She Falls Asleep (finished)
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anika wrote:nicoleaika wrote:^lol... i agree with you... btw, do you have a mcslash fic??
Um... I feel like a dope for asking this, but I've never heard of 'mcslash'. hahaha. Sorry. I'm pretty embarassed to ask, but what's a 'mcslash'?
Sorry. hahaha.
Just look at my sig. It explains what's McSlash XD
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Oh okay. hahaha. Nope. I don't think so. How about you?
By the way, have you seen the poll on popsugar? There's a poll for McFly and Matt Willis there.
By the way, have you seen the poll on popsugar? There's a poll for McFly and Matt Willis there.
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anika wrote:Oh okay. hahaha. Nope. I don't think so. How about you?
By the way, have you seen the poll on popsugar? There's a poll for McFly and Matt Willis there.
Yeah, I have... i think only one... i would love to post it here but still it's a slash..
hindi eh, wait, ano yung tanong??
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YEAH!!! Super!! I mean, cute sila together, tapos magkukulitan sila!! So Anne Boleyn and...err.. the Soldier!!! XD
Yeah... sa Wonderland Tour nila tapos may isa ring time... basta tuwing ipeperform nila yung Silence... (geez, I remember the behind the scenes, Tom and Harry kissed each other sa lips! pero may mirror na pagitan so, parang hindi rin sila nag-kiss XD)
(i post a pic on graphics and photos.. *melts*)
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nicoleaika wrote:
YEAH!!! Super!! I mean, cute sila together, tapos magkukulitan sila!! So Anne Boleyn and...err.. the Soldier!!! XD
Yeah... sa Wonderland Tour nila tapos may isa ring time... basta tuwing ipeperform nila yung Silence... (geez, I remember the behind the scenes, Tom and Harry kissed each other sa lips! pero may mirror na pagitan so, parang hindi rin sila nag-kiss XD)
(i post a pic on graphics and photos.. *melts*)
OMD!!! How wonderful!!! LOL. I'll check it out. But I think it'll be too much for me to handle.
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yeah.. me too... wait, bout my fic, i dunno if i'm going to post it mamayang gabi or bukas...
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nicoleaika wrote:yeah.. me too... wait, bout my fic, i dunno if i'm going to post it mamayang gabi or bukas...
Oh okay. I can wait. haha. We have exams already tomorrow, so I won't be able to be on the net until Friday. Post it. I'l be waiting.
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Ok, so, this is it... chapter 6
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Chapter 6: Confused
Danny: “Tell me, Harry, is Leah’s already dead?”
Leah’s speechless. Her mind tells her that it’s the right time, but deep inside her heart, it’s no. She doesn’t want to hear Danny and Harry’s conversation, so she went out.
Danny: (panting) “Harry, please answer!”
Harry: “Leah?”
Harry thinks and breathes deeply.
Harry: “Leah… no, she is not dead.”
Danny: “But how she met this Dougie if Dougie’s already dead?”
Harry: “Actually, it’s a very weird story. I can see dead people. Believe it or not.” (laughs) “And I was like Leah and Dougie’s bridge.” (stares to Danny) “Why you asked?”
Danny: (stopping his tears from flowing) “It’s just, it’s weird, you know, about how Dougie and Leah met… By the way, where’s Leah now?”
Harry: “Danny, can you give me little time?”
Danny: “But why?”
Harry: “I will figure out why”
Danny: “Just a minute.”
Harry went to Leah and Dougie
Leah: “Harry, what happened? What’s Danny’s reaction?”
It looks like Harry didn’t hear Leah’s question, but yet he’s looking at her.
Leah: “Harry? Are you okay?”
Harry: “I told Danny.”
Leah: “What did he say?”
Harry: “Nothing”
Dougie: “He said nothing?! Poor Leah”
Leah: “Nothing?”
Harry: “Nothing. Wait, where’s madam?”
Dougie: “They brought her already on the hospital, and we heard that she’s dead on arrival.”
Harry: “You heard?”
Dougie: “Gossip”
Harry: “Ohh…”
Leah: (cries) “Danny said nothing?”
Harry: “What, you can’t believe it?”
Leah: “You must be lying”
Harry: “I wish to. But it’s what you want, to tell him you’re already dead.”
Leah started walking slowly away from the theater while crying.
Dougie: “Don’t get offense but, for me you don’t look like you tell Danny the truth.”
Harry: (smiles) “How?”
Dougie: “Like now, you smiled.”
Harry: “Oh…”
Dougie: “Why you didn’t tell him the truth?”
Harry: “Look, Danny loves Leah very much, so is Leah. If Danny knew she’s already dead, he will go crazy like there’s no tomorrow. And if Leah saw him go crazy, she will realize how much Danny still loves her.”
Dougie: “What do you mean?”
Harry: “I don’t want Leah to realize Danny still loves her.”
Dougie: “In other words, you’re jealous to Danny because you like Leah?”
Harry: “No! C’mon! That girl’s sometimes, she’s vain… oh, no, geez, that’s not an appropriate term, um… she’s just, she’s different, she’s unique, I don’t know, she’s simple but I felt she’s unique”
Dougie: (jaw drop) “Okay… you said it already.” (smiles)
Harry: “Wait, I didn’t say that I like Leah!”
Dougie: “Actually, you just said it”
Harry: “Ha ha ha…”
Danny: (suddenly showed up) “Harry, you already have a long time to figure out why. You’re laughing again, alone.”
Harry: “Oh, no! No… I’m not talking alone. Err… yeah, I think so… again… Danny, ok, I know this isn’t the right time to ask this question… but, I’m just going to ask you this…”
Danny: “What’s it?”
Harry: “Ok… (took a deep breath) fine, just never mind it anyway.”
Danny: “Oh…. Strange… by the way, about Leah, where is she?”
Harry: “She is… she is in our home now.”
Danny: “What?! I mean, oh… but why?”
Harry: “You really want to know why?”
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to be continue.. (part 2 of chap6)
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Chapter 6: Confused
Danny: “Tell me, Harry, is Leah’s already dead?”
Leah’s speechless. Her mind tells her that it’s the right time, but deep inside her heart, it’s no. She doesn’t want to hear Danny and Harry’s conversation, so she went out.
Danny: (panting) “Harry, please answer!”
Harry: “Leah?”
Harry thinks and breathes deeply.
Harry: “Leah… no, she is not dead.”
Danny: “But how she met this Dougie if Dougie’s already dead?”
Harry: “Actually, it’s a very weird story. I can see dead people. Believe it or not.” (laughs) “And I was like Leah and Dougie’s bridge.” (stares to Danny) “Why you asked?”
Danny: (stopping his tears from flowing) “It’s just, it’s weird, you know, about how Dougie and Leah met… By the way, where’s Leah now?”
Harry: “Danny, can you give me little time?”
Danny: “But why?”
Harry: “I will figure out why”
Danny: “Just a minute.”
Harry went to Leah and Dougie
Leah: “Harry, what happened? What’s Danny’s reaction?”
It looks like Harry didn’t hear Leah’s question, but yet he’s looking at her.
Leah: “Harry? Are you okay?”
Harry: “I told Danny.”
Leah: “What did he say?”
Harry: “Nothing”
Dougie: “He said nothing?! Poor Leah”
Leah: “Nothing?”
Harry: “Nothing. Wait, where’s madam?”
Dougie: “They brought her already on the hospital, and we heard that she’s dead on arrival.”
Harry: “You heard?”
Dougie: “Gossip”
Harry: “Ohh…”
Leah: (cries) “Danny said nothing?”
Harry: “What, you can’t believe it?”
Leah: “You must be lying”
Harry: “I wish to. But it’s what you want, to tell him you’re already dead.”
Leah started walking slowly away from the theater while crying.
Dougie: “Don’t get offense but, for me you don’t look like you tell Danny the truth.”
Harry: (smiles) “How?”
Dougie: “Like now, you smiled.”
Harry: “Oh…”
Dougie: “Why you didn’t tell him the truth?”
Harry: “Look, Danny loves Leah very much, so is Leah. If Danny knew she’s already dead, he will go crazy like there’s no tomorrow. And if Leah saw him go crazy, she will realize how much Danny still loves her.”
Dougie: “What do you mean?”
Harry: “I don’t want Leah to realize Danny still loves her.”
Dougie: “In other words, you’re jealous to Danny because you like Leah?”
Harry: “No! C’mon! That girl’s sometimes, she’s vain… oh, no, geez, that’s not an appropriate term, um… she’s just, she’s different, she’s unique, I don’t know, she’s simple but I felt she’s unique”
Dougie: (jaw drop) “Okay… you said it already.” (smiles)
Harry: “Wait, I didn’t say that I like Leah!”
Dougie: “Actually, you just said it”
Harry: “Ha ha ha…”
Danny: (suddenly showed up) “Harry, you already have a long time to figure out why. You’re laughing again, alone.”
Harry: “Oh, no! No… I’m not talking alone. Err… yeah, I think so… again… Danny, ok, I know this isn’t the right time to ask this question… but, I’m just going to ask you this…”
Danny: “What’s it?”
Harry: “Ok… (took a deep breath) fine, just never mind it anyway.”
Danny: “Oh…. Strange… by the way, about Leah, where is she?”
Harry: “She is… she is in our home now.”
Danny: “What?! I mean, oh… but why?”
Harry: “You really want to know why?”
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to be continue.. (part 2 of chap6)
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wahahaha im so stupid.
i didn't know i missed the last chap, so i read this and can't understand it.
hahahaha.
BTW this is great, harry likes leah and danny's dad killed dougie and his mom and danny's mom was killed by an unknow killer
keep em coming!
i didn't know i missed the last chap, so i read this and can't understand it.
hahahaha.
BTW this is great, harry likes leah and danny's dad killed dougie and his mom and danny's mom was killed by an unknow killer
keep em coming!
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I will try to post mines tomorrow afternoon... thanks for reading it...
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COOOOLL Update!! hahaha. Nice. You go Harry!!
Loove it.
Loove it.
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Harry: “I told you that, she still loves you much. But aren’t you getting tired?”
Danny: “Tired of what? Of loving Leah? Of course not…”
Harry: “No, not that... but of just waiting for Leah to come to you and not looking for her?”
Danny: “Hey, I don’t hear anything that answers the question why”
Harry: “Just answer!”
Danny: “You’re shouting at me?”
Harry: “I… I’m so sorry. I mean… please just answer my question.”
Danny: “Because I’m intuiting…”
Harry: “And you’re intuiting because you’re coward. You’re scare about what happened to Leah. You’re just intuiting because you’re afraid that maybe Leah already liked another guy.”
Danny: “I’m intuiting because I want to make sure that Leah’s not around me”
Harry: (laughs, the bad guy’s laugh) “So you’re telling me that you wanted to make sure Leah’s already gone?”
Danny: “No! I mean… if she’s around, I will able to see her. Not that… she is around me but I can’t see her…”
Harry: “Okay, I get it, in other words, you want to make sure that Leah’s still alive?”
Danny: “Yeah… Now, please answer my question.”
Harry: “Sorry Danny. I’m just, a little, confused. I don’t know what to say. Give me a longer time”
Danny: “I need the answer now.”
Harry: (sigh) “Fine. Leah… she is in our home because she’s helpless. There was this accident. She needs to recover for a while.”
Danny: “And that’s the reason why she’s not here now?”
Harry: “Yeah… but I don’t know if someday she will able to be here.”
Danny: “What do you mean?”
Harry: “Nothing… (smiles) so far.”
Dougie: “Ooh… did I smell a competition?”
Harry: “See you later, sir…”
Danny: “Don’t call me sir. You’re fired.”
Danny: “Tired of what? Of loving Leah? Of course not…”
Harry: “No, not that... but of just waiting for Leah to come to you and not looking for her?”
Danny: “Hey, I don’t hear anything that answers the question why”
Harry: “Just answer!”
Danny: “You’re shouting at me?”
Harry: “I… I’m so sorry. I mean… please just answer my question.”
Danny: “Because I’m intuiting…”
Harry: “And you’re intuiting because you’re coward. You’re scare about what happened to Leah. You’re just intuiting because you’re afraid that maybe Leah already liked another guy.”
Danny: “I’m intuiting because I want to make sure that Leah’s not around me”
Harry: (laughs, the bad guy’s laugh) “So you’re telling me that you wanted to make sure Leah’s already gone?”
Danny: “No! I mean… if she’s around, I will able to see her. Not that… she is around me but I can’t see her…”
Harry: “Okay, I get it, in other words, you want to make sure that Leah’s still alive?”
Danny: “Yeah… Now, please answer my question.”
Harry: “Sorry Danny. I’m just, a little, confused. I don’t know what to say. Give me a longer time”
Danny: “I need the answer now.”
Harry: (sigh) “Fine. Leah… she is in our home because she’s helpless. There was this accident. She needs to recover for a while.”
Danny: “And that’s the reason why she’s not here now?”
Harry: “Yeah… but I don’t know if someday she will able to be here.”
Danny: “What do you mean?”
Harry: “Nothing… (smiles) so far.”
Dougie: “Ooh… did I smell a competition?”
Harry: “See you later, sir…”
Danny: “Don’t call me sir. You’re fired.”
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Oh my gosh!! What's up with Harry?? hahaha. I'm getting all excited now.
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wahaa harry's fired!!
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woohoo!! 1000th post!!!
(talagang hindi ako nagpost para rito!!! XD)
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Chapter 7: Chance
Danny left with an unpredictable face. He looks like smiling mixed with anger, angst, etc. While Harry…
Dougie: “Congrats dude, you’re fired.”
Harry: (smiles) “Thanks”
Dougie: “Ooh… you smiled?! Weird…”
Harry: “At least I’m not working for Danny’s.”
Dougie: “He he… You, Harry, are so in love to Leah that you will do anything, bad or good, to get her.”
Harry: “No, I’m not. We just met days ago. It’s impossible I will fall in love for her easily.”
Dougie: “Oh, so you’re telling, you want to fall in love to Leah the hardest way.”
Harry: “Exactly! (Dougie stares to Harry) I mean… no!”
Dougie: “C’mon Harry! You liked---“
Harry: “By the way, where’s Leah?”
Dougie: “Oh Harry! You’re changing the topic!”
Harry: “I’m not changing the topic. It’s still about Leah.”
Dougie: “Yeah, you’re right. Um… I don’t know where is she now. You’re concerned, huh?”
Harry: “It’s just, she left with sad look on her face. What if there’s something bad happened to her like an accident.”
Dougie: “C’mon, don’t worry.”
Harry: “And why I’m not going to worry?”
Dougie: “Coz Leah’s already dead. Maybe you already forgot.”
Harry: “Oh, yeah, I forgot.”
Dougie: “Okay, nevermind… let’s just look for her…”
So they did. And they saw Leah on the place where she died. Sitting on the sidewalk. She’s not crying, but inside her heart she does.
Harry: “Leah, look, I understand why you’re sad…”
Leah: “Maybe we’re not really meant for each other. I thought he’s the one. Life’s really unfair.”
Harry: “C’mon Leah, don’t waste your time blaming life. It may be sometimes unfair but look, maybe Danny’s shocked that’s why he didn’t say nothing.”
Leah: (almost smile) “Oh, maybe you’re right.”
Harry: “OH! No, maybe he was so happy to know you’re already dead.”
Leah stares to Harry. Dougie giggles.
Harry: “Ok, why are you looking at me like that?”
Leah: “Nothing. It’s just… nothing.”
Harry: (and faces to dougie) “and you?”
Dougie: “Na…”
Harry: “Nothing? Good.”
Dougie: “Well… Ooh, I forgot, I need to go now.”
Leah: “What, where are you going?”
Dougie: “I have an appointment”
Leah: “You’re kidding. A guy like you has things like appointment?! That one is a very funny joke.” (laughs)
Dougie: “Whatever Leah. Gotta go. Bye!”
Harry: “Goodbye!”
Leah: “Bye”
Dougie left.
Leah: “So… what’s up?”
Harry: “Huh?”
Leah: “Dougie got an appointment, and I felt you’re kinda, related to it. What’s up?”
Harry: “No! No… it’s not what you think. I didn’t know too that Dougie got an appointment, if that’s really an appointment”
Leah: “Hmm… you’re kinda weird this time. Are you sick or something?”
Harry: “Yeah, actually, I have a sick.”
Leah: “Oh, you already visit the doctor?”
Harry: “Not yet.”
Leah: (touch Harry’s neck to check if he’s [s]hot[/s], literally hot) “Wait, you’re not hot”
Harry: “I did not say I have sick, literally.”
Leah: “Oh, sorry, then what’s your sick?”
Harry: (smiles) “I have love sick”
Leah: (smiles, too) “Really?! To whom?”
Harry: “To you…”
Leah: “Huh?”
Harry: “What?! Huh?! I mean… to yuki, a chicken.”
Leah: “Let me guess, Yuki’s a very delicious fried chicken.” (laughs)
Harry: (Harry didn’t answer immediately… he’s staring passionately to Leah) “Huh? What? Oh, yeah…”
Leah: “You’re really we…”
Harry didn’t let Leah finish what she’s going to say. He holds her shoulders…
Leah: “Oh.. kay… what’s happening?”
Harry: “I can touch you?”
Leah: “Yes, I think… Harry, what’s happening to you?”
Harry: “I don’t know! I think I… I’m going crazy!”
Leah: “Woah! (took Harry’s hands off her shoulder) crazy?!”
Harry: “No! (put his hands back to Leah’s shoulder) not the literal crazy… Leah… I’m… I’m crazy… because of my love sick!”
Leah: “Oh my God, Harry!!! Congrats!! You didn’t look like in love to a chicken… maybe you’re in love to a human”
Harry: “Yeah! I’m really in love to human!! I don’t know who is that Yuki the chicken. It’s not true.” (laughs)
Leah: “Then who’s that girl? And what is she like?”
Harry: “She is an angel came from heaven…”
Leah: “Wow, sweet description… Let me guess, her name’s Angel? Because you said she is an angel came from heaven.”
Harry: “No, her name’s Leah.”
Leah: “What?!”
Harry: “Oh, sorry…”
Leah: “Oh my God! Harry! You’re in love to girl whose name is also Leah! It’s so cool…”
Harry: “Oh… you didn’t get it, do ya?”
Leah: “I don’t get what?”
Harry: (became serious) “Leah, you’re the girl. I… I like you.”
(talagang hindi ako nagpost para rito!!! XD)
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Chapter 7: Chance
Danny left with an unpredictable face. He looks like smiling mixed with anger, angst, etc. While Harry…
Dougie: “Congrats dude, you’re fired.”
Harry: (smiles) “Thanks”
Dougie: “Ooh… you smiled?! Weird…”
Harry: “At least I’m not working for Danny’s.”
Dougie: “He he… You, Harry, are so in love to Leah that you will do anything, bad or good, to get her.”
Harry: “No, I’m not. We just met days ago. It’s impossible I will fall in love for her easily.”
Dougie: “Oh, so you’re telling, you want to fall in love to Leah the hardest way.”
Harry: “Exactly! (Dougie stares to Harry) I mean… no!”
Dougie: “C’mon Harry! You liked---“
Harry: “By the way, where’s Leah?”
Dougie: “Oh Harry! You’re changing the topic!”
Harry: “I’m not changing the topic. It’s still about Leah.”
Dougie: “Yeah, you’re right. Um… I don’t know where is she now. You’re concerned, huh?”
Harry: “It’s just, she left with sad look on her face. What if there’s something bad happened to her like an accident.”
Dougie: “C’mon, don’t worry.”
Harry: “And why I’m not going to worry?”
Dougie: “Coz Leah’s already dead. Maybe you already forgot.”
Harry: “Oh, yeah, I forgot.”
Dougie: “Okay, nevermind… let’s just look for her…”
So they did. And they saw Leah on the place where she died. Sitting on the sidewalk. She’s not crying, but inside her heart she does.
Harry: “Leah, look, I understand why you’re sad…”
Leah: “Maybe we’re not really meant for each other. I thought he’s the one. Life’s really unfair.”
Harry: “C’mon Leah, don’t waste your time blaming life. It may be sometimes unfair but look, maybe Danny’s shocked that’s why he didn’t say nothing.”
Leah: (almost smile) “Oh, maybe you’re right.”
Harry: “OH! No, maybe he was so happy to know you’re already dead.”
Leah stares to Harry. Dougie giggles.
Harry: “Ok, why are you looking at me like that?”
Leah: “Nothing. It’s just… nothing.”
Harry: (and faces to dougie) “and you?”
Dougie: “Na…”
Harry: “Nothing? Good.”
Dougie: “Well… Ooh, I forgot, I need to go now.”
Leah: “What, where are you going?”
Dougie: “I have an appointment”
Leah: “You’re kidding. A guy like you has things like appointment?! That one is a very funny joke.” (laughs)
Dougie: “Whatever Leah. Gotta go. Bye!”
Harry: “Goodbye!”
Leah: “Bye”
Dougie left.
Leah: “So… what’s up?”
Harry: “Huh?”
Leah: “Dougie got an appointment, and I felt you’re kinda, related to it. What’s up?”
Harry: “No! No… it’s not what you think. I didn’t know too that Dougie got an appointment, if that’s really an appointment”
Leah: “Hmm… you’re kinda weird this time. Are you sick or something?”
Harry: “Yeah, actually, I have a sick.”
Leah: “Oh, you already visit the doctor?”
Harry: “Not yet.”
Leah: (touch Harry’s neck to check if he’s [s]hot[/s], literally hot) “Wait, you’re not hot”
Harry: “I did not say I have sick, literally.”
Leah: “Oh, sorry, then what’s your sick?”
Harry: (smiles) “I have love sick”
Leah: (smiles, too) “Really?! To whom?”
Harry: “To you…”
Leah: “Huh?”
Harry: “What?! Huh?! I mean… to yuki, a chicken.”
Leah: “Let me guess, Yuki’s a very delicious fried chicken.” (laughs)
Harry: (Harry didn’t answer immediately… he’s staring passionately to Leah) “Huh? What? Oh, yeah…”
Leah: “You’re really we…”
Harry didn’t let Leah finish what she’s going to say. He holds her shoulders…
Leah: “Oh.. kay… what’s happening?”
Harry: “I can touch you?”
Leah: “Yes, I think… Harry, what’s happening to you?”
Harry: “I don’t know! I think I… I’m going crazy!”
Leah: “Woah! (took Harry’s hands off her shoulder) crazy?!”
Harry: “No! (put his hands back to Leah’s shoulder) not the literal crazy… Leah… I’m… I’m crazy… because of my love sick!”
Leah: “Oh my God, Harry!!! Congrats!! You didn’t look like in love to a chicken… maybe you’re in love to a human”
Harry: “Yeah! I’m really in love to human!! I don’t know who is that Yuki the chicken. It’s not true.” (laughs)
Leah: “Then who’s that girl? And what is she like?”
Harry: “She is an angel came from heaven…”
Leah: “Wow, sweet description… Let me guess, her name’s Angel? Because you said she is an angel came from heaven.”
Harry: “No, her name’s Leah.”
Leah: “What?!”
Harry: “Oh, sorry…”
Leah: “Oh my God! Harry! You’re in love to girl whose name is also Leah! It’s so cool…”
Harry: “Oh… you didn’t get it, do ya?”
Leah: “I don’t get what?”
Harry: (became serious) “Leah, you’re the girl. I… I like you.”
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first off:
that was really mean.
yes, harry's really weird ATM. haha
nice add, i need to go.
see ya tom.
'night
Harry: “OH! No, maybe he was so happy to know you’re already dead.”
that was really mean.
yes, harry's really weird ATM. haha
nice add, i need to go.
see ya tom.
'night
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NOOOO!!! Harry!! hahahaha. Harry does seem pretty weird now, but I just laughed.
Niiiceee. And Dougie's scheming with him? haha. So cute!!
Niiiceee. And Dougie's scheming with him? haha. So cute!!
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Chapter 8: The truth
Leah’s speechless. Harry felt nervous.
Harry: “Leah?”
Leah: (took off Harry’s hands again…) “So… uh…”
Harry: “Sorry, I didn’t expect it that I will… yeah… like you… and um…”
Leah: “I… I didn’t expect it too.”
Harry: “I didn’t expect I would like someone who’s already, dead.”
Leah: “Harry, I gotta go.” (Stand up)
Harry: “Where are you going? Don’t tell me you have an appointment too”
Leah: “I don’t… it was just… this guy in front of me like me? Come on…!”
Harry: “You’re surprised that someone who’s still living like you?”
Leah: “I am very surprised.” (and left Harry alone)
Harry: (to himself) “What I’d done! UGH! I’m so stupid and crazy. I shouldn’t tell her that I like her in that kind of way…”
Tom: “Hello Harry. You’re talking again alone, huh?”
Harry: (whisper himself) “Oh my God…!” (to Tom) “Hello Tom. Long time no see.”
Tom: “Why are you here? Day off?”
Harry: “More than a day off. I’m fired.”
Tom: “Oh, about Danny’s mother?”
Harry: “Geez. Yeah… you already know about it?”
Tom: “Danny told me… but he didn’t tell me you’re already fired.”
Harry: “Maybe he forgot me…”
Tom: “By the way, what’s up?” (sit on the sidewalk, beside Harry)
Harry: “I just told someone that I like her”
Tom: “Oh, who?”
Harry: “Leah…”
Tom: “LEAH?! You mean Leah/Danny’s girlfriend?!”
Harry: “Yeah... look, I didn’t expect that I will like her…”
Tom: “Yet, she’s adorable” (looks like Harry didn’t hear him)
Harry: “I mean, I was just going to help her then the next thing I know… she’s the most amazing girl in the world. But…”
Tom: “But she’s your former boss’ girl…”
Harry: “But she’s Danny’s girlfriend… and she’s already dead! My God…” (Tom’s jaw drops) “She’s already dead… I’m in love to girl who is already dead… wait, but at least I’m the only one who can see her…”
Tom: “Leah’s already DEAD?”
Harry: “yeah…” (back to reality) “What? What, Leah’s already dead? Yeah... I mean, no…”
Tom: “Harry!”
Harry: “Yes! She’s already dead. Please don’t tell Danny, please…”
Tom: “Then why I’m not going to tell Danny?”
Harry: “If Danny found out Leah’s already dead, Danny will go crazy and Leah will realize how much Danny still loves her.”
Tom: “I get it. You’re jealous…”
Harry: “Good you understand…”
Tom: “But I will really tell Danny. He’s my best friend and Leah’s his girlfriend. He has the right to know what happened to his girl.”
Harry: “If you tell Danny, he will not believe you because you don’t have any proof.”
Tom: “Then I will bring you.”
Harry: “No way! It can’t be. I already told Danny that Leah’s still alive.”
Tom: “What? You lied?”
Harry: “No! I mean… yeah…”
Tom: “You… you really like Leah, don’t you?”
Harry: “I don’t know… I think… I do…”
Tom: (sighed) “Ok…”
Harry: “You will not tell Danny that Leah’s already dead?”
Tom: “I mean, ok, I will still tell Danny”
Harry: “C’mon Tom! Please don’t!”
Tom: “Sorry Har. Bye”
Tom left and Dougie arrived
Dougie: “What happened to you and Leah? What happened to Leah? Why she looks like Danny’s friend?” (laughs)
Harry: “Very funny. Haha… It’s not Leah, obviously. Leah left after she knew I like her. Then Tom arrived and I accidentally told him Leah’s already dead…”
Dougie: “And he’s now going to Danny to tell him the truth?”
Harry: “Exactly… Dougie, help me! How can I stop Tom?”
Dougie: “Maybe we shouldn’t stop him”
Harry: “For what? For Danny and Leah to know that I lied to them?!”
Dougie: “But Harry, you’re the one who didn’t do the right thing. Maybe you also forgot that the reason why you and Leah met is Danny. If Leah didn’t ask for your help to tell Danny the truth, you will not know Leah… or maybe you will because she’s Danny’s girlfriend and Danny’s your boss, former I should say…”
Harry: “In other words, I need to thank Danny because, because of him, I will not fall for Leah?! Is that what you mean?”
Dougie: “Harry…”
Harry: “UGH! I’m crazy, right?”
Dougie: (smiles) “I’m so glad you know.”
Harry took a deep breath. And think… deeply. And he suddenly ran away. Dougie followed him…
*they’re heading to Danny’s home and they found Danny and Tom there. And they’re surprised to see Leah too…
Tom: “Danny, good that I found you.”
Danny: “Oh, really? What’s up?”
Tom: “About Leah…”
Danny: “Yeah, she’s living with Harry…”
Tom: “Oh, is that what Harry said?”
Leah: “What?”
Danny: “Yeah. Don’t tell me that that’s what you’re going to tell me?”
Tom: “No, no, it’s not that. Harry lied to you actually.”
Danny: “Harry lied to me? You mean Leah’s not living with Harry?”
Leah: “Harry lied to me, too…”
Tom: “The good news is, yeah, she’s not living with Harry…”
Danny: “And the bad news…”
Tom stopped because he saw Harry.
Danny: “You lied to me, Harry.”
Harry: “Yes, I know, and I’m really traumatized. You can kill me if you want.”
Danny: “C’mon, you didn’t deserve such punishment”
Tom: “And if you kill him, he will be with Leah forever.”
Danny: (smiles) “Really…” (Sadden) “What do you mean?”
Tom: “The bad news is, Leah’s, not ‘living’ with Harry, oh, not only Harry, us, too…”
Danny: (Controls his emotion) “Well, nice try Tom, it’s the worst joke ever.”
Harry: “He’s not joking, Danny. It’s true.”
Danny: (Two tears drop…) “Prove it.”
Harry: “I can see dead people.”
Danny: “You’re kidding.”
Harry: “Leah asked for my help on telling you the truth because I can see her, and Dougie.”
Danny: (sobbing) “But why you didn’t tell me the truth?”
Harry: “I’m sorry about that… (Breathes deeply) “I like Leah, Danny… At first I would really love to tell you the truth until I realized that I’m already falling for her… yet, I thought she chose you, because she really, really, loves you.”
Leah: (smiling while crying) “Harry…”
No one talk for while… and Harry breaks the silence.
Harry: “Danny, don’t tell me you still didn’t believe me?”
Danny: “I don’t know… maybe I will if you show me her body… her cold body…”
And he went back to his room…
Harry: (sighed) “So…” (look at Tom) “Dead body…”
Tom: “Don’t look at me like that. I’m not dead.”
Harry: “No, no… I… I mean… can you help me look for Leah’s dead body?”
Tom: “Oh… me? Hmm… sure”
Dougie: “Me too!”
Harry: “Ok, ok… Leah, you want?”
Leah: “Sure…”
Tom: “Oh, wait, you’re talking to Leah?”
Harry: “Yeah, she’s right over there” (point her)
Tom: (pretending he can see her) “Oh… Hi Leah… very long time… err… no see… ok, Harry, what did she said?”
Leah: “Hello Tom… um… (to Harry) he didn’t see us, did he?”
Harry: (to Leah) “He didn’t…” (to Tom) “She said hello Tom”
And they continue their conversation…
Dougie: “Can you please tell me if you guys are imitating a scene in a Mental Hospital?”
Harry: “Haha… nice Doug… anyway, let’s go…”
Leah’s speechless. Harry felt nervous.
Harry: “Leah?”
Leah: (took off Harry’s hands again…) “So… uh…”
Harry: “Sorry, I didn’t expect it that I will… yeah… like you… and um…”
Leah: “I… I didn’t expect it too.”
Harry: “I didn’t expect I would like someone who’s already, dead.”
Leah: “Harry, I gotta go.” (Stand up)
Harry: “Where are you going? Don’t tell me you have an appointment too”
Leah: “I don’t… it was just… this guy in front of me like me? Come on…!”
Harry: “You’re surprised that someone who’s still living like you?”
Leah: “I am very surprised.” (and left Harry alone)
Harry: (to himself) “What I’d done! UGH! I’m so stupid and crazy. I shouldn’t tell her that I like her in that kind of way…”
Tom: “Hello Harry. You’re talking again alone, huh?”
Harry: (whisper himself) “Oh my God…!” (to Tom) “Hello Tom. Long time no see.”
Tom: “Why are you here? Day off?”
Harry: “More than a day off. I’m fired.”
Tom: “Oh, about Danny’s mother?”
Harry: “Geez. Yeah… you already know about it?”
Tom: “Danny told me… but he didn’t tell me you’re already fired.”
Harry: “Maybe he forgot me…”
Tom: “By the way, what’s up?” (sit on the sidewalk, beside Harry)
Harry: “I just told someone that I like her”
Tom: “Oh, who?”
Harry: “Leah…”
Tom: “LEAH?! You mean Leah/Danny’s girlfriend?!”
Harry: “Yeah... look, I didn’t expect that I will like her…”
Tom: “Yet, she’s adorable” (looks like Harry didn’t hear him)
Harry: “I mean, I was just going to help her then the next thing I know… she’s the most amazing girl in the world. But…”
Tom: “But she’s your former boss’ girl…”
Harry: “But she’s Danny’s girlfriend… and she’s already dead! My God…” (Tom’s jaw drops) “She’s already dead… I’m in love to girl who is already dead… wait, but at least I’m the only one who can see her…”
Tom: “Leah’s already DEAD?”
Harry: “yeah…” (back to reality) “What? What, Leah’s already dead? Yeah... I mean, no…”
Tom: “Harry!”
Harry: “Yes! She’s already dead. Please don’t tell Danny, please…”
Tom: “Then why I’m not going to tell Danny?”
Harry: “If Danny found out Leah’s already dead, Danny will go crazy and Leah will realize how much Danny still loves her.”
Tom: “I get it. You’re jealous…”
Harry: “Good you understand…”
Tom: “But I will really tell Danny. He’s my best friend and Leah’s his girlfriend. He has the right to know what happened to his girl.”
Harry: “If you tell Danny, he will not believe you because you don’t have any proof.”
Tom: “Then I will bring you.”
Harry: “No way! It can’t be. I already told Danny that Leah’s still alive.”
Tom: “What? You lied?”
Harry: “No! I mean… yeah…”
Tom: “You… you really like Leah, don’t you?”
Harry: “I don’t know… I think… I do…”
Tom: (sighed) “Ok…”
Harry: “You will not tell Danny that Leah’s already dead?”
Tom: “I mean, ok, I will still tell Danny”
Harry: “C’mon Tom! Please don’t!”
Tom: “Sorry Har. Bye”
Tom left and Dougie arrived
Dougie: “What happened to you and Leah? What happened to Leah? Why she looks like Danny’s friend?” (laughs)
Harry: “Very funny. Haha… It’s not Leah, obviously. Leah left after she knew I like her. Then Tom arrived and I accidentally told him Leah’s already dead…”
Dougie: “And he’s now going to Danny to tell him the truth?”
Harry: “Exactly… Dougie, help me! How can I stop Tom?”
Dougie: “Maybe we shouldn’t stop him”
Harry: “For what? For Danny and Leah to know that I lied to them?!”
Dougie: “But Harry, you’re the one who didn’t do the right thing. Maybe you also forgot that the reason why you and Leah met is Danny. If Leah didn’t ask for your help to tell Danny the truth, you will not know Leah… or maybe you will because she’s Danny’s girlfriend and Danny’s your boss, former I should say…”
Harry: “In other words, I need to thank Danny because, because of him, I will not fall for Leah?! Is that what you mean?”
Dougie: “Harry…”
Harry: “UGH! I’m crazy, right?”
Dougie: (smiles) “I’m so glad you know.”
Harry took a deep breath. And think… deeply. And he suddenly ran away. Dougie followed him…
*they’re heading to Danny’s home and they found Danny and Tom there. And they’re surprised to see Leah too…
Tom: “Danny, good that I found you.”
Danny: “Oh, really? What’s up?”
Tom: “About Leah…”
Danny: “Yeah, she’s living with Harry…”
Tom: “Oh, is that what Harry said?”
Leah: “What?”
Danny: “Yeah. Don’t tell me that that’s what you’re going to tell me?”
Tom: “No, no, it’s not that. Harry lied to you actually.”
Danny: “Harry lied to me? You mean Leah’s not living with Harry?”
Leah: “Harry lied to me, too…”
Tom: “The good news is, yeah, she’s not living with Harry…”
Danny: “And the bad news…”
Tom stopped because he saw Harry.
Danny: “You lied to me, Harry.”
Harry: “Yes, I know, and I’m really traumatized. You can kill me if you want.”
Danny: “C’mon, you didn’t deserve such punishment”
Tom: “And if you kill him, he will be with Leah forever.”
Danny: (smiles) “Really…” (Sadden) “What do you mean?”
Tom: “The bad news is, Leah’s, not ‘living’ with Harry, oh, not only Harry, us, too…”
Danny: (Controls his emotion) “Well, nice try Tom, it’s the worst joke ever.”
Harry: “He’s not joking, Danny. It’s true.”
Danny: (Two tears drop…) “Prove it.”
Harry: “I can see dead people.”
Danny: “You’re kidding.”
Harry: “Leah asked for my help on telling you the truth because I can see her, and Dougie.”
Danny: (sobbing) “But why you didn’t tell me the truth?”
Harry: “I’m sorry about that… (Breathes deeply) “I like Leah, Danny… At first I would really love to tell you the truth until I realized that I’m already falling for her… yet, I thought she chose you, because she really, really, loves you.”
Leah: (smiling while crying) “Harry…”
No one talk for while… and Harry breaks the silence.
Harry: “Danny, don’t tell me you still didn’t believe me?”
Danny: “I don’t know… maybe I will if you show me her body… her cold body…”
And he went back to his room…
Harry: (sighed) “So…” (look at Tom) “Dead body…”
Tom: “Don’t look at me like that. I’m not dead.”
Harry: “No, no… I… I mean… can you help me look for Leah’s dead body?”
Tom: “Oh… me? Hmm… sure”
Dougie: “Me too!”
Harry: “Ok, ok… Leah, you want?”
Leah: “Sure…”
Tom: “Oh, wait, you’re talking to Leah?”
Harry: “Yeah, she’s right over there” (point her)
Tom: (pretending he can see her) “Oh… Hi Leah… very long time… err… no see… ok, Harry, what did she said?”
Leah: “Hello Tom… um… (to Harry) he didn’t see us, did he?”
Harry: (to Leah) “He didn’t…” (to Tom) “She said hello Tom”
And they continue their conversation…
Dougie: “Can you please tell me if you guys are imitating a scene in a Mental Hospital?”
Harry: “Haha… nice Doug… anyway, let’s go…”
Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)
Dougie: “Can you please tell me if you guys are imitating a scene in a Mental Hospital?”
hahahaha, dougie's really funny!
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)
nice one... hehe it really entertains me!!!
jaschier- Number of posts : 1573
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)
XD
This is like a romantic comedy!
update ka na soon, I love Dougie in this one! XD
This is like a romantic comedy!
update ka na soon, I love Dougie in this one! XD
Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)
thanks for your comments... sige, mamaya... *busy posting on other topics XD*
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