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when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  ButterflyBibish on Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:49 pm

hey guys..it's my first one-shot fic...inaaliw ko lang sarili ko kaya sinulat ko 'to ng 10 mins or something... Laughing

"i'm sorry" he pleaded giving me a bouquet of flowers but i ignored him...
as far as i've remembered, it was this day that i've been longing for...
not to mention my favorite season...fall...i chuckled


flashback

i was walking through the road all over the leaves...it was fall and i loved it...spring is my 2nd fave....i looked up into the sky to see the clear,bright sun which made my hair look reddish brown..i smelled the fresh air and watched the leaves continuously fall....i was wearing an off-white tank top matched with a baggy brown jumper shorts which i made it hang around together with a flat shoes that goes well with my long flowy hair...when i finished smelling the air, i looked down until i saw my foot...the leaves were moving around me..why would that be..i wondered...before i could look up...i was running hand grasped by danny...
"what do you think you're doing?" i asked him running along, Danny's been my friend for a year now at school..he's the popular guy on our school and we met hilariously..a long long story....anyways..
"just run..." he said and i could tell he's pretty tired and out of breath
but i think he could hold up...he led me to a beautiful place...there are trees around and full of leaves falling...a place where no one could find us..
"where are we?" i asked him puzzled while waiting for an answer
"i found this weeks ago.." he finally spoke after that long run, i guess he recovered fast from that tiring run
"i have to tell you something!"
"what's up? why here?" i asked looking rather confused
"well, you see, it's like this.." he started
"hey!" i paused "don't beat around the bush..." i demanded
"fine..." he said irritatedly " but let me finish first..."
"we've been friends and i don't want to ruin it..." he exlained
"why would you think something would go wrong?" i interrupted
"ssshh...." he said walking towards me "rayne..." he called out..it's actually raynalise but he prefer rayne..
"what?" i said in a startled voice...
"i like you so much, i've been a jerk for not telling you this...!" he admitted..i didn't answered and i gave him a stare and to top that, narrow-eyed
"look! if you don't like it, we'll stick to friends and~~" he paused and saw me crying, i didn't noticed that something trickled down my cheeks...
" hey! don't cry...." he said wiping my tears "can you say something?" before i could speak..i sighed and remembered to exhale...
"er.." i gulped" don't worry...i'm happy..at least you were honest" i complimented
"so?!" he asked dazzling
"yes... i like the place ..it's cool..." i changed the topic
"rayne.." he scolded
"fine! i like you too...!" he smiled and hugged me...after that we kissed...and it was the perfect time..the leaves fell wind blowing and i'm with my fave guy with my fave season..it was my happiest day yet...
end of flashbakc

"how could i resist you?" i grinned taking the flowers...
"i'll never forget our anniversary... i just waited for something.." he explained
"how can i angry be with you..? we should be happy..." i gave him a warm smile
"i was late because" he continued and grabbed something from his pocket...my eyes widened and saw an engagement ring...i gave him a nod...he hugged me tight
"thank you so much for making me happy.." i said sobbing
"no..i thank you for making the happiest man in this world...danny whispered kissing my neck..
the end...

one-shots are always cheesy...yikes...lol... bounce
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:41 pm

Aaaahhhhhhh! That was sweet!!!! I love you
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  ButterflyBibish on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:03 pm

KAI wrote:Aaaahhhhhhh! That was sweet!!!! I love you

tnx...lol.. tongue
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:11 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
KAI wrote:Aaaahhhhhhh! That was sweet!!!! I love you

tnx...lol.. tongue

No problem(:
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  ButterflyBibish on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:32 pm

KAI wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
KAI wrote:Aaaahhhhhhh! That was sweet!!!! I love you

tnx...lol.. tongue

No problem(:

i was just having fun..haha...it's not that good anyways...haha...i hate cheesy things but i ain't have a choice.. lol!
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:42 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
KAI wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
KAI wrote:Aaaahhhhhhh! That was sweet!!!! I love you

tnx...lol.. tongue

No problem(:

i was just having fun..haha...it's not that good anyways...haha...i hate cheesy things but i ain't have a choice.. lol!

Hahaha, I've noticed na pag one-shot laging cheesy.
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  ButterflyBibish on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:54 pm

kaya nga..LOL..yan din sabi ni kerstien kagabi nung binasa ko yan sa kanya sa notebook ko..lol...sa phone ko sinabi...LOL... Razz
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:59 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:kaya nga..LOL..yan din sabi ni kerstien kagabi nung binasa ko yan sa kanya sa notebook ko..lol...sa phone ko sinabi...LOL... Razz

Hahaha. But I've read one that isn't cheesy. If you want to read it. It's in the fic, 19(: Its's so sad:(
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  ButterflyBibish on Sun Jan 11, 2009 6:00 pm

ok..kita ko nga..lol..babasahin ko yun..
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Jan 11, 2009 6:02 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:ok..kita ko nga..lol..babasahin ko yun..

Hahaha. Okay(:
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  jaschier on Mon Jan 12, 2009 2:07 pm

hehe its really sweet.... Razz
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  ButterflyBibish on Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:33 pm

jaschier wrote:hehe its really sweet.... Razz

tnx...i was in a hurry when i made this,, bounce
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  PuDd_T on Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:16 pm

hehe yeah, it is cheesy Smile but it's real nice Very Happy compliments to the chef author! lol Razz
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Post  anika on Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:03 pm

Aw..... How sweet! I don't think it's that cheesy at all. haha. Razz Razz Razz
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:46 pm

anika wrote:Aw..... How sweet! I don't think it's that cheesy at all. haha. Razz Razz Razz

LOL...tnx for reading..i was in a hurry.. Razz
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:48 pm

PuDd_T wrote:hehe yeah, it is cheesy Smile but it's real nice Very Happy compliments to the chef author! lol Razz

cheesy diba!!!sarap,...LOL...tnx for reading..madalian lang to... Razz
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Post  anika on Sat Jan 17, 2009 8:17 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
anika wrote:Aw..... How sweet! I don't think it's that cheesy at all. haha. Razz Razz Razz

LOL...tnx for reading..i was in a hurry.. Razz

Ooh. You were in a hurry? Well then, that makes it impressive. haha. Good job. cheers
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Jan 17, 2009 8:21 pm

anika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
anika wrote:Aw..... How sweet! I don't think it's that cheesy at all. haha. Razz Razz Razz

LOL...tnx for reading..i was in a hurry.. Razz

Ooh. You were in a hurry? Well then, that makes it impressive. haha. Good job. cheers

LOL...i was just bored though..and it was cold... tongue
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:56 am

cheesy! XD
I love cheese, by the way! =))
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Re: when fall comes (one-shot)

Post  ButterflyBibish on Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:53 pm

hahaha..me too..love cheese so much...lol...
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