not have a money?" I asked.

Tom left me for a while, beside the van, and ran near to the old beggar and gave him lots of money in his shallow cans. The beggar thanked him. Tom advised him that he should use their money wisely.

Then Tom went back on me and said "Ashe, we are now leaving in a different world, you need to strive in order to survive. He was a victim of poverty, and there's nothing he can do but to beg for a money to survive, and so, he is using his talent so he can get more money."

I pitied the oldman, I felt sad for him.

Then Tom noticed me. He cheered me up with his smile. I was carried away; i smiled back at him.

And then we went inside the van and started to moved out in the town.

While hungging in the road again, I just realized that we bought lots of things, in the town.

“Ashe, did you enjoy in the town?” Tom asked.

“Yeah, I really have fun.” I smiled.

He smiled back and continued to drive…

Tom felt something different in that moment, its like he was inspired with happiness.

After 23 minutes, we are already in the house.

“Are you ready to show you new look?” He asked.

I just nodded and smiled… but I felt a little bit shy for my new look... I wondered what will be the reaction of the other guys...

But before we entered the house, we made a promised. I held his arms and put it in his heart. Tom was surprised.

I said "follow after me..."

"...I Tom Fletcher promise to let Ashe to pay me in all the things that I gave it to her, even it will take my life..." Tom felt so unconscious and numb in that moment, its like his world was moving slowly... i felt his heart beats so fast... and so I asked him "Are you ak Tom?"

"Yeah..." He just nodded, like he was hypnotized.

"Ok, promise is a promise!" I smiled.

Then he was moved and pulled from his strange feelings for me... in that moment...

He smiled back...

Then, Tom opened the door gently for me, I entered slowly, and I saw Dougie on the floor.

“Oh no! am I already dead? I can see angel now!” Dougie yelled. Then he rubbed his eyes.

“Wait, who are you?” He asked slowly.

Then Tom flipped his ears hardly and said “Its Ashley you…”

“Ouch… Aw… Ashe.” He realized, and ran and hugged me. “I’m sorry.” He added.

I grinned, “Its ok.” I said. But I was surprised on his reaction.

Then I saw Danny from the kitchen, and he fell his apple that he was eating on his mouth, and drool; he was shocked on me. But he was moved when Dougie and Tom lauged at him. So, he ran up to the stairs.

I saw Harry there, in the stairs, but he ran away after a seconds. I wondered what up with him…

Then Dougie said “Just let him be with his self now… he just got a problem...”

“Yeah, lets have some rest for now. We’ll just talk at him later.” He said.

And so, we rested in the living room with full of happy memories in the town.
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Jan 24, 2009 7:26 pm

Wooooh, looooong chap. Love it!
However, about the house, everything I saw yesterday was strange for me, it was just Tom who introduced and described everything. I just don’t know why they are playing on my mind, but what I’d just observed was that I learned quickly. Maybe, I used to know them before.
OMG that was very intriguing!!!
Danny pulled Tom out near from me and he insists in whispered that, “Did you just forget why we are staying here in the midst of the woods? Why we are hiding here? Do you remember what we just promised to our self before we live here?”
Whoa. What is that Danny? You're hiding? O_O
I can imagine that the van looked like the Mcfly's mystery van but its a secret so it couldn't be it. Okay nonsense((:
Haha, 17 minutes. Random XD
Yay Tranny!
Haha, I like the part when Dougie bit his lips when Tom was talking about him. It's so natural?[not the right word((:]
Wooh! Shopping galore with Tom!
Aww, that was so cute! The spoon dipping thingy!
LOL at Danny!!!
Moreee(:
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:54 pm

My gosh!!!!! Tom's an absolute sweetheart!
Dougie was so funny!! I la-la-loved him!!!!
I'm so excited for the next chapters! update soon! Razz
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Post  jaschier on Sun Jan 25, 2009 4:24 pm

KAI wrote:Wooooh, looooong chap. Love it!
However, about the house, everything I saw yesterday was strange for me, it was just Tom who introduced and described everything. I just don’t know why they are playing on my mind, but what I’d just observed was that I learned quickly. Maybe, I used to know them before.
OMG that was very intriguing!!!
Danny pulled Tom out near from me and he insists in whispered that, “Did you just forget why we are staying here in the midst of the woods? Why we are hiding here? Do you remember what we just promised to our self before we live here?”
Whoa. What is that Danny? You're hiding? O_O
I can imagine that the van looked like the Mcfly's mystery van but its a secret so it couldn't be it. Okay nonsense((:
Haha, 17 minutes. Random XD
Yay Tranny!
Haha, I like the part when Dougie bit his lips when Tom was talking about him. It's so natural?[not the right word((:]
Wooh! Shopping galore with Tom!
Aww, that was so cute! The spoon dipping thingy!
LOL at Danny!!!
Moreee(:

weehhh thanks!!!! im sorry kung na late ako, dapat nung wed pa, i thought na save ko sa draft ng ym ko pero di pala, so i type ulit...

btw...

thanks you so much kai... Razz Approve!
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Post  jaschier on Sun Jan 25, 2009 4:25 pm

anika wrote:My gosh!!!!! Tom's an absolute sweetheart!
Dougie was so funny!! I la-la-loved him!!!!
I'm so excited for the next chapters! update soon! Razz

hello anika!!! thanks din!!! sorry, kung na delay nanaman ako sa pag basa ng fic mo, busy ako eh, wait free time ko naman ngayon kaya mag babasa ako ng mga fics... lol... btw thak you thank you talaga... Razz
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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Jan 26, 2009 3:47 pm

jaschier wrote:
KAI wrote:Wooooh, looooong chap. Love it!
However, about the house, everything I saw yesterday was strange for me, it was just Tom who introduced and described everything. I just don’t know why they are playing on my mind, but what I’d just observed was that I learned quickly. Maybe, I used to know them before.
OMG that was very intriguing!!!
Danny pulled Tom out near from me and he insists in whispered that, “Did you just forget why we are staying here in the midst of the woods? Why we are hiding here? Do you remember what we just promised to our self before we live here?”
Whoa. What is that Danny? You're hiding? O_O
I can imagine that the van looked like the Mcfly's mystery van but its a secret so it couldn't be it. Okay nonsense((:
Haha, 17 minutes. Random XD
Yay Tranny!
Haha, I like the part when Dougie bit his lips when Tom was talking about him. It's so natural?[not the right word((:]
Wooh! Shopping galore with Tom!
Aww, that was so cute! The spoon dipping thingy!
LOL at Danny!!!
Moreee(:

weehhh thanks!!!! im sorry kung na late ako, dapat nung wed pa, i thought na save ko sa draft ng ym ko pero di pala, so i type ulit...

btw...

thanks you so much kai... Razz Approve!

S'okay, dude(:
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Post  nikka! on Tue Jan 27, 2009 7:13 pm

AWWW. this is awesome! 8D

omg.. they're so cute together..
i felt like screaming when tom and ashley were together! (but i couldn't 'cause my brother was here)
it felt like they were on a date.. but they really weren't. right? i wish they'd have one soon.
tom is soooo cute and sweet. Very Happy

update.update.
mmkay? clap
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Wed Jan 28, 2009 2:42 pm

nikka! wrote:AWWW. this is awesome! 8D

omg.. they're so cute together..
i felt like screaming when tom and ashley were together! (but i couldn't 'cause my brother was here)
it felt like they were on a date.. but they really weren't. right? i wish they'd have one soon.
tom is soooo cute and sweet. Very Happy

update.update.
mmkay? clap

Thanks for reading, ahmm for Ashe, she didn't know that Tom considerate it as their first date... little did she know...

ahmm yeah thanks again... yeppee!!! Razz
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Post  nikka! on Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:56 pm

jaschier wrote:
nikka! wrote:AWWW. this is awesome! 8D

omg.. they're so cute together..
i felt like screaming when tom and ashley were together! (but i couldn't 'cause my brother was here)
it felt like they were on a date.. but they really weren't. right? i wish they'd have one soon.
tom is soooo cute and sweet. Very Happy

update.update.
mmkay? clap

Thanks for reading, ahmm for Ashe, she didn't know that Tom considerate it as their first date... little did she know...

ahmm yeah thanks again... yeppee!!! Razz

ohhhh... okay.
no prob. i love the story... Very Happy
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Thu Jan 29, 2009 5:51 pm

ahhmmm PRSAA sA AMIN BUKAS, kami ang host, so baka walang pasok, "i'll try" to post the new chaps tommorow Razz
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Post  nikka! on Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:04 pm

jaschier wrote:ahhmmm PRSAA sA AMIN BUKAS, kami ang host, so baka walang pasok, "i'll try" to post the new chaps tommorow Razz

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