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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:50 am

TITLE: The End
AUTHOR:Kerstien
CHARACTERS: Lexi Evans and the rest of McFLY
DISCLAIMER: I don't know McFLY personally okay... This is 101% FICTION!
NOTE: Sorry about the grammar, I'm not really good at those things. Razz

It's funny how one person that is so dear to you, would disappear in a blink of an eye.

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Harry, Dougie and I were chilling at Tom's house. Actually, I needed their help. Danny and I are not in good terms.

"What did he tell you?" Tom asked me.
"He told me that he didn't mean it and he's sorry"
"But?"
I sighed. "But I don't think I was ready to forgive him."
"What about now?" Harry asked.
I feel horrible. I should've forgiven him then."

The phone rang and Dougie ran to answer it.

"Yeah, she's here...'kay, bye!" then he hang up.
"Uh, Danny's on his way" he said.
"You have to sort things out with your boyfriend.."
Harry and Dougie nodded in agreement.

I groaned and headed to the kitchen to get some Coke.
It started to rain hard when I finished my second can. I headed to the window to see if Danny has arrived.
I was just in time. He was across the street, soaking wet. I ran to open the door.

"C'mon, you're gonna be sick!" I yelled. The three other guys followed me out.

Danny got something from his back pocket, but it fell so he ran to pick it up.
"Danny!!" the four of us shouted.

But it was too late.
A ten-wheeler truck passed by, hitting him.

Tears were starting to fall while the four of us ran to comfort Danny.
As expected, my hands turned red when I touched him. His eyes were closed and he was no longer moving.

We still managed to take him to the hospital.
The guys were trying to fight back their tears while helping me to calm down, when the doctor came out.

"I'm sorry," was all he said. Then, he walked away.

I get it. He's gone. He's gone and he's never coming back.
"Sorry," I sobbed.
"It's not your fault. Things do happen." Tom comforted me.

Dougie handed me something.

"It fell and he picked it up, then...it happened." he sighed.
It was a small velvet box. I opened it.
It was a ring. A very cute ring, with diamonds on it.

"He will love you forever." Harry patted my back.

Even though he's gone, I will remember him always.
He will be with me wherever I go and I will never stop loving him.

Dance -FIN-Dance




P.S.
Sorry if it's a bit emo or whatever you wanna call it.
I just wanted to make something different, so please
don't hate me! =))
I love Danny, and this will NEVER happen to him right?
Peace mates!
and sorry if I truly suck!


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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:58 am

Oh my gosh!!! So saaaaaaaaaaad!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sad Sad Sad Sad Sad
I love it anyway. hahaha. I'm not really the kind of person who'd always love happy endings. I do enjoy tragic ones as well.
Niiice. I loved it!! cheers cheers
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:02 am

^ Aw, thanks mate.
I enjoy tragic stories too! Razz
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:07 am

Kerstien wrote:^ Aw, thanks mate.
I enjoy tragic stories too! Razz

hahaha. Cool! I dunno. Tragic stories have a cool edge to them. That's why I love Romeo and Juliet very very much. Tragic, but awesome. LOL. Oooh. I also feel the same way about Titanic. Razz Razz
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:09 am

I was thinking about Romeo and Juliet.
Never thought of Titanic, but, yeah! It's tragic naman eh..
Tragics make me realize that all of us can't have happy ever afters, you know what I mean? XD
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:18 am

Kerstien wrote:I was thinking about Romeo and Juliet.
Never thought of Titanic, but, yeah! It's tragic naman eh..
Tragics make me realize that all of us can't have happy ever afters, you know what I mean? XD

I know! That's what's so cool about tragedy! Sometimes I hate it when a film becomes too much of a happily ever after. It's kinda lame at times. hahaha. Razz
Besides, life isn't a fairy tale. Very Happy
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:25 am

^ True dat!
I can't agree more mate. Wink
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:27 am

Kerstien wrote:^ True dat!
I can't agree more mate. Wink
hahaha. By the way, I'm curious. What did they fight about? Very Happy
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:29 am

I honestly don't know. LOL!
Weird right?
But I was thinking just a random fight that Danny started.
I've never been in a relationship so I can't tell those kind of stuff! lol!
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:33 am

^ hahaha. Oh okay! I thought there was a specific reason! Razz
Danny started it? Aw... That makes it even more tragic! hahaha. Poor Danny..
Oh well. I guess it's pretty natural to have fights. haha. I dunno. Almost all the couples around me get into major fights. Then they'd be all emo during break-ups and cut themselves up. Then they'd be saying really deep words, but I dunno if they even understand what they're saying. haha.
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:38 am

LOL!
Exactly! But the people I know don't cut, they just cry and I'm like It's just a guy!
Hello, there are other guys out there! McFLY for example! XD
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:43 am

Kerstien wrote:LOL!
Exactly! But the people I know don't cut, they just cry and I'm like It's just a guy!
Hello, there are other guys out there! McFLY for example! XD

hahaha. I know! The people I know cut themselves up. haha.
Yup. It's just a guy. And this world has billions of people.
Yup!! I agree! Like McFly! haha. They're very hot anyway. Razz
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Post  maia 8D on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:51 am

*gasp*
DANNY?!? NOOOOOOOOOOOOO~
*knocks on wood*

*sniff* *sob* Sad TT_TT

I like tragic endings too. but not when it's mcfly! O_O :O

good job, though. i don't mind emo stories. i find them very moving. and even though it was short, i liked it. Very Happy

but. but. DANNYYYYYYYY! Sad
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:54 am

^ I know!
Sorry though.. Very Happy
and thanks for reading, mate!

anika wrote:
hahaha. I know! The people I know cut themselves up. haha.
Yup. It's just a guy. And this world has billions of people.
Yup!! I agree! Like McFly! haha. They're very hot anyway. :Razz:

Very very hot, indeed!
and very talented and that's a plus!
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:56 am

^ LOL!! hahaha. Of course! Not to mention gorgeous! Razz Razz
Gosh. Gosh. I'm feeling hyper. hahaha.
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Post  maia 8D on Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:02 am

Kerstien wrote:^ I know!
Sorry though.. Very Happy
and thanks for reading, mate!

anika wrote:
hahaha. I know! The people I know cut themselves up. haha.
Yup. It's just a guy. And this world has billions of people.
Yup!! I agree! Like McFly! haha. They're very hot anyway. :Razz:

Very very hot, indeed!
and very talented and that's a plus!

haha. tis fine. won't happen anytime soon, eh?
no prob. no worries. no sheep. Wink
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:05 am

^ Exactly mate!
no prob. no worries. no sheep! XD


anika wrote:
^ LOL!! hahaha. Of course! Not to mention gorgeous! Razz Razz
Gosh. Gosh. I'm feeling hyper. hahaha.

LOL!!
I'm always hyper when talking about them McFLYers!
They're so awesome, that you just can't describe how awesome they are! XD
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:06 am

^ OMD!! I know!! hahaha. Once my friend starts talking about McFly, we all can't stop. Right now, the names Dougie, Danny, Harry and Tom are very popular in our classroom! We always talk about them. LOL.
Almost all of my classmates fancy Harry. Razz
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:09 am

^ Same here!
and we wrote stuffs on the board like Harry kissing Charice and he gave her a bouquet of roses and my mates were like Harry who?
and we're like McFLY! and they say really?! What a lucky lass!
We kinda envy her because of that!
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Post  anika on Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:13 am

Kerstien wrote:^ Same here!
and we wrote stuffs on the board like Harry kissing Charice and he gave her a bouquet of roses and my mates were like Harry who?
and we're like McFLY! and they say really?! What a lucky lass!
We kinda envy her because of that!v
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hahahaha. You did? Funnyyy!!! lol! lol! lol!
I know! It's freakin unfair! My friend (who loves Harry so so much) hated Charice after she heard that. Razz
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Post  Kerstien on Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:20 am

YES! WE DID! XD
it was fun, really..seeing their reactions and stuff.
I never thought Harry would be there though. My cousin decided to watch so I had it on Youtube and when Paul said Harry from McFLY I was like WHAT?! Then I had to replay it to see if I heard it right! =))
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Post  maia 8D on Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:53 pm

haha. i don't like charice. Neutral well, the fact that harry kissed her and gave her flowers and hugged her contrubutes to that fact, but still! haha.
me friend said she met charice... she didn't like her as well. XDD Razz
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Post  Kerstien on Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:17 am

^LOL!
Ingrid(ButterflyBibish)'s mom said we envy her.
Why would we?! I just envy the kiss..she kissed a super fit guy and she doesn't even know who he is! XD
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Post  jaschier on Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:53 am

oh no!!! i was shocked sa part na ten Wheeler Truck!!! poor lexi...so sad... i also like this kind of story na sad and ending... (lol i forgot there is only two kinds of ending)... he loves lexi more than his life Razz cool Approve!
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Post  Kerstien on Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:05 pm

^ =))
Thanks for reading, mate!
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