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Post  ButterflyBibish on Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:24 pm

hiya!..i'm sheadon...son of lendi and danny jones...i grew up to be so much like my dad and i have mom's eyes but i like girls too much....i always play with them..i never take them seriously...my mom used to read me bedtime stories...and my dad was always telling me that "no one can take my heart unless i would let them get my heart and locked on theirs"....that's how he felt towards mom....well...they used to and i missed them...i saw their love bloom together and even stronger...until one day..they got into an accident...car accident to be precise...i saw them...dad holding mom to protect her...but they're......they're gone....it was almost 5 years ago...and it was also that time that the throne was given to me...i'm a king now...but i don't have a wife yet...i became king unexpectedly...and i can't marry anyone until i'm 20..and now i'm 20...but i don't have that things on my mind yet...i don't like being trap on one's heart...i don't understand dad until now...if they haven't died..i may have been inlove right now..
"shea!" a girl shouted at me...
"hey!" i said awkwardly..i actually don't remember her name...
"so..how are you doing?" she punch my arm...
"fine..very fine..." i asked trying to avoid mentioning her name..."anyways...nice seeing you here....have to go though...i'm very busy.."
"ok...i'll text you..."i grinned at her awkwardly...i have to change numbers fast....so i got on with the limo and sighed heavily...since my parents died...everyone around trained me being a responsible king as i am...so i am that guy right now..me being a playboy is just a part of me being a guy...so if you are wondering about my future wife...my right hand man...james...he's been helping me getting elegant ladies throughout the country..and i don't feel like being elegant...and i don't like being inlove yet...i wanna enjoy as much life could give me...see? i don't even talk like my dad...he's too arrogant...

"your highness?" james called out..."i have been scanning through these papers...list of the ladies on our country but no one seemed to please you..." he said formally
"well...thank you for noticing that..." i told him..."i don't feel like marrying..." i still wanna uncover my dad's words of wisdom..
"but...your majesty...it's here in our rules that..."
"that...the king/prince should get married before his 23rd birthday...and for the record..the king/prince should have a heir or child before getting to his 25th birthday to have it trained incase something happens to me.." i continued his sentence...
"well done sir!" he clapped his hands twice..."you memorized a rule!"
"well...who couldn't?,with you saying it every hour..reminding me..." i informed him..
"but you're being stubborn your highness..." he said briefly..same thing happens to our conversation and i feel like i can predict my future with him...just talking like that and it would end up with me being stubborn...
"by the way sir.." he added...he sometimes calls me sir..."you have an appointment...tomorrow...8:00 am at the church....you have to sign a contract for the contructions you've made..." he informed me...looking at my schedule...
"yeah sure...i have to cut the ribbon and stuff...i get it james...you've been telling me all week.." i raised my hand to stop him from telling me things about those...

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morning came...and james came around me...babbling things as he usually do...i fixed my vest and i was ready to go...i got in,in the limo and turn the TV on...james was in front seat...
"your highness..." he approached me..." i've got the best guards you'd ever had sir...they're already in the entrance hall..waiting for you my king.." he said...i just nodded...
"we're here you're majesty..." the driver told me...i got out and people around clapped....i gave them a warm smile..waving my hand...brushing my straightened hair...(i've got them colored with a streak of blonde...i'm brunette type of guy)...that really goes well with my blue eyes...i walked in the hall...too crowded in here but i'm used to it...i cut the ribbon...which was the start of the opening ceremony...as i was giving the scissors to james...he didn't got it...and it fell...i bent my knee and got it with my hand...i heard a shot coming from above towards me...i though i was goin' to die...no guards have succesfully protect me and the crowd started to run as they panicked but a bump hurt me over my head..as i looked up...a girl came running to take the shot instead of me...the guards alertly got the both of us and got into our car...they didn't catch the guy who tried to shot me and the girl was laying on my hands stained by her own blood...she was still breathing heavily...
"don't worry...we'll get at the palace quickly..hang on.." i stroked her hair

to be continued..
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did you like it?i'll not continue if it's not that good of a start...


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Post  anika on Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:37 pm

Danny and Lendi died???? Ooh this is too depressing!! Sad Sad Sad
Ooh. They have a son? Cool. haha.
Who's the girl?? I'm intrigued!!!
Nice beginning. I'm hooked. Very Happy
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Post  nikka! on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:39 am

ooooh! i LOVE this fanfic as well!!! 8D

wow! sheadon became a playboy with colored highlights!!! and he's king too! Cool
the people are so lucky 'cause they have a really hot king! XD

woah.. the girl took a bullet for him! that's so sweet... ^_^
this is great! keep it up... Approve!
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:47 am

anika wrote:Danny and Lendi died???? Ooh this is too depressing!! Sad Sad Sad
Ooh. They have a son? Cool. haha.
Who's the girl?? I'm intrigued!!!
Nice beginning. I'm hooked. Very Happy

well...i was actually planning sheadon to have a little sister but i was thinking that having parents would be very distracting so i'm really sorry i had them in an accident!LOL..

but at least...it's still looks like danny as sheadon...LOL....
tnx for reading! PBJT!
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:50 am

nikka! wrote:ooooh! i LOVE this fanfic as well!!! 8D

wow! sheadon became a playboy with colored highlights!!! and he's king too! Cool
the people are so lucky 'cause they have a really hot king! XD

woah.. the girl took a bullet for him! that's so sweet... ^_^
this is great! keep it up... Approve!

yeah... a really hot one!LOL.. Embarassed
well...just tune in why would a girl save him beside of being a king...LOL... sunny
i'll update this afternoon....!!!
i'm excited too...for this fic...i wonder how far would this go...
i hope it'll be more far or just the same as my first fic! clap
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:12 pm

Whoa! A sequel!!!
Aww, Danny's so sweet! It's so sad. What happened to them, I mean.
OMG that was so brave of her!
I'm so excited!
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:21 pm

KAI wrote:Whoa! A sequel!!!
Aww, Danny's so sweet! It's so sad. What happened to them, I mean.
OMG that was so brave of her!
I'm so excited!

not really a sequel though cause...danny and lendi died..lol...but i still prefer sheadon as danny...lol..confusing...anyways..i'll put up the next chapter...
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 2:06 pm

"don't...don't do it..you'll hurt yourself...don't..." i heard her saying that phrase over and over again from her sleep...since she was aching from pain...i watched her sleep...
"your highness..." james approached me...."would you want to sleep cause you've been up all night...and.."
"thank you james but i'll stay here...i want to thank her for saving me.." that's right...no other things than giving my gratitude...james left me and the mysterious girl moved...she has a brunette colored hair...wavy to be exact...long eyelashes...average nose and lips...she has a pale skin tone...and her eyes...reminds me of mom..i was gazing at her..waiting for her to wake up...as soon as i look at her eyes..it flickered...she was starting to regain consciousness...she immediately stood up...looking everywhere...
"excuse me?" i asked her...but she didn't seem to notice me...
"i have to find her....have to get out of here..."she told herself...but i held her hands...
"i would like to thank you for saving me...." i told her...then finally she noticed me but she removed my hands from hers..
"get your filthy hands off me...." she said..." i didn't save you...i just did what was right..." i gave her a confused expression...
"never mind...you won't understand..." she started to walk off...but i held her shoulder...
"wait..." i stopped her and she whimpered...
"sorry...i forgot to tell you that you were shot....and just got cured...you have to rest..."
"i don't need rest...don't underestimate me!" she shouted
"well..i'm not...i'm just trying to help..."
"i don't need help....i've been into these situations and worse..." she informed me...
"i wanted to get back at you from savi..." she punched me..
"i told you....i didn't want to save you! damn it!..." she said breathlessly...a strand from her hair flew in front of her face from getting so much strength to punch me...
"ok...but you still saved me and that is my point of view...now don't go punching people around...and especially not me...i'm a king..." i finally stood up for myself..
"i knew that..." she said briefly.."let me get out of here fast...."
"you won't....unless you're wound would cure.."
"that would take forever...i told you i can handle this!" she was trying to find the front door...then a hustle came rumbling in through the front door and james came rushing..
"what did you do to our king?" james asked her...
"he started it..!" she said bravely..
"you can't just hurt him..." james replied..
"stop it james..."i walked towards her and carried her..i was holding her feet and her head was at my back...she was trying to escape but i held her tighter..
"let me go you playboy!" she punch my back..
"don't go say that to our king!" james warned him..
"you shut up...weird man!" she pointed at him and james closed his mouth...
"james...get the guest room ready...we'll be having a patient.." i told him...turning my face to the hallway...
"certainly sir!" he called the maids to clean it up....

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at the room..

"what do you want?" she asked me...as i put her down on the bed...
"i told you...i want to...give my gratitude..and you will follow me.." i ordered her..
"why should i?" she stood up..
"don't go escaping...!" i yelled...this made her lie down.."and...i'll let you go once i've had enough with you..."
"but--"
"no buts..." i told her...
"fine!" she answered...and stood up...
"i told you no escaping..."
"fine...i'll just urinate here...." she said raising and eyebrow...
"the comfort room's there..." i pointed...
"thanks...shea..." she grinned at me..
"no fair!...i don't know your name yet..."
"it's totally fair...you're a king...of course i know you..." she yelled back..and i can hear her echo voice inside the bathroom...i waited for hours...and i was totally wondering what could take her so long...then i heard james rushing again..
"my king...did you heard the news?" james said
"james...don't you ever knock?" i complained
"forget about knocking sir...but a girl was killed.."
"what? killed?" i asked him...
"yes..just nearby sir...it's this girl.." james showed me the picture...and it was the one of the girls i played before..remember the one i've forgotten her name...that's her...
"she was stabbed your majesty...."james said,.." i was just telling you cause it's nearby our palace and it could be dangerous..." he added..
"james...there's nothing to worry about...the palace is guarded...." i tapped his shoulders...
"anyways sir....where's the girl?" james looked around fixing his hair....
"oh..i almost forgot...our comfort room has a big window...the killer might be wise enough to think that..."i stuttered thinking of the girl who saved me...i came running to the comfort room and knock a thousand times...it finally open....
"are you okay?" i asked her..
"i'm fine..."she answered weakly...
"it's just that...i heard someone's roaming around and killing people...and"she opened the door halfway and saw blood all over her body....james and my eyes' widened
"what happened to you?" i asked her..then she fainted again....

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Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Feb 21, 2009 3:06 pm

But its still connected right? Or is this a new story? Sorry I'm confused. Haha.
What's happening? This is freaking me out O_o

This is kinda off topic But I just want to share this haha. My own version of Sheadon lol


He's kind of young, haha. Only 16/17. And he kinda looks like Danny.
His name's Declan Galbraith. Know him?
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Post  jaschier on Sat Feb 21, 2009 3:43 pm

oh!!! no!! danny died and lendi... kawawa naman, but wait i agree nikki, he is the coolest king with his urbanic teenager manner... hehe

wait... i like the introduction... yeah just continue, very interesting...
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Post  nikka! on Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:27 pm

the girl is so mysterious... i'm really intrigued by her because she might be the killer or something. but i don't want her to be the killer. why? because she saved the hottie king's life! wahaha! XD Razz

maybe she's a spy! that'll be so fun!
can't wait for more.. i love it! update soon...
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Post  nikka! on Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:30 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
nikka! wrote:ooooh! i LOVE this fanfic as well!!! 8D

wow! sheadon became a playboy with colored highlights!!! and he's king too! Cool
the people are so lucky 'cause they have a really hot king! XD

woah.. the girl took a bullet for him! that's so sweet... ^_^
this is great! keep it up... Approve!

yeah... a really hot one!LOL.. Embarassed
well...just tune in why would a girl save him beside of being a king...LOL... sunny
i'll update this afternoon....!!!
i'm excited too...for this fic...i wonder how far would this go...
i hope it'll be more far or just the same as my first fic! clap

ofcourse it'll go far. it's totally awesome..
and we'll support you all they way! Very Happy Very Happy
more success to your fanfic! cheers
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:54 pm

KAI wrote:But its still connected right? Or is this a new story? Sorry I'm confused. Haha.
What's happening? This is freaking me out O_o

This is kinda off topic But I just want to share this haha. My own version of Sheadon lol


He's kind of young, haha. Only 16/17. And he kinda looks like Danny.
His name's Declan Galbraith. Know him?

i'm confused myself...lol...
wow....that guy is pretty cute...and does look like danny...i'm gonna prefer him as my sheadon!hahaha...it suits him better than my friend in my avatar...lol..where'd you find him?

tnx for reading...!! cheers
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:56 pm

jaschier wrote:oh!!! no!! danny died and lendi... kawawa naman, but wait i agree nikki, he is the coolest king with his urbanic teenager manner... hehe

wait... i like the introduction... yeah just continue, very interesting...

lol...tnx for reading... PBJT!
i'll update tonight...i'm gonna make most of my time cause i've got to study for our exams....
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:57 pm

nikka! wrote:the girl is so mysterious... i'm really intrigued by her because she might be the killer or something. but i don't want her to be the killer. why? because she saved the hottie king's life! wahaha! XD Razz

maybe she's a spy! that'll be so fun!
can't wait for more.. i love it! update soon...

tnx for reading...hahaha....i love you! cause you're loving my fic...LOL...
anyways...i'll try updating tonight...or maybe just now cause i don't have any company at our house so no one can distract me.... sunny
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:58 pm

nikka! wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nikka! wrote:ooooh! i LOVE this fanfic as well!!! 8D

wow! sheadon became a playboy with colored highlights!!! and he's king too! Cool
the people are so lucky 'cause they have a really hot king! XD

woah.. the girl took a bullet for him! that's so sweet... ^_^
this is great! keep it up... Approve!

yeah... a really hot one!LOL.. Embarassed
well...just tune in why would a girl save him beside of being a king...LOL... sunny
i'll update this afternoon....!!!
i'm excited too...for this fic...i wonder how far would this go...
i hope it'll be more far or just the same as my first fic! clap

ofcourse it'll go far. it's totally awesome..
and we'll support you all they way! Very Happy Very Happy
more success to your fanfic! cheers

thank you so much! i hope so....lol..i kind of miss zehr!
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Post  nicoleaika on Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:32 pm

I love the king XD That's what we call a modern king (A king with cool hair, cool attitude, not to mention he's a playboy, and the son of two great couple... who unfortunately... aww..)

omg, what happened to the girl? it's scary... really...

btw, update!
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:40 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
KAI wrote:But its still connected right? Or is this a new story? Sorry I'm confused. Haha.
What's happening? This is freaking me out O_o

This is kinda off topic But I just want to share this haha. My own version of Sheadon lol


He's kind of young, haha. Only 16/17. And he kinda looks like Danny.
His name's Declan Galbraith. Know him?

i'm confused myself...lol...
wow....that guy is pretty cute...and does look like danny...i'm gonna prefer him as my sheadon!hahaha...it suits him better than my friend in my avatar...lol..where'd you find him?

tnx for reading...!! cheers

I dunno where my sister found him. Haha. Try goggling him. I think he's a singer.
The one in your avatar can be sheadon too. He looks more playboy than Declan lol.
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Post  anika on Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:20 pm

OMD!!! A killer! haha. I like love slasher stuff at times. Like the movies Psycho and SAW. Kind of gory, true. But the plots are cool. Plus, I'm very intrigued with Jack the Ripper. Interesting criminal. haha. Very Happy
Woooah. The girl's pretty snappy. haha. I love James! He's so loyal and he's like a doting wife! Razz Razz
Update!!
Ooh KAI. He is like a little Danny. Even the clothes!!! Razz Razz
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:49 pm

after the maids cleaned her up..i laid her to the bed...unconscious again...i really wondered what happened to her in there...i fell asleep beside her cuase i stayed up all night looking out for her and now i'm doing it again...i woke up lying on the bed..with her gone..i looked up and found her watching TV..and she laughed so hard...she turned around and saw me...
"hey!" she greeted me with an energetic tone.." morning!"
"hey.." i stood up and sit beside her..i wondered where'd the strong girl who punched me last night...
"you're not such of a morning person are you?" she asked still gazing at the TV...she was watching my DVD's my parents took with me when i was a child...
"well..i am but i have to wake late cause i was tired and.." she cut me off
"are their your parents?" she asked me...
"well..yeah.."
"wow...their sweet..." she complimented..
"i kind of missed them..." i told her...
"you're so cute in that video..." she told me finally facing me...
"am i not cute today?" i asked curiously...
"of course you are..." she grinned at me and i almost forgot why i was talking to her...
"by the way..what happened?"
"what?" she said turning again at the TV...
"last night..." i told her...
"don't ask..." she avoided the question...
"but...there's blood all over and...and.." i stuttered,,,
"and.... it's brayden..."she continued
"what's brayden..." i asked curiously..
"my name..it's brayden..you were asking for it yesterday..call me bree.." she raised her hands to shake it with me but i didn't...so she grabbed my hands and i shook it effortless...
"were you daydreaming about me?" she teased me and i blushed
"i don't blame you...i'm pretty anyway.." she stroke her own hair and stood up...
"i've got to go..." she said
"why?" i stood up to catch up with her...
"i have to fix some things..."she fixed her things...
"you can't..." i told her
"why?...i promised..i'll be back....shea..."she whispered my name and moved her face towards me...she kissed my lips...and i kissed back..she pulled away...
"bye.." i waved and she waved back...i was loving my name more than i used to...since she mentioned it to me..

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it's already dark and i was still daydreaming about her..about the name and kissing...
"are you listening my king?" james interrupted
"yeah..of course..." i nodded
"how was it?" james asked taking a paper
"it was....soft and cherry flavored...." i said..and he took notes and stopped..
"it could be soft...but cherry flavored...the chicken sir?" he asked suspectedly
"well..yeah..sure.." i said absentmindedly...i realized then that i was at the dining table checking my own food...
"you're not yourself sir..." james said...
"i am..."
"then if you were...you shoudn't be here...you're supposed to be playing with your girls.." james said as a matter of factly...
"can't i stay at my own house?" i asked him...
"you can but it's weird..." james said awkwardly..."especially that girl with that blood stuff..and.."
"oh my god..james..i forgot..." i remembered..."she tricked me.."
"what?" james asked curiously
"she didn't answer my question about last night and i was distracted with the name and the kissing..." i reminded myself..."stupid shea! why'd you fell for that?" i hit myself...
"see sir..that girl's been poisoning your mind and you even talk and hit yourself.." james informed me...so i left the table and walking through the hallways and someone kiss me on the cheek...
"hey.." brayden suddenly turned up..
"how'd you get in?" i asked her happily..
"well...by my feet of course.." she said sarcastically.." i told you i'll be back"
"where have you been and i almost forgot what really happened..last---" she grabbed my hands and run...
"i'm starving..let's go out and eat.."
"we can eat here.." i insisted..
"let's go to your girls..at the club.." she said...glancing at me...how'd she know about my girls and hang out place...she avoided the question again...

To be continued..
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:01 pm

nicoleaika wrote:I love the king XD That's what we call a modern king (A king with cool hair, cool attitude, not to mention he's a playboy, and the son of two great couple... who unfortunately... aww..)

omg, what happened to the girl? it's scary... really...

btw, update!


lol...modern king talaga...hahaha...tnx for readin'!!!
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:02 pm

nicoleaika wrote:I love the king XD That's what we call a modern king (A king with cool hair, cool attitude, not to mention he's a playboy, and the son of two great couple... who unfortunately... aww..)

omg, what happened to the girl? it's scary... really...

btw, update!


lol...modern king talaga...hahaha...tnx for readin'!!!
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:05 pm

KAI wrote:
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KAI wrote:But its still connected right? Or is this a new story? Sorry I'm confused. Haha.
What's happening? This is freaking me out O_o

This is kinda off topic But I just want to share this haha. My own version of Sheadon lol


He's kind of young, haha. Only 16/17. And he kinda looks like Danny.
His name's Declan Galbraith. Know him?

i'm confused myself...lol...
wow....that guy is pretty cute...and does look like danny...i'm gonna prefer him as my sheadon!hahaha...it suits him better than my friend in my avatar...lol..where'd you find him?

tnx for reading...!! cheers

I dunno where my sister found him. Haha. Try goggling him. I think he's a singer.
The one in your avatar can be sheadon too. He looks more playboy than Declan lol.


you're right....he's more like a playboy guy and declan seemed so sweet....lol...
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:15 pm

anika wrote:OMD!!! A killer! haha. I like love slasher stuff at times. Like the movies Psycho and SAW. Kind of gory, true. But the plots are cool. Plus, I'm very intrigued with Jack the Ripper. Interesting criminal. haha. Very Happy
Woooah. The girl's pretty snappy. haha. I love James! He's so loyal and he's like a doting wife! Razz Razz
Update!!
Ooh KAI. He is like a little Danny. Even the clothes!!! Razz Razz

i was thinking the girl would be dorky but it would be very common so i made the story suspense and comedy romance something...and james is very loyal...the parent's are gone unfortunately but james seemed to take their place...lol


tnx for reading...
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Post  anika on Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:15 am

haha. I like the girl. She's a feisty one. Razz Razz
Aw... Danny's daydreaming. How cuute! I love you I love you I love you
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