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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Mon May 26, 2008 3:56 pm

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oh yeah!
sorry im just not myself today Embarassed
of course i'll wait!
im addicted to your fic tbh Not worthy

I'm very happy to know that! Coz you made me happy.....you get to do the happy dance with mehhh!!! PBJT! PBJT! PBJT!

Not worthy I'll post the next bit as soon as possible. I promise. Not worthy

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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon May 26, 2008 4:00 pm

carmzy_sweetness wrote:

I'm very happy to know that! Coz you made me happy.....you get to do the happy dance with mehhh!!! PBJT! PBJT! PBJT!

Not worthy I'll post the next bit as soon as possible. I promise. Not worthy

yay!
happy dance!
and updation!(sorry its my own word Embarassed )
PBJT! PBJT! PBJT!
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Mon May 26, 2008 4:06 pm

KAI wrote:
yay!
happy dance!
and updation!(sorry its my own word Embarassed )
PBJT! PBJT! PBJT!

It's kinda addicting you know. might steal it Twisted Evil
hahaha

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Post  kaisthelimit on Mon May 26, 2008 4:12 pm

carmzy_sweetness wrote:
It's kinda addicting you know. might steal it Twisted Evil
hahaha

hahaha
you know you can borrow it Hahaha
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Mon May 26, 2008 4:58 pm

KAI wrote:
hahaha
you know you can borrow it Hahaha

An offer! Woooh! lol!

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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Mon May 26, 2008 6:08 pm

weee!! cant wait for the next post!!! happy dance?? haha!! funny name.. Razz PBJT! PBJT! PBJT! PBJT!

awww.. is somethin bad gunna happen to danny and blake?!?!
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Mon May 26, 2008 6:17 pm

mcflyJBdarch wrote:weee!! cant wait for the next post!!! happy dance?? haha!! funny name.. Razz PBJT! PBJT! PBJT! PBJT!

awww.. is somethin bad gunna happen to danny and blake?!?!

Yeah....it's called PBJT! the happy dance PBJT! Joy!

Hahaha...we'll see. afro

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Post  mcflyJBdarch on Mon May 26, 2008 6:26 pm

ahahah!! cant wait.. Smile
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Post  bear eyes on Mon May 26, 2008 11:34 pm

wooo! chapter 14! (i'm kinda late in reading this. O_o) lol!

aww man...her dad's not so good again. Sad

but yay! another chapter. heehee...you update fast. Razz

PBJT! PBJT! happy dance! PBJT! PBJT!

can't wait for the next! Very Happy lol!
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Post  maia 8D on Mon May 26, 2008 11:58 pm

whoa. sorry it's been so long. i haven't used the internet for a loooong time. sorry i only read chapter 13 and 14 now. Sad

but they're great chapters! Approve! you're really talented. no kidding. Very Happy clap

i can feel the family love in the first part. XD
oh no. i hope danny goes with her this time. *bites fingernails*

update soon? Very Happy
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Post  kaisthelimit on Tue May 27, 2008 6:49 pm

carmzy_sweetness wrote:
An offer! Woooh! lol!

condition: you need to post another chapter. ayt? Twisted Evil mwahahahaha! Twisted Evil
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Tue May 27, 2008 10:13 pm

mcflyJBdarch wrote:ahahah!! cant wait.. Very Happy

More soon...I promise. Razz

bear eyes wrote:wooo! chapter 14! (i'm kinda late in reading this. O_o) lol!

aww man...her dad's not so good again. Sad

but yay! another chapter. heehee...you update fast. Razz

PBJT! PBJT! happy dance! PBJT! PBJT!

can't wait for the next! Very Happy lol!

It's okie. As long as you read, you guys make me happy. Will post more pretty soon! Very Happy

PBJT! PBJT! I happy dance with you!!! PBJT! PBJT!

maia <3 wrote:whoa. sorry it's been so long. i haven't used the internet for a loooong time. sorry i only read chapter 13 and 14 now. Sad

but they're great chapters! Approve! you're really talented. no kidding. Very Happy clap

i can feel the family love in the first part. XD
oh no. i hope danny goes with her this time. *bites fingernails*

update soon? Very Happy

I've missed you! No wonder!!! It's okie...and very happy you like the adds.

Not worthy Not worthy More pretty soon...I promise Not worthy Not worthy

KAI wrote: condition: you need to post another chapter. ayt? Twisted Evil mwahahahaha! Twisted Evil

I will pretty soon....ooooh. I'mma steal your word!!! hahaha!!!


Not worthy Not worthy Not worthy Thanks for commenting guys!!! I'll post the next bit some time soon!!! Not worthy Not worthy Not worthy

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Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)

Post  mcflyJBdarch on Tue May 27, 2008 10:57 pm

hope so!!! im sooo excited.. T_T ur fic s seriously addictive... Smile bounce
PBJT! PBJT! PBJT!

More soon...I promise. Razz

i hope its ganna be really soon.. but no pressure ryt?? Smile) still cant wait.. Approve! Rock On! PBJT! PBJT! PBJT! Guitar Group hug Hahaha clap

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Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)

Post  carmzy_sweetness on Tue May 27, 2008 11:07 pm

mcflyJBdarch wrote:hope so!!! im sooo excited.. T_T ur fic s seriously addictive... Smile bounce
PBJT! PBJT! PBJT!

More soon...I promise. Razz

i hope its ganna be really soon.. but no pressure ryt?? Smile) still cant wait.. Approve! Rock On! PBJT! PBJT! PBJT! Guitar Group hug Hahaha clap

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PBJT! Joy! PBJT! Joy! PBJT! Joy! PBJT!


Good to know dude. I'll probably put it up as soon as the board RE-opens. If you haven't heard yet, we're TEMPORARILY shutting down to do some forum clean up. We'll be back in three days though.

I hope you come back to see the latest add then. Very Happy

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Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)

Post  kaisthelimit on Wed May 28, 2008 12:22 pm

can'twaitcan'twaitcan'twait
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Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)

Post  carmzy_sweetness on Thu May 29, 2008 12:40 pm

*Here's an UPDATION!!! Yes Kai, I stole your word. Or errr...borrowed. geek I have plans this afternoon so I'mma type this up real quick. Sorry in advance for the typos.
This goes out to my favorite people who keep coming back to read! ILY!!! I love you


CHAPTER 15: THERE'S STILL TIME FOR YOU

"What?" Danny sat up straighter and examined my pale face.
"Dad's in critical condition..." I whispered as I stared into space. My body was shaking and I was cold but beads of sweat were forming on my forehead.
"Wait here." Danny stood up and went I don't know where. He came back with a glass of water and was again running somewhere else in lightning speed.

I pulled out my phone and dialled my sister's mobile.
"Klara, put mom on." I ordered as soon as she muttered hello.
"Hello?" My mom said faintly.
"Mum?" My lips stared quivering. "Mum, I'm sorry I left. I....it's....I'm sorry." My voice started cracking and tears began to fall.
"It's okay dear."
"How is he?" I asked quietly.
"Get here as soon as you can." Her voice was cracking, too. I sobbed while I listened to my mother's breathing. Danny sat beside me and pulled me in a comforting hug which made me cry even more.
"Shhh...tell her we're leaving now." Danny said softly as he rubbed my back.
"Mum...I'll see you later. We're leaving now. Bye."

As soon as I ended the call, I sobbed into Danny's chest and he soothingly held me close and calmed me down. After about five minutes of silence, I calmed down a bit and stared into space.

"Blake..." I looked up into Danny's blue eyes. He stroked my cheek.
"Do you want to go now?" I nodded and he helped me to my feet.

When I turned to he door, there sat my unpacked bag that I brought and another bag. I looked back up at Danny. He smiled sweetly.

So that's what he was doing running around....
I held out my hand and he took it as we silently walked to his car and prepared for the drive to Bolton.

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The whole ride, I gazed out the window into the cold, dark night. I felt Danny observing me, but I didn't mind him. He kept quiet throughout not once bothering my silence.

Soon enough, we were pulling up in the hospital parking lot. As we walked up to the main hallway near the ER, I turned back to Danny; tears threatening to fall from my eyes. He took my hands in his and looked me in the eyes with a smile. I nodded softly and swallowed the lump in my throat.

We walked hand in hand towad the chairs in front of the ER. As soon as I saw my mom and sister, I let go of his gentle hand and ran toward them; tears falling freely.

"Is dad okay?" I asked them both and they looked at me with sad eyes and shook their heads. I dropped on my knees in front of my mum.
"I'm sorry." I said over and over in between sobs.
"It's not your fault." My mum said.

Suddenly, a doctor walked out of the ER. He looked at us.
"Mrs. McGregor?" He asked. Mum nodded.
"I'm sorry." At that moment, I started crying and sobbing even harder and Danny held me in a hug the whole time. I don't know what my sister and mum did, but at that moment, I felt horrible and pained.
"Can I see him one last time, please?" I begged. The doctor hesitated, but nodded.
I wiped my eyes and tried to calm my breathing. "Please come with me." I looked at Danny. He took my hand and nodded.

We cautiously walked into the ER where my dad lay. I walked over very slowly half expecting him to slowly open his eyes and smile at me like last time when I came in his hospital room. But.....he didn't. He just lay there immobile and still.

Surprisingly, I felt calmer and my breathing was steadier. I moved closer to him and looked at his peaceful face.
Take care of yourself dear. I'm so proud of you. I love you. His final words lingered on my mind.
"I love you too daddy. I love you, too." I slowly placed a kiss on top of his forehead......but instead of the warmth of a living body, my lips came in contact with something cold and lifeless.

I took a step back beside Danny and we both looked at the body of the man who has always been in my life...and will forever be living inside my heart.

To be continued...

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Post  kaisthelimit on Thu May 29, 2008 12:48 pm

yay!
updation!
awww
that's so sad
Sad
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Thu May 29, 2008 1:00 pm

KAI wrote:
yay!
updation!
awww
that's so sad
Sad

To avoid stealing yer word...I'mma start usinf ADDAGE. not as original, but oh well. lol!

At least they didn't break up!!! Speaking of....I thought you were going to break them up so you can have Danny?? Hahaha

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Post  kaisthelimit on Thu May 29, 2008 1:52 pm

carmzy_sweetness wrote:

To avoid stealing yer word...I'mma start usinf ADDAGE. not as original, but oh well. lol!

At least they didn't break up!!! Speaking of....I thought you were going to break them up so you can have Danny?? Hahaha

really?
me?
haha
confused
i have an amnesia
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Thu May 29, 2008 1:54 pm

KAI wrote:
really?
me?
haha
confused
i have an amnesia

Ikaw ba yun? Baka ako ang inaamnesia!!! Hahaha

I dunno. hahahaha!!! Hahaha I'm such a cuckoo head. Embarassed

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Post  kaisthelimit on Thu May 29, 2008 2:12 pm

carmzy_sweetness wrote:
Ikaw ba yun? Baka ako ang inaamnesia!!! Hahaha

I dunno. hahahaha!!! Hahaha I'm such a cuckoo head. Embarassed

hahaha Hahaha
its okay
lagi din ako nagaganyan Hahaha
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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Thu May 29, 2008 3:58 pm

KAI wrote:
hahaha Hahaha
its okay
lagi din ako nagaganyan Hahaha

Yeahp! I admit...I am a cuckoo head. Si bea naman pala yun eh!!! Hahaha lol! Embarassed Hahaha

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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Thu May 29, 2008 4:39 pm

NEED

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Post  carmzy_sweetness on Thu May 29, 2008 4:39 pm

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