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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Mar 28, 2009 10:42 am

nicoleaika wrote:baka may gusto si James kay shea... jokes!

XD YEY! AT LAST! You updated... hehe... wow... looks like shea finally found the girl na hindi nia makakalimutan at hindi ipagpapalit sa ibang girls... nice update... Approve!

yea..may he likes him! gasp!

tnx for reading! bounce
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Sat Mar 28, 2009 7:17 pm

i grabbed my jacket and went for the door...i was goin' to open the doorknob when james came in..
"sir..i cannot let you go.." he said distinguishly...
"cut it out james..." i told him...he just raised an eyebrow at me..
"sir..you parents clearly said that.."
"you're not my parent ok..." i yelled...
"but sir..you can't just rush off and you have to think thoroughly and.."
"and..there's no time..!" i said and got out of the room...
"sir..please!" i heard james begging but i went to the car directly and drive thru...i was on my mind and i set my decisions...i'm technically looking for her and i'm getting her back no matter what...i arrived at this bar..i've never seen before....i got out and went in...people stared at me like i was an outsider...they paved way and i saw brady..she was pretty as ever...wearing her hair in a ponytail and someone was with her...a guy..she does seem interested with him...they went in a private room...and went silent...i tried to enter but when i tried to go in...brady caught me..she gave me a quizzical look..
"what are you doing here?" she said..
"look...i want to talk to you!" brady went thru the crowd...i followed her...
"how did you find me here?" she said looking for a seat..
"i hired an inspector.." i said gladly..she didn't seat and heard her yelling..
"you what? why? what did the inspector say?" she said quickly..." don't do that again..!"
"where's the guy you're going out with?" i said looking around
"none of your business!" she went out and followed her.."don't follow me!" i stopped but tiptoed my way to my car and followed her....she went on her car..not to mention fabulous red car..which suits her..anyways...i followed her in this alley way and she entered this room...i eavesdrop and she was talking to someone...

"so..did you do it?" a cold sqeaky voice came in..
"what do you think?" a smirk from brady's voice came out...
"good...i know i can count on you...after all you're one of my favorites.."
"one of your favorites?" she interrupted.."so i'm not the only favorite around here?"
"i like your friend too..you know...jade.."
"oh..." i heard brady's sad voice...
"don't be like her...or else.."
"i won't and i've successfully killed that guy in the bar anyways!" brady said..
"good..."
"killed?" i told myself..."she's a killer?"
"brady.." i turned to the door and eavesdrop again..
"you're an assassin..you are born to be one..."
"so..?"brady asked.."what's the point?"
"don't follow jade's footsteps..." i stepped back and went on to my car but it came to me that jade was a familiar name...i get it!..she was one of the girls i dated before..i dumped technically....so that explains the killing!...but why would brady save me..i walked to my car but the door creaked open...
"shea?" brady caught me..what am i going to do?

To be continued
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Post  anika on Sat Mar 28, 2009 7:31 pm

OOOOOOHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She's a killer!! That's why!!! Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked
wooow. Never thought it would lead to this. haha. Nice one mate!!
What's gonna happen next? dead dead
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Post  kaisthelimit on Sun Mar 29, 2009 9:46 pm

Yes, he'll finally find out something about Brady!
Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!! I knew it!! She's a killer!
More please? Smile
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Post  nikka! on Mon Mar 30, 2009 2:18 pm

brady's not a killer... she's an assassin.

Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha

haha.. yeah, i know they mean the same.. but assassin sounds way better than killer. Very Happy

this is great! shea finally knows the truth..
i'm curious. what WILL he do??
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Post  ButterflyBibish on Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:25 pm

"hi brady..." i greeted her awkwardly..
"shea!what the heck are you doing here?" she whispered..."are you mad?!"
"no!'you're insane!what is this assassin thing...?" i asked...
"i told you not to follow me..i'm too dangerous...too dangerous for you!" she reminded me..
"but...but..."
"brayden..." the cold voice came out..."who is that?"
"nothing..i'll get rid of him..."
"kill the spare.." it whispered...
"leave me alone...go away...run for your life!" brayden yelled...grabbed my hand and
"no..i'm staying..." i insisted
"don't be such a stubborn..."she said.." let's go.."
"you're not brady at all...tsk..tsk..." the cold voice said smirking...
"what?" brady asked...
"kill him..or else i will..."

this is the 1st part of chap 9 ok cause i can't continue right now...have to go...urgent thing..got to do it...
please do understand...thanks..
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Post  anika on Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:36 pm

OMD!!! Who's the creep???? affraid affraid affraid
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Post  nikka! on Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:29 pm

she won't kill him... of course, he wont.
uhm.... right? Suspect
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Post  PuDd_T on Thu Apr 02, 2009 9:12 pm

OMG! so intriguing! Razz Razz

what will happen next?????

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Post  jaschier on Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:01 pm

ow, actions are getting better, i cant believe that brady was a killer!

ow, i wanna know what happen next! Razz
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