My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  nikka! on Tue Feb 17, 2009 7:21 pm

awww... that's so sad. it's okay... we understand. Very Happy
and don't worry. i'm sure you'll find that certain thing that can help you move on or give you inspiration.. Very Happy Very Happy

it's nice to know we can at least help you in some way or make you happy even with just our comments.. ^_^
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:15 pm

jaschier wrote:
KAI wrote:Aww, I can imagine Dougie singing, so cute!
Dougie's extraordinarily cute in this fic.
I ultra love him. As in.
Was that a Pones moment i just read in there? I love it!
Yay! They're friends now! cheers

nah not yet, ahmm that's the next chapter...

btw, i felt so so so really really sad....
coz:

1st, 3 days that i've never visit the forum
2nd, 3 days also that i've never listen to mcfly or to any song...
3rd, i dont feel well today, though i survive in the exam...
4th, i still have so much thing to finish today and tommorow that never ends...
5th, i made my dad so depress... good thing mom was there to comfort everything on us...
6th, i grief for the loss of my best buddy............

so its like i cant almost even think right.. so maybe the fic next would be late this week to be post coz its like i need to find first that could make me move on... that can inspire me or make me forget everything...................................................................... *sigh*

sorry guys, i just really dont feel well..........sorry kung out of topic, i just want to explain...







BTW, KAI, NIKKI AND ANIKA, THANKS SO MUCH, COZ, KAHIT PAPAANO NAPAPA SMILE AKO SA MGA COMMENT NYO.............. THANKS SO MUCH!!!

Aw, s'okay dude. Everything's going to be alright.
It's okay that you weren't able to visit home(i mean the forum) for 3 days. Its understandable coz of school.
What do you mean the loss of your bud? Is he like dead? If so, condolence mate. If not, I'm so so sorry, I didn't really got that.
And you weren't able to listen to Mcfly songs for 3 days? Well, I have a surprise for you(well, not really a good one but whatever lol)
Dedicated to Jaschier: Just tell yourself I'll be okayyy(sings lol)

when everything is going wrong
and things are just a little strange
it's been so long now
you've forgotten how to smile
and over head the skys are clear but it still seems to rain on you
and your only friends all have better things to do

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
oh just tell yourself
ahh, I'll be okay

now things are only getting worse
and you need someone to take the blame
when the love has gone
there's no one to share the pain
been sleepin with the tv on
and lying in an empty bed
all the alcohol in the world would never help me to forget

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
just try a little harder, try your best to make it through the day
oh just tell yourself,
ahh, I'll be okay

you're not alone
you're not alone
you're not alone

just tell yourself...
ahh, I'll be okay

oh just tell yourself
ahh, I'll be okay

won't you tell yourself
ahh, ahh

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
try a little harder try your best to make it through the day
oh just tell yourself,
ahh, I'll be okay

ahh, I'll be okay
ahh, I'll be okay
ahh, I'll be okay



Hope that helps man Approve!
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:34 pm

nikka! wrote:awww... that's so sad. it's okay... we understand. Very Happy
and don't worry. i'm sure you'll find that certain thing that can help you move on or give you inspiration.. Very Happy Very Happy

it's nice to know we can at least help you in some way or make you happy even with just our comments.. ^_^

^ really, everytime i read some comments it makes me feel that someone's really appreciate my work, though i have some errors or fallacies, which makes me feel ashame sometimes... but you understand... thanks for that...

yeah maybe i need to move on... thanks guys though we are far from each other, you all can really make me feel better.... like my friends here, i'm so glad that they care for me...
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:37 pm

KAI wrote:
jaschier wrote:
KAI wrote:Aww, I can imagine Dougie singing, so cute!
Dougie's extraordinarily cute in this fic.
I ultra love him. As in.
Was that a Pones moment i just read in there? I love it!
Yay! They're friends now! cheers

nah not yet, ahmm that's the next chapter...

btw, i felt so so so really really sad....
coz:

1st, 3 days that i've never visit the forum
2nd, 3 days also that i've never listen to mcfly or to any song...
3rd, i dont feel well today, though i survive in the exam...
4th, i still have so much thing to finish today and tommorow that never ends...
5th, i made my dad so depress... good thing mom was there to comfort everything on us...
6th, i grief for the loss of my best buddy............

so its like i cant almost even think right.. so maybe the fic next would be late this week to be post coz its like i need to find first that could make me move on... that can inspire me or make me forget everything...................................................................... *sigh*

sorry guys, i just really dont feel well..........sorry kung out of topic, i just want to explain...







BTW, KAI, NIKKI AND ANIKA, THANKS SO MUCH, COZ, KAHIT PAPAANO NAPAPA SMILE AKO SA MGA COMMENT NYO.............. THANKS SO MUCH!!!

Aw, s'okay dude. Everything's going to be alright.
It's okay that you weren't able to visit home(i mean the forum) for 3 days. Its understandable coz of school.
What do you mean the loss of your bud? Is he like dead? If so, condolence mate. If not, I'm so so sorry, I didn't really got that.
And you weren't able to listen to Mcfly songs for 3 days? Well, I have a surprise for you(well, not really a good one but whatever lol)
Dedicated to Jaschier: Just tell yourself I'll be okayyy(sings lol)

when everything is going wrong
and things are just a little strange
it's been so long now
you've forgotten how to smile
and over head the skys are clear but it still seems to rain on you
and your only friends all have better things to do

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
oh just tell yourself
ahh, I'll be okay

now things are only getting worse
and you need someone to take the blame
when the love has gone
there's no one to share the pain
been sleepin with the tv on
and lying in an empty bed
all the alcohol in the world would never help me to forget

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
just try a little harder, try your best to make it through the day
oh just tell yourself,
ahh, I'll be okay

you're not alone
you're not alone
you're not alone

just tell yourself...
ahh, I'll be okay

oh just tell yourself
ahh, I'll be okay

won't you tell yourself
ahh, ahh

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
try a little harder try your best to make it through the day
oh just tell yourself,
ahh, I'll be okay

ahh, I'll be okay
ahh, I'll be okay
ahh, I'll be okay



Hope that helps man Approve!


Kai, i really appreciate you, nag effort kapa talaga... but IM SO VERY VERY THANKFUL... ahmm maybe ung bagay na un, akin nalang, coz i dont want to remember it anymore its just make me feel really sad... but Kai i'm really getting ok, and here in the forum? i'll be ok...

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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:28 pm

jaschier wrote:
KAI wrote:
jaschier wrote:
KAI wrote:Aww, I can imagine Dougie singing, so cute!
Dougie's extraordinarily cute in this fic.
I ultra love him. As in.
Was that a Pones moment i just read in there? I love it!
Yay! They're friends now! cheers

nah not yet, ahmm that's the next chapter...

btw, i felt so so so really really sad....
coz:

1st, 3 days that i've never visit the forum
2nd, 3 days also that i've never listen to mcfly or to any song...
3rd, i dont feel well today, though i survive in the exam...
4th, i still have so much thing to finish today and tommorow that never ends...
5th, i made my dad so depress... good thing mom was there to comfort everything on us...
6th, i grief for the loss of my best buddy............

so its like i cant almost even think right.. so maybe the fic next would be late this week to be post coz its like i need to find first that could make me move on... that can inspire me or make me forget everything...................................................................... *sigh*

sorry guys, i just really dont feel well..........sorry kung out of topic, i just want to explain...







BTW, KAI, NIKKI AND ANIKA, THANKS SO MUCH, COZ, KAHIT PAPAANO NAPAPA SMILE AKO SA MGA COMMENT NYO.............. THANKS SO MUCH!!!

Aw, s'okay dude. Everything's going to be alright.
It's okay that you weren't able to visit home(i mean the forum) for 3 days. Its understandable coz of school.
What do you mean the loss of your bud? Is he like dead? If so, condolence mate. If not, I'm so so sorry, I didn't really got that.
And you weren't able to listen to Mcfly songs for 3 days? Well, I have a surprise for you(well, not really a good one but whatever lol)
Dedicated to Jaschier: Just tell yourself I'll be okayyy(sings lol)

when everything is going wrong
and things are just a little strange
it's been so long now
you've forgotten how to smile
and over head the skys are clear but it still seems to rain on you
and your only friends all have better things to do

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
oh just tell yourself
ahh, I'll be okay

now things are only getting worse
and you need someone to take the blame
when the love has gone
there's no one to share the pain
been sleepin with the tv on
and lying in an empty bed
all the alcohol in the world would never help me to forget

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
just try a little harder, try your best to make it through the day
oh just tell yourself,
ahh, I'll be okay

you're not alone
you're not alone
you're not alone

just tell yourself...
ahh, I'll be okay

oh just tell yourself
ahh, I'll be okay

won't you tell yourself
ahh, ahh

when you're down and lost
and you need a helping hand
when you're down and lost along the way
try a little harder try your best to make it through the day
oh just tell yourself,
ahh, I'll be okay

ahh, I'll be okay
ahh, I'll be okay
ahh, I'll be okay



Hope that helps man Approve!


Kai, i really appreciate you, nag effort kapa talaga... but IM SO VERY VERY THANKFUL... ahmm maybe ung bagay na un, akin nalang, coz i dont want to remember it anymore its just make me feel really sad... but Kai i'm really getting ok, and here in the forum? i'll be ok...

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Sure, no problem, I understand Cool
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  nikka! on Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:37 pm

jaschier wrote:
nikka! wrote:awww... that's so sad. it's okay... we understand. Very Happy
and don't worry. i'm sure you'll find that certain thing that can help you move on or give you inspiration.. Very Happy Very Happy

it's nice to know we can at least help you in some way or make you happy even with just our comments.. ^_^

^ really, everytime i read some comments it makes me feel that someone's really appreciate my work, though i have some errors or fallacies, which makes me feel ashame sometimes... but you understand... thanks for that...

yeah maybe i need to move on... thanks guys though we are far from each other, you all can really make me feel better.... like my friends here, i'm so glad that they care for me...

welcome.. and no prob. we're always ready to cheer up fellow mcfly fans even if we are a million miles away.. hahaha. we stick together! yey! ^_^
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:49 pm

^^^ thanks guys.. btw, this comming wed or thursday i'll try to post the next chapter... i miss my fic na rin...
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:22 pm

Chapter 11: General Cleaning

“Ashley… Ashley…Ashe… wake up… wake up Ashe.” They shook up my shoulder lightly.

“Ashe… Ashe…” They called boldly.

I was stirred up with my senses. I gently opened my eyes and I saw Tom and Harry looking at me like they were worrying.

“Sorry Ashe, if we woke you up, but you were like having a nightmare. We can here you mumbling awkwardly.” Tom said.

“Yeah, so we thought that you are having a bad dream, so we decided to wake you up.” Harry added.

I stood up immediately from the couch and rubbed my face.

“It’s ok.” I stretched my arms.

“So what is your dream?” Tom asked.

I held on my head and tried to remember my dream, but unluckily I cannot call back anything into my mind.

“I’m sorry Tom, but I cannot remember anything.” I said.

“Aw, it’s ok.” Harry said.

“Wait, how come did I end down here in the couch?” I asked with puzzled reaction.

“What? You don’t know also how did you got down here? You don’t know why you slept in the couch?” Tom asked.

They were baffled…

“I’m sorry, but I just can’t really remember anything, on how did I end here.” I said.

I was bewildered… because all I know was that I slept in my bed…

“Ahmm… when I woke up this morning, I was astonished when I saw you sleeping angelically in the couch, and I thought that after you rouse up in your bed, you took back a nap down here. So I didn’t attempt to awake you. So I could stare on you.” Harry explained and smiled.

I smiled back and blushed a little bit.

Tom nudged him and said, “You know, you’re not helping. You are just flattering Ashe to get her impress with you.” He felt a little bit jealous and overcame by Harry beyond my eyes.

“Hey, why, would you deny it if you were in my shoes?” Harry asked.

“I don’t know… but I know you are just lying…” Tom reckoned.

“Hey guys, scrap it out.” I interrupted them from scrapping.

I flipped my hair and sighed. I really wondered, on how I ended down here. I could not remember anything, but, I could recall back what happened last night.

I smiled then; I was carried away with my emotion.

“Oh, Ashe, why are you smiling?” Tom asked.

“Oh… ahmm… it’s nothing… ahmm… oh yeah, wait, why you two were dress up like that?” I asked to change the topic, hoping that they would get rid of it.

“Oh yeah! Good thing you ask it Ashe. I and Harry will go to town today. We’re going to buy some tools for planting, so we could plant the shrubs and flowers that are stuck in the garage that we bought last time in the town, because they are starting to wither and look weak.” Tom answered.

“…And Danny was already there in the town, waiting us to assist him.” Harry added.

“Danny?” I expressed.

“Yes, Danny, he went there first in the town this early morning.” Tom said.

“How about Dougie?” I asked.

“Oh yeah, Dougie will stay here in the house to start some general cleaning.” Harry said.

“Dougie alone?” I asked back.

“Hmmm… alone, until we get back, but, we’re not sure what will be the time.” Tom said.


“Ok.” I understood.

I sought at Dougie and I saw him in the kitchen with a white head-band that tied tightly in his head, while working hardly in mopping the floor.

“Ahmm, can I help Dougie?” I earnestly asked.

The two looked each other and decided that, “Ok, sure, if you want, but don’t work too much, we don’t want you to get really tired.” Tom said.

“Sure! I promise I’ll be ok.” I jumped from gladness and hugged them both; Tom and Harry.

They both cheered and chuckled from me.

But little did we know, Dougie noticed us; he meekly watching us like we’re having a great and happy bonding moment, without his presence, that made him felt so alone…

“Ok Ashley, it’s already 9:15 we need to go now in the town.” Harry said.

“Ok, be careful there.” I expressed.

“Hey Dougie, take care of her… Ashley.” Tom called his attention and thumbed up at him.

Dougie turned around and thumbed back and nodded, and smiled positively.

“Bye Dougie, bye Ashe.” They parted from us.

They got rid into the van and went directly to the road.


Its all about me and Dougie then - Only me and Dougie…

Before I commence to work in cleaning, I charged myself so I could have enough strength to help Dougie…

Afterwards, I went in the random area to get some stuff for cleaning. I picked the dust-cloths and the spray gun with a 50% solution.

Then, I went modestly over the windows on the living room and began in polishing in its mirrors, with Dougie beside me vacuuming the carpeted floor.

“Hi Dougie!” I greeted and jostled him lightly.

He glanced at me and greeted back with a baby smile on his face.

“Why you’re so quiet?” I asked him while I’m wiping a window.

He paused to think, and he said, “Hmmm… I’m just really like this when I work and clean.” He continued to move.

However, he was encouraged to talk with me…

“Hmmm… Ashe, what are you doing?” Dougie asked.

“Isn’t obvious, I’m cleaning…” I answered.

“I know, but, what is your reason?” He asked back.

“Simply, to help you, because I want to join you in cleaning.” I yearned.

Then I smiled at him, as a sign of my will to help him…

Dougie suddenly flitted from the fling; his heart was secretly thumped by a joy and his cheeks were lit with sweet cherries.

Then, he chuckled boldly that surprised me so much.

“Why?” I asked him.

“Oh, its nothing.” He shook his head like a puppy.

But deep inside, he was tweaked with happiness.

“Ok.” I giggled.

Then, I climbed on the broad sash of the window to reach the top windows, so I could polish it.

“Hey Ashe, do you need a hand?” Dougie asked.

“Don’t worry, I can do this.” I said optimistically.

“Ok, be careful then.” He cautioned.

“Yes I will…” I gabbled.


But unluckily, I accidentally slid in the edges. I squeaked and thought that I’m doom.

But in the second moment of secondness, faster than the beam of light, Dougie saved me at his best in his firm arms on a whim of his adrenaline.

I was totally surprised then. I could not believe that he would catch me heroically…

He was still carrying me safely. I gazed gently at his eyes that are welled up with fire, and with nothing words left to say.

Then, we both blushed bashfully. Our hearts were pumping quickly as we stared each other. It’s like our world stopped in moving for a moment…


Until suddenly, Dougie got nosebleed that stirred us from consciousness.

He carefully putted me down as he held his breath from his nose.

I worried at him.

“Dougie, are you ok?” I asked anxiously.

“Yeah, don’t worry, I’m fine.” He covered his nose and hobbled to the lavatory at the kitchen.

He opened the faucet and he washed his face particularly his nose.

I grabbed some tissue over the drawer and I gave it to Dougie to use it in his nose.

“Are you sure you’re ok?” I cared much to Dougie.

“Yeah, I’m really, really ok now. By the way, thank you for your help and care.” He expressed.

“No, I should be the one who should express a gratitude. Ahmm, thank you so much, you save me from fall.” I bowed courteously.

Dougie drew near in me and he suddenly held up my chin. He softly lifted my head as he said smoothly, “Ashe, that’s too much… but your welcome.” He grinned.

I smiled broadly at him, I really appreciated his politeness.

However, from his hardship, I suddenly wiped out his sweats, near from his right ear. But he giggled because he was tickled with my soft left hand.

Nevertheless, he looks so cute, he was so adorable…

“Dougie, I think you need to have a rest now, because you look so tired.” I suggested modestly.

“No Ashe… I think, I’ll not going to need a rest now… because you already swept out my tiredness.” He said fervently.

I was flattered then…


“Ok, then lets get back to work!” I cheered with much excitement.

“Yeah, let’s continue our general cleaning.” He chimed.

But because of so much excitement, I unconsciously sprayed up the shorts of Dougie, by the spray gun that I was holding.

He appeared then like he peed on his shorts…

“Oops, sorry.” I asked for an apology. But deep inside, I want to burst some belly laugh in him.

He looked at me suspiciously and he said, “I think you’re not ready to work… I think you’re ready to play a game with me.” He grinned.

Then suddenly, he tickled me at my waist and i tickled him back, and we both burst from laugh… I snickered over the lane and sprayed him again; we tag all along from having fun… we ran all over the living room; chasing each other cheerfully… we tickled, teased, tweak and tingled from one another...


Until Dougie caught me and he grabbed me tightly, and we stumbled down from the floor. I’m in his bottom leaning over the floor.


We were squelched into silence... and we looked each other in our eyes…


And Dougie said earnestly, “Ashe, sometimes you make me fell alone, but more often than not, you make me feel happy.”


I was surprised. My heart was skipping from nervous…

Then Dougie expressed his first especial affection from me. He attempted to kiss me from my lips…

But suddenly, the door from the main door opened…


It was Danny, and he saw us…




(To be continued…)


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Post  jaschier on Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:29 pm

sa wakas na post ko na rin hehe, late talaga ako sa pag post... Razz busy kasi sa school, my battery exam kami sa summer, at super kaba na me... hehe..

btw, note sa chapter 11, si dougie was about to kiss Ashley, hindi pa sila nag kikiss, at, parang unconscious dun si Ashe, at di nya alam ung gagawin nya...Dougie ay mapusok lang talaga... hehe

btw, malapit na ang second round ng mga boys... after 3 chaps.....

next chap? di ko pa alam ung title dun...

sige guys... good evening na lang sa inyo!!!! Razz Razz

i'll update this week din..

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Post  jaschier on Wed Mar 04, 2009 3:27 pm

ahh, guys, ma lalate me this week sa pag post ng next chap, coz finals na namin.. hehe...

and i dont think i could visit this forum for 2 to 3 days... Razz
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Post  kaisthelimit on Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:24 pm

Yay, Dougie and Ashe moment!
I love Dougie<33
Ahhhhhhhh! Danny! Why did you have to come now? Why?
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  anika on Fri Mar 06, 2009 10:51 pm

Aw... Sure thing jaschier. I'm glad I got to inspire you too. I'm here to support you mate. Very Happy Very Happy
WAAAH!! Aw.. Dougie and ashley are so cute!!! haha. Dougie's simply to die for here! Aw Dougie! And he saved her! wooohoooo wooohoooo wooohoooo
WHOA!!! Danny came! What's gonna happen???
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:05 pm

KAI wrote:Yay, Dougie and Ashe moment!
I love Dougie<33
Ahhhhhhhh! Danny! Why did you have to come now? Why?

tnks kai... yeah danny really need to interrupt them... or else!..

btw, maybe the next chap will on nexst monday... malapit na kasi ang summer!

thanks ulit kai!
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Post  jaschier on Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:11 pm

anika wrote:Aw... Sure thing jaschier. I'm glad I got to inspire you too. I'm here to support you mate. Very Happy Very Happy
WAAAH!! Aw.. Dougie and ashley are so cute!!! haha. Dougie's simply to die for here! Aw Dougie! And he saved her! wooohoooo wooohoooo wooohoooo
WHOA!!! Danny came! What's gonna happen???


haha... idk for the right reaction of danny but i'm just going to make a hint, its like his trust for Ashley will tintly degrade, its like he start to doubt again.... but after 3 chap yeaH FOR SURE THEY WILL...........

OW, THE NEXT CHAP WILL BE, I THINK ON MONDAY!


TNKS ANIKA, YEAH I REALLY LOVE YOUR FIC, ITS THE ONE THAT INSPIRES ME TO GO FOR THE FIC! Smile
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Post  anika on Sat Mar 14, 2009 12:51 am

^ Aw.... Thanks jaschier! I never knew that. haha. Thanks!
I love your fic too! Razz
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  nikka! on Wed Mar 25, 2009 9:23 pm

Yehey! I finally had time to read your update.. Very Happy

Wow! The moment we've all been waiting for.. the dougie-ashley moment! hahaha!
that was great!! dougie saves her and almost kisses her.. aww! why did danny have to come in on that particular moment? tsk.tsk. What a Face

the story's really interesting.. update soon! Approve!
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Thu Mar 26, 2009 3:44 pm

nikka! wrote:Yehey! I finally had time to read your update.. Very Happy

Wow! The moment we've all been waiting for.. the dougie-ashley moment! hahaha!
that was great!! dougie saves her and almost kisses her.. aww! why did danny have to come in on that particular moment? tsk.tsk. What a Face

the story's really interesting.. update soon! Approve!

ow, i almost forgot my fic! hehe not really! actually, i'm just having a rest, dapat lastweek pa ung next chap, but we had our finals... and i'm starting to edit na for the others, at for my new fic, coz i have a new story... pero sabi ko, my current fic pa akong dapat tapusin, so medyo na delay me... however the next chap maybe tommorow or sa monday... butit summer na... Razz

btw nikki, thank for reading... Razz i appreciate much!
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  nikka! on Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:28 pm

WOW! you have a new fic? cool...
oh, okay.. we'll wait for your next update! Very Happy
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:07 pm

Chapter 12: General Cleaning part 2 (A Frown-of-Hapiness)


My world stopped…

I can’t move from the slumped body of Dougie. He accidentally overlaid in me from a grappling stumble.

I felt like a deaf and cold inside from the quick beat of my heart from the closeness that I never thought to have with Dougie.

Yet on the verge of intimacy, I could feel the warm soul of Dougie. He was like overwhelmed by a fire as he cocked stiffly his thick eyes on my face with his thirsting mouth. He didn’t even blink or move for once, like he was hypnotized.

“Ashe, I can’t explain this feeling that I feel for you, but all I know now is that I can’t help myself to resist to k....” Dougie thought in his mind.

Then he calmly closed his eyes and passionately drew down his face over me with his lips that are slightly pouted… without any idea on his affection for me…

Promptly, the main door opened. It was Danny who just came back from the town. He saw us, witnessing the progressing attempt of Dougie to kiss me.

“Oh bloody-hell, DOUGIE!” Danny yelled up. His eyes got widened. He was exceedingly shocked.

Dougie was suddenly agitated and halted from his attempt; he was completely stirred up against his emotion and surprised from the sudden arrival of Danny, as he quickly caught his attention to him.

I was totally dazed and surprised too. I didn’t expect Danny. However, I was clueless in his bizarre reaction.

“Danny…” lightly expressed by Dougie.

Dougie lifted himself and gave me a hand. I carefully stood along with his help and fixed myself.

“Ashley, are you ok?” Dougie asked. He realized what just happened, he realized he did something wrong, and something’s not right that bothers him and left him guilty and shallow.

“I’m ok, I just have small pain at my back.” I said as I pressed my back with cockled face.

“Oh Ashe, I’m sorry… I-I just failed to control myself… and I felt like I was preoccupied. I’m really, really sorry Ashe.” Dougie said as he eased my back.

“Its ok maybe this won’t take long.” I replied and gave him a smile to suppress him.

Danny set aside his plastic bag that he was carrying, and walked seriously toward us.

“Ashe, are you sure you’re alright?” Danny asked me.

“Yeah, I’m fine.” I nodded and smiled.

“Ok, then, will you excuse us Ashe for a while, I think Dougie and I need to talk outside.” Danny said as he stared Dougie indifferently.

“Come on Dougie, let’s talk outside.” Danny pulled Dougie outside the main door.


I was left alone in the living room wondering what they would talk about and worrying if there’s any problem.


“Wow Danny, you always surprise me. Why you’re so early?” Mildly asked by Dougie.

“Simply because I’m done, and it’s been 4 hours that I’ve been there in the town, and you know that I should not stay and expose myself for a long time over there.” Broadly explained by Danny.

“Wait, why are you asking me? I should be the one who should ask you right now.” Danny uttered.

“Well I’m just asking, prying in the reason.” Dougie gulped as he held his knuckles.

“Ok enough…! So what are you doing?” Seriously asked by Danny.

“Well I’m currently standing in front of you now.” Dougie said.

“Will you work on your mind!? I’m serious over here. What I mean is what I saw a while ago.” Danny exclaimed.

“Huh… I-I-I-I’m just enjoying.” Dougie stuttered.

“H-what!?” Danny sounded out.

“I-I-I mean Ashe and I… were just having fun with each other.” Dougie elaborated.

“Huh? You and Ashe were just having fun with each other?” Danny quoted.

“Yeah…”Dougie nodded.

Danny still didn’t get it, but he wanted to get directly on his point, particularly to the scene that surprised him when he arrived.

But before he directly ask Dougie in his point, he noticed something to Dougie that caught his attention.

“Hey, what a dorky thing that happen to your shorts? They look so soppy. Did you pee on it?” Danny thought it was nasty.

“No… I did not” Dougie shrugged on a whim. “Actually this is the origin of all this sudden craze and astounding crank. Though it began with Ashley when she encouraged me to get back on work, but I cracked on it when she accidentally sprayed on my shorts. So I thought that she was not into work and she was into a game, although she asked for an apology, I chimed in her on my will. We tag along and chased each other, up to the point that we stumbled and flopped to our moment… and then that’s the time you came on and surprised me.” Dougie sighed and thought that he said everything to Danny.


… I heard some flabby noise from their conversation, and it besought me inside to hear it clearly. It just made me worrier for what I thought to Danny and Dougie. Because of my curiosity, I peeped at the nearest window to watch and listen in their conversation, but unluckily, I couldn’t understand anything, it was still obscure for me. Yet, I saw Dougie with his sheepish face, calmly explaining something to Danny…


“Yeah, I surprised you, because I caught you that you were about to kiss Ashley. Now, how could you explain that to me?” Danny expressed his main point.

Dougie was suddenly became a heartfelt man in Danny’s question. He sighed once more and pondered. He dug his hands in his pockets and bowed down his head with his slumped shoulder, and blow-up his bangs through his breath, “I just don’t know Danny… I can’t explain… I was just engrossed in my feelings for her… but I know what are you trying to tell with me right now… I know we have a promise… I know it’s hard to forget our pass, and because of her it reminds you how hard we’ve been through… but Ashley has nothing to do with that… she is different… if you would just know her, maybe you would understand me and feel the same way too.” He said sincerely.

Danny was squelched and felt Dougie’s sincerity. But Danny was still firm with his point of view.

Danny brotherly held Dougie at his shoulder and he said, “Dougie, it’s not about Ashley, its about you, because what I’m trying to tell was that, it is not right to show your affection for her like that neither to have feelings for her from the start. For the reason that she only stays here in our house because were trying to help her, until she get back her memory and nothing else should be. So there shouldn’t be that kind of feeling because that is complicated… and look what did that kind of feeling brought to you, to us… look at yourself, look at our life, we’re hiding in a place that it shouldn’t be live. So I hope you would understand that, because I care for you and all us here…”


Because of my conscience that guilt’s me; I suddenly ran out to the main door and interfered with their conversation.

“Danny, please, its not his fault, its my fault that you didn’t met us working inside the house. But I promise, that we will going to continue it, just enough from scolding Dougie.” I begged earnestly.

The guys got surprised on me…

“Ashe…” Danny tittered with his right hand.

“I’m not scolding him. Actually, I’m just seriously saying to him how important he was in my life. I just want him to realize it. Right Dougie?” Danny tapped Dougie’s shoulder.

“Yeah, and I’m touched, and overwhelmed with happiness.” Dougie wiped an imaginary tear.

“Aww… sorry, because I saw you over there in the window, and you look like a down-hearted man, and I thought that you were been chiding by Danny for not seeing us working…” I apologized and got a shamefaced.

“No Ashe… it’s just a frown-of-happiness.” Dougie smiled sheepishly. But deep inside, he was so blue.

“Aw… I’m so sorry. If you want, I’ll just go back inside and do some unfinished works, so you two can continue back in your conversation.” I bit my lips.

“No Ashe, we’re just exactly done.” Danny said. “So… I guess I need to go inside now, to place the things that I bought in the town, and so I could also give you two a hand in work.” He putted off his hands to Dougie and went inside the house.

“Oh Dougie, I didn’t know that Danny was that so sweet.” I said to Dougie.

“Ashe, there’s a lot of things you still didn’t know.” Dougie grinned and pinched my nose softly.

I snuffed and grinned lightly…


“Maybe Danny has a point, maybe he was right… I shouldn’t do that to Ashe, I shouldn’t abuse her being innocent and precious to us... Maybe I’ll just wait for the right time… if there’s a right time.” Dougie said in his mind.


Dougie held on my hands, and he whispered in my ears, “I’m sorry Ashe.”

“For what?” I asked. I was confounded.

“Just take it Ashe for me... please…” He begged and smiled.

“Ok…” I nodded and smiled back at him, thinking that it was just nothing.

Then Dougie gently pulled me near the main door, and he said, “Come on Ashe, let’s go back to work.” He opened the door for me.

“Yeah, before Tom and Harry gets back.” I replied.


And so, we went back inside the house to continue our unfinished business.





Thoroughly well with Danny, we work hard from time to time…

We even tried to not make any fun things so we could concentrate in our works…

And tried to enjoy it with our all our hearts…




(To be continued…)
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:15 pm

guys, sorry... i'm always late... at di punctual sa pag post, its been three weeks from now, at matagal tagal yun, i hope you are still in the story, i just have a hard time in editing this chap, coz i over done it, and i have to cut it, coz di pa me tapos sa katuloy nito, however na type na sya kaya maybe this friday i'll post it(eto nanaman Razz )

so guys i hope you still understand the story... study

enjoy in reading... thanks Approve!

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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  anika on Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:45 pm

^ awww.... Dougie's so cute? Especially when he was answering Danny's questions!! haha. Razz Razz Razz
OOOH. What happened to them anyway? Danny was dead serious. aww....
Hope things work out. Very Happy
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Thu Apr 02, 2009 3:27 pm

anika wrote:^ awww.... Dougie's so cute? Especially when he was answering Danny's questions!! haha. Razz Razz Razz
OOOH. What happened to them anyway? Danny was dead serious. aww....
Hope things work out. Very Happy


yeah danny was so serious, but after few chaps, he will get back to his norms... so excited to post that... ahmm its a lil bit complicated, i know, but they just argue, but they will get long when tom and harry will get back soon...

and that is my next chap...

chapter 13: garden!

btw, thanks anika!
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:39 pm

Aww, Dougie's so cute. I love you
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  jaschier on Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:46 pm

kai(: wrote:Aww, Dougie's so cute. I love you

thanks kai, oh yeah i forgot last friday, this week i'll update.. hehe... thanks ulit!
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Re: My McFly: My Girl-Girl next door (The Heart Never Lies) Chapter 12

Post  kaisthelimit on Tue Apr 07, 2009 5:50 pm

jaschier wrote:[quote:6628="kai(:"]Aww, Dougie's so cute. I love you

thanks kai, oh yeah i forgot last friday, this week i'll update.. hehe... thanks ulit![/quote]

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