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Post  nicoleaika on Sun Feb 08, 2009 6:59 pm

nikka! wrote:wow. dougie saved danny!
YEY! wooohoooo
goooo dougie! to the rescue!
(okay.. i'm just assuming that the hooded guy really is dougie. hahaha. Very Happy )

oooh.. does tom like anna too?
i'm curious. can't wait for the next update.. Very Happy

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Post  nikka! on Sun Feb 08, 2009 7:05 pm

nicoleaika wrote:
nikka! wrote:wow. dougie saved danny!
YEY! wooohoooo
goooo dougie! to the rescue!
(okay.. i'm just assuming that the hooded guy really is dougie. hahaha. Very Happy )

oooh.. does tom like anna too?
i'm curious. can't wait for the next update.. Very Happy

Very Happy

tnx for reading it Very Happy

welcome! i absolutely love you fanfic! Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  nicoleaika on Sun Feb 08, 2009 7:21 pm

nikka! wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:
nikka! wrote:wow. dougie saved danny!
YEY! wooohoooo
goooo dougie! to the rescue!
(okay.. i'm just assuming that the hooded guy really is dougie. hahaha. Very Happy )

oooh.. does tom like anna too?
i'm curious. can't wait for the next update.. Very Happy

Very Happy

tnx for reading it Very Happy

welcome! i absolutely love you fanfic! Very Happy Very Happy

awww... tnx a lot Very Happy
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Post  PuDd_T on Sun Feb 08, 2009 8:31 pm

OMG! was it really Dougie???
i hope it is! I miss him too! lol Razz
i hope he comes back soon.... Sad

I think Tom likes Anna too!!!!!

like what anika said, Don't be sorry! It was really nice! cheers
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Feb 08, 2009 9:54 pm

Ice cream in the morning. Gosh, those two really love ice creams eh? Haha.
Oh no. Tom's like Anna too? cyclops
PS I so wish that the hooded guy is Dougie.
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Post  jaschier on Mon Feb 09, 2009 5:48 pm

hehe... i'm late... no9 actually its a good update... wait, what just happen to dougie, its like danny didn't do something... and dougie just gone like a super hero... lol... btw, brenda and harry, their getting better... Razz
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:45 pm

cool update!!!!

wonder who's that hood guy thing..LOL...anyways...i'll wait patiently while i update my fic too..*whispers* it's almost over....and i'll put another one...***
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Post  nicoleaika on Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:54 pm

Chapter 5


“Why Tom? Because you like her?”

Tom suddenly laughed out loud—weird

“Hey, Tom, answer my question”

“Don’t tell me you’re jealous? You don’t need to be jealous Brightside, I will never, ever, like Anna…”

He’s very confident that he will not fall for her… I know I should become happy but it’s—it’s weird, really weird

“Hey, Tom, how can you assure that you will never fall for her?”

“How? Oh, (Pause) simple. Because you like her” And smiles

“What?”

“You like her, right? It’s obvious…” And Tom continue walking

That’s it? Just because I like her? Tom looks like he’s keeping something from me… And I felt that it’s connected to Anna… Well, I think I should find out what’s it. And I guess I need to hurry up a little because the bell is ringing…

“Good morning class. Our lesson for today is…”

Our first subject today is History. For the past several years of my school life, if the subject is History, I’m always up to it, but… no, not this time. There are really a lot of things that keep bothering me. First, the guy who helped me this morning, I really felt that it’s Dougie but I don’t have any proof. Second, that “something” Anna did last night. And third, Tom’s reason why he will never like Anna. (Sighs) What’s happening to my life? Everything’s confusing and unclear… Then someone from the outside of our room shouted…

“EVERYONE HAS A SECRET!”

Yeah, that “someone” is kind of scandalous, but what he shouted made me bother more. He’s right. Everyone has a secret. Even I do have a secret, even Harry… maybe Anna also have. I really want to know what’s her secret… but how?

~Break time, again~

“Hey, Danny, only biscuits and milk?” Harry asked me

“I’m not really in mood of eating a lot right now”

“Oh? Really? Why? Is it because of Anna?”

“Harry, do you think Anna is keeping something from me?”

“C’mon Danny! Of course she will. Both of you didn’t know each other well, yet.”

“But it really bothers me!”

“You’re just paranoid because finally you’re first love came”

“Love?!”

“Yeah, I think, you just don’t like her, you love her.”

“What—“

“Shh, Anna, Brenda, and Maggie are arriving”

“Morning guys! Maybe we can share table with you…” Brenda sat beside Harry and smiled to each other. Oh well, maybe they’re… you know

“By the way, what’s up with you guys?” Brenda asked us

“I’m currently planning a celebration” Harry speak out and smiles scarily at me

“Hey, what does it mean?” I asked Harry with a very shaky voice

“Harry, the celebration’s for what?” Maggie suddenly asked him

“Because someone around finally is falling in love”

“Who?” Maggie again

“Danny”

Everyone around shouted my name. They can’t believe what Harry just said—that I’m already falling in love.

“Really? To whom?” Oh no, it’s Anna…

“To—“ I covered Harry’s mouth.

“To milk! I’m falling in love to milk. That’s why my beverage now is milk.” That’s the most unsophisticated reason I ever give in my entire whole life…

“To milk? I thought you’re falling in love for Anna” Brenda blurted out

“What? To Anna?” Maggie looks like she’s very surprised

“Harry told me that Anna and Danny are together last night” Harry—because you told that to Brenda… I knew it… there’s already something between Harry and Brenda… I think…

“Sorry Dan” Harry apologized with a very wide smile… yeah, that’s what he called an apology…

“By the way, Maggie looks like uneasy, is it jealousy?” Brenda again!

“Jealousy? What, Maggie likes Danny?” Harry asked Brenda

“Nah! Do you know that, Maggie accidentally shouted out to us one time that she likes Anna when they first met each other?” Brenda and Harry are really compatible… Wait, MAGGIE LIKES ANNA?!

“It’s—I told you, it’s not really what you think—I mean—It’s not that serious… I’m just—she’s sweet and everything. And I’m not a lesbian… And—she’s a girl… We’re just—we’re just—the best of friends right now, right Anna?” Maggie surely looks so nervous

“Yeah, so it’s not really an issue so forget about it. And to Brenda, can you please be quiet?” Whoa, Anna’s kind of scary at that time… Maybe because the ‘Maggie-likes-Anna’ thing is not really a big matter to her and just like what Maggie said, they’re just best friends…

“Scary” Harry whispers

I can’t speak any word. Nothing’s coming out of my mouth. I’m speechless of what I just knew… Tom suddenly approached Anna and whispers something to her…

“Hey, what’s happening?” Maggie asked Anna

“We’re going to join the Book Society now” Tom answered

“You Danny, do you want to join?” Anna asked me. Well, at least when she asked me that time, she’s back to the “Sweet” Anna

“Oh, sure…”

And we go to the ‘venue’

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another weird chapter... i know XD
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Post  nikka! on Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:26 pm

EVERYONE HAS A SECRET.
i want to hear mcfly's secret that most.. Very Happy

that was really embarassing for danny..
haha. harry's so funny. he just can't stop talking.. so cute! Razz

ooooh. maggie likes anna.
YURI!!

nice chapter!!
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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:33 pm

Everyone has a secret! Cool
Hahahahaha, milk! Nice one Danny! Laughing
Whoa, Maggie likes Anna? But she's a girl!
Tom's weird.
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Post  nicoleaika on Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:21 am

Thanks for reading it guys Very Happy

hope i can update soon
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Post  jaschier on Tue Feb 10, 2009 5:40 pm

Maggie likes anna? oh, she is lesbian?

milk!!! oh no, i think next to laura to be taint/messed up, is milk!!! lol

secrets? yeah everyone, and i wanna know what..

ohh, first love came... i know how's it feels..

hehe update.com Razz
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Post  nicoleaika on Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:49 pm

Chapter 6


“Wow, I never thought there’s a lot of people who loves to join the Book Society!” Anna cheerfully shouted out

“Well, majority of them loves to join just because of Danny Brightside” A guy told us

“Eh? Just because of Danny?” Tom asked

“Yeah… The news that Mr. Brightside loves Books and there’s a possibility that he will join the Book Society spread out like an epidemic.”

Another so-called “Brightside” Fever which is kind of—or sometimes really—annoying. Fortunately, no one notices me, so far—

“Danny! Finally, you’re here! You know what, I love Books especially Beethoven’s!” Beethoven? Are you joking?

“Mr. Brightside, I’m a big bookworm. I always read the”Ugly Betty”!” Is it a book? I thought it’s a TV Show—

“Hey Danny! Can you read a book to me someday like “Crazy Little Thing Called Love”?” Oh my Goodness. It’s a song.

UGH! They saw me and kept telling me things with the word “Book” even though some—or all—of the things that they said are not really books. And one more thing, I don’t know every single one of them…


“Hello students! If you want to become a member of Book Society, you should answer the following questions in front of everyone else…” The teacher-in-charge announced “You still have time to back out or think of your answer to these questions—“

There are a lot of questions. And I’m not sure if I can answer them all—or if I will answer them all. After a short while, the number of students who want to join the club lessens. Then Tom laughed—

“They don’t want to answer the questions because there’s no ‘Danny’ in it!”

Because of the sudden backing out of a big number of students, Anna became the first one who will answer the questions…

I can’t really hear her answers because I’m stunned, super stunned. She’s really, indeed, so wonderful and sweet.


“Hey Danny, are you alright?” Tom asked me while waving his hand in front of my face

“Oh, me? Yeah… I am… I think—“

“Wait, it’s my turn now”

“Okay, good luck”

Tom’s answering now. I want to listen but someone caught my attention. A guy with a hood, the same guy who saved my life… I immediately ran to him because I have this intuition that he’s Dougie—

“Dougie?”

“Dougie? Who is Dougie, Danny?” A guy—who I honestly don’t really know…

“Oh, I’m sorry, I thought—“

“By the way, my name is Toni. I know we met each other this morning.”

“Um… Toni, thank you very much for saving my life… I—I gotta go…”

No. It can’t be. The guy who saved me this morning is not Dougie. But—What if he’s not really Dougie? Well, I think it’s just a product of my imagination since I’m not really awake that time. Still, it’s really too bad that it’s not Dougie. And I went back—

“Danny, you alright? You look so exhausted.” Anna asked me…

“I am—UGH! I can’t lie anymore. I’m not really okay…”

“What’s the problem? C’mon, share it with me…”

“I almost hit by a car this morning. And there was this guy who saved my life.”

“And you know that guy?”

“I thought I know him… But he wasn’t. The guy who saved my life is not my long-lost brother. I thought I will finally be with him. I thought my long search for him is going to end now… But—it’s all… just my thought.” And I laughed with no such reason. But Anna’s serious…

“Do you really want to look for him?”

“Yeah… of course…”

“Are you sure?”

“Yeah—“Wait, what’s happening? I know I’m sure that I really want to look for him but her question is strange… “What do you mean of that question? That you can’t see I’m really sure that I want to look for him?”

“You said that, not me…” She’s still serious.

“Anna—“

(Breathes deeply) “I’m—I’m sorry for my seriousness. It was just because—just because—“ (Thinks deeply) “Danny, do you have any idea where’s Dougie right now?”

“Eh? Why?”

“I want to… I want to help on looking for him”

“Really? But why—“

"Because I want to help you” And smiles. Well, she got a point but—no, seriously, I want to know why. Wait, does it mean that we’re going to search together? I think there’s someone that will interrupt my moment with her—

“Hey, did I just hear a search? Can I join?” Just expected, Tom also want to join the search for Dougie

“Oh sure” Yet, Anna agreed…

But it’s okay; at least there are some people who are willing to look for him. Speaking of some people, where’s Harry?

“Danny! Danny! Danny!” Harry came running…

“What? What? What?” I jokingly asked him

“Do you know—“ Oh well, he’s serious…

“What?” So I became serious too—

“Do you know that the classes are cut because of an urgent meeting of teachers? I mean, just look at the time we have for bonding and everything!” He’s not really serious and jump because of happiness. I didn’t notice that the teacher-in-charge of the “audition” is gone. Well I think it’s because my attention’s just on Anna, Anna, and Anna… Hmm… I guess I must become happy too because of the time…

“Hello guys! Who want to have a Sleepover?” Brenda asked us…

“Are guys allowed?” Harry sweetly asked his honey—well they can’t hide it anymore, they looked so on…

“Of course, so who’s house?”

“Ours!” Maggie suddenly showed up and volunteered.

“Are you guys sure of this Sleepover? Because I thought it’s too early for it. And we didn’t know each other yet.” Yeah right, Anna got a point…

“That’s why we have a Sleepover! To know more about each other!” But Brenda also got a point…

“So, when?” Harry asked everyone else…

“Maybe next, next week…” Tom suggested

“Next, next week?! UGH! I don’t want to wait!” Brenda complained

“What if we spend this free time on looking for Danny’s lost brother?” Anna suddenly suggested—wait, she’s inviting everyone else on searching? Awww… well… I guess it will be better if we’re many…

“SURE!” Others agreed. We’re going to search for Dougie, but not just me and Anna…

“Is it going to be difficult?” Brenda asked

“Who knows?” A very well-said answer from Harry…

Yeah, he’s right. Who knows? Maybe this time we’re going to find him…


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Post  nicoleaika on Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:57 pm

jaschier wrote:Maggie likes anna? oh, she is lesbian?

milk!!! oh no, i think next to laura to be taint/messed up, is milk!!! lol

secrets? yeah everyone, and i wanna know what..

ohh, first love came... i know how's it feels..

hehe update.com Razz

XD XD XD Buti na lang hindi ako umiinom ng milk XD XD XD

Ayeee... first love XD hindi ko nga alam panu ba malalaman kung in-love ka na... maraming ways XD

nah.. she's not... I think XD

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ooooh. maggie likes anna.
YURI!!

YURI! Kanina ko lang nalaman yun nung tinanong ko sa bff ko xD alam ko lang yaoi (hindi ko rin sure yung spelling XD)
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Post  nikka! on Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:40 pm

^my classmate just told me that word when she taught me all about manga.. well, not really all.. haha. just the basics.
i've always spelled "yaoi", yaoy.. haha. i don't know why i spell it that way.. oh well.

a lot of people really joined the book society just because of danny! haha.. well, we can't blame them. I'm sure we'll all do the same. Razz

aww... i was a bit sad when i read that dougie wasn't the guy with the hood.. Sad
but i'm sure danny will find him soon since they've already put together a search party.. Very Happy he's so funny too! he kinda doesn't like it that the others will join because then he wouldn't be alone with anna.. Laughing

a sleepover!! interesting...
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Post  nicoleaika on Wed Feb 11, 2009 4:51 pm

nikka! wrote:^my classmate just told me that word when she taught me all about manga.. well, not really all.. haha. just the basics.
i've always spelled "yaoi", yaoy.. haha. i don't know why i spell it that way.. oh well.

a lot of people really joined the book society just because of danny! haha.. well, we can't blame them. I'm sure we'll all do the same. Razz

aww... i was a bit sad when i read that dougie wasn't the guy with the hood.. Sad
but i'm sure danny will find him soon since they've already put together a search party.. Very Happy he's so funny too! he kinda doesn't like it that the others will join because then he wouldn't be alone with anna.. Laughing

a sleepover!! interesting...
update soon! Approve!

XD XD XD... really? ako rin.. slight... like konichiwa XD XD XD

well... tnx for reading it Very Happy
try ko i-update Very Happy (hindi na kasi ako pwedeng matulog ng late XD- beauty rest for Friday)
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Post  nikka! on Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:03 pm

^i just know this one phrase.. "watakushiwa oka neganai" ^_^
er... it means, "i have no money" laugh together

no prob.. haha! yeah.. i guess we really do need that. school feels like torture! i sleep at 12 or past 12 at least thrice a week... -.-;
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Feb 14, 2009 12:59 pm

nikka! wrote:^i just know this one phrase.. "watakushiwa oka neganai" ^_^
er... it means, "i have no money" laugh together

no prob.. haha! yeah.. i guess we really do need that. school feels like torture! i sleep at 12 or past 12 at least thrice a week... -.-;

kanina nga 2:30 na ako ng umaga nakatulog kasi hindi ako nakakapgpuyat dahil sa JS Prom namin na tapos na at last Very Happy
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Post  PuDd_T on Sat Feb 14, 2009 2:37 pm

wow! i missed 3 updates! oh well, -.-;

this is good! aww, it wasn't dougie who saved danny!

and MEGGIE likes ANNA! whoa! hahaha!

and Tom doesn't like Anna.. i was expecting him to like have a HUGE crush on Anna... ehe Very Happy

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Post  jaschier on Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:03 pm

'... i remeber when i tried to audition in our editorial club i mean in our gazzette... di ako nag attend coz' i have this dilema, quiz in my major, or gazzette,, but i chose my major, coz' its freakingly difficult to get a good grade... Razz well i know anna will be get in book club...

and oh yeah, maybe danny was getting paranoid with Dougie... wee, sleepover, i thought yun ang next chap, but they suggested to find dougie, aw, that's so sweet and so friendly, i wonder if they will see him... Razz
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Feb 14, 2009 4:07 pm

^tnx for reading it guys Very Happy
mamaya maya ko ipopost next chapter Very Happy
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Chapter 7


“Hey guys! I have this idea! What if we search for Danny’s brother—“

“It’s Dougie” I told Brenda

“—Oh, sorry. What if we search for Dougie by pair? Like, I and Harry are going to search in the uptown district. Um… do you get my point?”

“Yeah… so, Anna, can we search together?” Tom invited her—wait! Too quick! Anna… please say no… please say…

“Um… Sure!” *Sighs* Tom may don’t like Anna but I think Anna likes Tom… or I just really don’t know everything about her…

After a while, I end up searching for Dougie with Maggie. Well, I think I must learn to socialize with others too, not just to Anna. And we started searching in Downtown—while walking…

‘Wow… I never thought Downtown is kind of cool!” Maggie exclaimed

“Is it your first time here?”

“Yeah… Shucks… how embarrassing…”

“It’s okay. It’s my first time too here…”

“Really?”

“Yeah…” And we smile at each other.

“I think we’ll be best friends, too—hey, look! A theater!” Maggie told me while pointing at a certain place…

“Huh? Where?”

“There… (Have a deep breath) You know what? I and Anna first met each other in a Theater. She’s one of the Actresses. And I’m really moved by her performance—“

“That’s when you started liking her?”

“Huh? What? Uh—I don’t know. Maybe… but it was several years ago… I’m contended that I’m her best friend...”

I nod while saying “Ahh…” I kind of understand her side. She can’t like Anna because they’re the same. Both of them are girls…

“Danny, you know what? Maybe Anna likes you”

“What? Me? Anna likes a guy like me?”

“Yeah… you’re smart, you’re nice, you’re popular… only few girls in School didn’t like you, like me—”

“Ahh… you don’t like me because of Anna?”

“Huh?”

“You don’t like me because you like Anna? Or maybe because Anna likes me? Or both?”

“Huh? I mean (She looks like she doesn’t want to talk about the “Maggie likes Anna” thing)… I don’t really know… who knows… maybe someday I will also like you… wait! That’s just maybe… I’m not assuring it, that I will like you…”

I just smile…

Maggie’s kind of childish, the playful and nice childish. She’s fun to be with. She’s energetic and cute… did I just call her cute? Well, if I met Maggie first, I think I will fall for her and not to Anna. I just think… (Sighs) I never thought a girl like her will like another girl… another girl like her who is also cute…


“Danny!”

“What?”

“Look! There’s a Police Station there—“

I forgot! I unfortunately and badly forgot! We’re looking for Dougie and not going out—I mean, hanging out “outside.”

“Wow, this is a police station? It’s so tall!” Maggie raised her hand to “measure” the height of the Police Station… And I laughed because she’s so innocent—plus cute

“Hey, why are you laughing? Did I do anything funny?”

“Oh, nothing, really…”

“Never mind it… let’s go…” She grabs my hand and pulls me into the Station. No way, I think we’re not just in a Police Station. It looks like an Bureau of Investigation headquarters! Uh… then she went to the information desk… but all of the people there are busy… that’s why instead of waiting for them to finish their business, Maggie told me she likes to explore the building and start by riding in an elevator…

“Wow! So clean elevator… but it looks like kind of boring…”

I laughed again… “You really act like a kid…” And I pushed the “close the door” button

“What?! Me?”

‘Yeah… but what I mean is that, you’re like innocent and playful…”

“Ahh…”

And she smiles and examines the elevator even though she said it’s boring. I stare at her for a while. What if Anna’s beside me right now? No… if Anna’s my partner in looking for Dougie, she wouldn’t bring me in a place like this… well I guess she will but she will not ride the Elevator, instead she will just wait for the “officers” to finish their business and we will sit on a couch and talk about lots of things… Oh… I forgot that we’re still holding hands…

Then the lights inside the elevator turned off…


“Whoa! Oh my God, what happened?” And she took off her hand off of mines…

“No way… where’s the emergency button?”

“Here! (She pressed it and kept shouting on the speaker-like thing above the button that we’re stuck inside an elevator)”

She’s panicked & nervous. I can see it on the way she acts that time.

“Dang! I think it’s not working!”

“Maggie, just relax—“

“But how? What if the elevator went down straight to its limit? We’re dead, swear!”

“Maggie!” I hold her shoulders and tell her, gently— “Just take a deep breath and think about the things that make you happy… Inhale, exhale...” She followed me and relaxed…

“Do you think it will be okay?”

“Yeah… just think positive…”

“Wait, I just check out if there’s any signal inside—“ She gets her cellphone inside the right pocket of her pants… “Oh no! No signal? UGH!”

“Maggie—“ I think I make her remember to just relax and think positive when I said her name…

“Sorry… I just want to call Anna and tell her that we’re stuck here…”

“Oh… it’s okay. Just relax…”

“Danny, do you have any idea how long we’re going to be stuck in this place?”

“I don’t… sorry…”

Maggie is so scared and lonely. Geez… think of any way to make a girl comfortable, Danny, think! And I smiles and—

“Maggie—“

“Danny, you know what, I miss Anna.” My smile disappears… “You miss her too, right?”


“I—of course I do… I miss everyone outside—“

Then Maggie holds her head, close her eyes, and talk to me…

“Danny! How can I get over of Anna?!”

“Ahh—ehh—“

“She’s my first best friend in my whole entire life and I freaking like her! I’m in love to a GIRL! UGH!”

She’s scary at that time… scary like she wants to kill everyone around her, well, I’m the only one around her that time… so I guess I should say, she’s really, very scary at that time… And I’m shock…
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Post  anika on Sat Feb 14, 2009 4:31 pm

nikka! wrote:^my classmate just told me that word when she taught me all about manga.. well, not really all.. haha. just the basics.
i've always spelled "yaoi", yaoy.. haha. i don't know why i spell it that way.. oh well.

a lot of people really joined the book society just because of danny! haha.. well, we can't blame them. I'm sure we'll all do the same. Razz

aww... i was a bit sad when i read that dougie wasn't the guy with the hood.. Sad
but i'm sure danny will find him soon since they've already put together a search party.. Very Happy he's so funny too! he kinda doesn't like it that the others will join because then he wouldn't be alone with anna.. Laughing

a sleepover!! interesting...
update soon! Approve!

hahaha. Yaoi is the correct term. Not that read yaoi. LOL.
The 'books' were funny! ugly Betty? Honestly. hahaha.
Anna's sweet. Aw... I lik her. They're going to search for Dougie. Who's the guy in the hoodie? confused

Nicole and Tippy, you know, when I read Anna here, Ana Tirador suddenly comes to my mind. LOL. I dunno.
A sleepover sounds cool! Me likey. Update! LOL.
maggie likes anna? ooohhh... Guitar
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Feb 14, 2009 4:54 pm

anika wrote:
nikka! wrote:^my classmate just told me that word when she taught me all about manga.. well, not really all.. haha. just the basics.
i've always spelled "yaoi", yaoy.. haha. i don't know why i spell it that way.. oh well.

a lot of people really joined the book society just because of danny! haha.. well, we can't blame them. I'm sure we'll all do the same. Razz

aww... i was a bit sad when i read that dougie wasn't the guy with the hood.. Sad
but i'm sure danny will find him soon since they've already put together a search party.. Very Happy he's so funny too! he kinda doesn't like it that the others will join because then he wouldn't be alone with anna.. Laughing

a sleepover!! interesting...
update soon! Approve!

hahaha. Yaoi is the correct term. Not that read yaoi. LOL.
The 'books' were funny! ugly Betty? Honestly. hahaha.
Anna's sweet. Aw... I lik her. They're going to search for Dougie. Who's the guy in the hoodie? confused

Nicole and Tippy, you know, when I read Anna here, Ana Tirador suddenly comes to my mind. LOL. I dunno.
A sleepover sounds cool! Me likey. Update! LOL.
maggie likes anna? ooohhh... Guitar

kahit ako nga naloka rin sa books na yun XD XD XD

btw, tnx for reading it Very Happy
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:04 pm

Toni?
Aw, I thought it was Dougie too.
Haha, so Danny likes Maggie too? Coool!
But Maggie likes Anna to and Tom likes Anna too. Uh, not so cool.
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