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Post  anika Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:47 pm

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good job! update soon... Approve!

tnx..lol..i'll update soon cause i can't update on sunday cause i heard there will be a wholeday brownout..oh men...but i'll update tomorrow though..to make it up to you guys.......

Oh? there's a brownout? Oh no. Sad
Sure sure. It's no prob. I'll be waiting patiently. hehe. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  kaisthelimit Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:54 pm

Hahahaha. Danny's so adorable.
OMG What is Harry doing?! I hate Harry! But just this time okay? Haha. What the heck is he thinking anyway? No
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Jan 30, 2009 11:05 pm

anika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
good job! update soon... Approve!

tnx..lol..i'll update soon cause i can't update on sunday cause i heard there will be a wholeday brownout..oh men...but i'll update tomorrow though..to make it up to you guys.......

Oh? there's a brownout? Oh no. Sad
Sure sure. It's no prob. I'll be waiting patiently. hehe. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

lol...just in our place though....lol...tnx for waiting... Laughing
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Jan 30, 2009 11:06 pm

KAI wrote:Hahahaha. Danny's so adorable.
OMG What is Harry doing?! I hate Harry! But just this time okay? Haha. What the heck is he thinking anyway? No

don't worry..he'll stop..just this time though...lol...tnx for reading i'll update tomorrow...
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Post  anika Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:23 am

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anika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
good job! update soon... Approve!

tnx..lol..i'll update soon cause i can't update on sunday cause i heard there will be a wholeday brownout..oh men...but i'll update tomorrow though..to make it up to you guys.......

Oh? there's a brownout? Oh no. Sad
Sure sure. It's no prob. I'll be waiting patiently. hehe. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

lol...just in our place though....lol...tnx for waiting... Laughing

Oh? that's too bad. Sure thing. I'll really wait. Very Happy
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:27 am

anika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
anika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
good job! update soon... Approve!

tnx..lol..i'll update soon cause i can't update on sunday cause i heard there will be a wholeday brownout..oh men...but i'll update tomorrow though..to make it up to you guys.......

Oh? there's a brownout? Oh no. Sad
Sure sure. It's no prob. I'll be waiting patiently. hehe. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

lol...just in our place though....lol...tnx for waiting... Laughing

Oh? that's too bad. Sure thing. I'll really wait. Very Happy

it is bad..lol...anyways..it's just one day...and i'll update this afternoon..be sure to read it... Razz
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Post  PuDd_T Sat Jan 31, 2009 11:07 am

anika wrote:HARRY'S NOT BAD. HE'S EVIL.
hahaha. Bad indeed!!! Aw harry. Don't be like that. Sad
Very nice update. The plot thickens and I love it. I loved it when Danny punched Harry!! (Of course, I was sympathizing with Harry too but I was on Danny's side). How dare he do that? AW!!
I'm excited for the next chapters! Razz

Super Tounge Harry's not EVIL!!!! noooooooo!!!! hahaha!!

but in this fic, i guess he is! XD it's okay! i still love him! Joy!
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Post  PuDd_T Sat Jan 31, 2009 11:10 am

hahaha!! aww! Harry's bad! Sad
I cannot believe it!!!
why'd he do that? poor him, he didn't want to do it though, right?
cuz he was tearing up before he did it and he said sorry..
but it was for money! so BAAAD HARRY! (just this time though) lol

the update was awesome! hahaha!

update soon!! Approve!
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sat Jan 31, 2009 1:36 pm

PuDd_T wrote:hahaha!! aww! Harry's bad! Sad
I cannot believe it!!!
why'd he do that? poor him, he didn't want to do it though, right?
cuz he was tearing up before he did it and he said sorry..
but it was for money! so BAAAD HARRY! (just this time though) lol

the update was awesome! hahaha!

update soon!! Approve!

hahaha..tnx for reading..and i'm so sorry for all the harry fans...i have to do it!!!!LOL....i'll update as soon as i can...and for everyone who reads (loves) my fic...thank you so much..it came to 1000 and above views..thank you so much... bounce
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sat Jan 31, 2009 2:17 pm

"what are you talking about?" the queen asked furiously.."you know this guy?"
"i don't know..." he answered staring carefully at harry "i can remember someone when i see that face..."
"what?" the queen asked rubbing her head..." i think i've got a headache....guards...take him away and don't let him get near on prince danny and princess lendi.." she ordered..the guards took him away but a woman cried...saying don't throw his son away...
"who is that now?" the queen complained...
"let me see..." the king stood up and the queen tagged along...the king saw the woman crying over harry...
"Gabbie?" the king asked in amusement..the woman stared at him and
"shane?" the woman asked..
"how dare you call the king by his name!" the queen yelled..
"stop!" the king ordered...then silence came..."this is your son?" the king asked looking at harry
"yes..." she answered quietly...."as a matter of fact...our son" she said drying her tears up
"what is this? an evil scheme?" the queen guessed..."take them awa--!"
"it could be possible my queen..." the king answered afraidly...
"what?" the queen took a glance at the king...
"she was my girlfriend before we got married..before our parents let us get married.." he corrected.."and.." he paused
"and what?" the queen asked afraid of what the outcome would be
"something happened between us the day before we say our goodbyes to each other.." the king explained....
"how could this be?" the queen reacted...
"no..it's a humiliation to the royals so..let's just go harry..." she helped his son get up and walk..
"no..." the king stopped them..and the queen glared at him
"i have a responsibility..so let harry stay.." the king said
"have you forgotten on what he did to our princess?" the queen reminded him
"i haven't but he's danny's half brother..." he explained....
"but..danny would be angry to know that his brother is a what? a molester of his own sister-in-law?" the queen said in outrage..
"let's keep the distance between the rooms..." the king said facing the queen..."please..."
"do you think this is easy for me?" the queen asked teary eyed...
"just for harry...and i'll just let gabbie stay in a hotel..a guarded hotel..."he explained
"as you wish...but will you handle danny...i think i'm goin' to be sick..." she said rubbing her head..
"bring the queen to our room.." he ordered..
"thank you...my king.." harry finally spoke.."and mother...i'll be ok...i shouldn't stay here..."
"no..you should..you are a part of the royals now..." the king insisted..."guards lead them to the guest room together with miss gabbie here...but she can only visit her son...she can't stay.."then they walked away...


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"hey Danny..." i whispered...
"what?" putting the book down and faced me..
"can i come in?" i asked him pushing the door of his room
"you're already in.." he sighed..
"anyway..." i sat beside him on the bed.."i heard something's goin' on in the palace.."
"are you feeling well?" he asked...
"yeah sure..just don't talk about it anymore..." i ignored him..."so do you know what's it about?"
"i don't know..." he said quickly "where'd you heard it anyway?"
"from the gossiping maids..." he laughed on what i said..."what?"
"so...were you a gossiping princess?" he asked grabbing me...
"well not really..i just passed by..." i said climbing on his bed and leaning on his shoulder...i sighed when..
"prince...princess..." the king cleared his throat...
"oh..." we both said in unison..
"what brings you here your majesty?" danny said politely standing...
"well..i have a news...and take it lightly..." he said sweating
"what's wrong?" i interrupted
"well..harry's gonna stay here..." he said and we both went quiet....
"this is a joke right?" i broke the silence
"why would i be joking about that?" he asked
"well...he was the one trying to molest me..." i told him with a mad voice..."i'm sorry.." i added quickly
"i understand but.."
"but dad!" danny complained
"he's your half brother..." he said silently
"my what?" danny asked again..
"you brother..half brother.." he said
"how could that be?" i asked trying to be calm then the king told us everything...
"ok..lendi and i agree to this living arrangement but promise me he won't touch lendi and i'm not saying i'll accept him as my brother..." he warned
"ok..i promise..."


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"this is so good harry.." gabbie grinned as she played the piano in harry's room...
"what's so good about that...you have to leave me..."
"that's the point..i know i can't live here because i'm an ex woman of your-so-called father..our plan worked..." she said giving harry an evil grin...
"he's not my father" harry protested
"i know..i was just using that incident on what happened bet. us..." she explained sighing..."now the whole palace can't stay put..."
"why are you doing this mom?" harry asked..
"i'll make that bastard king regret on why he didn't fight for his love on me instead he chose that queen..." she answered ruining the melody of the piano..
"but mom..i can't do that..."
"quiet this instance..." she scolded him..." just do as i say..." then harry nodded...can't do anything but to follow his mother's commands...

To be continued..
leave comments..i'll update as soon as i can cause i can't update tomorrow...there'll be a blackout on our place so maybe if i have the free time to update this week...i'll update..bear with me.... No
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Post  jaschier Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:00 pm

oh no!!! harry might become the king...!!! Razz

yeah update us...
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Post  nikka! Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:25 pm

PuDd_T wrote:hahaha!! aww! Harry's bad! Sad
I cannot believe it!!!
why'd he do that? poor him, he didn't want to do it though, right?
cuz he was tearing up before he did it and he said sorry..
but it was for money! so BAAAD HARRY! (just this time though) lol

the update was awesome! hahaha!

update soon!! Approve!

i think his mom or someone made him do it.. so, then he's not really bad. kinda.
but what he did was bad... yup. really evil Twisted Evil

yeah, the update was aswome! now, im off to read the new one... Very Happy
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Post  nikka! Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:38 pm

harry, no! don't follow your mother's commands! she's evil... Twisted Evil
hahaha... kidding.

wow! great update!
i love it... another twist. i never expected that harry would be danny's brother.. even though he's really not.

genius. Not worthy
aww... don't worry about the blackout. we'll wait patiently.
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Post  anika Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:52 pm

OMD!! I'm like 'How could you follow your mother's orders Harry?'.
Harry's a royal? Whoa!! The plot really thickens! haha.
Danny, defend Lendi! Razz
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sat Jan 31, 2009 5:02 pm

jaschier wrote:oh no!!! harry might become the king...!!! Razz

yeah update us...

this time hindi ka talaga na singitan...lol...tnx for reading... Razz
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sat Jan 31, 2009 5:04 pm

nikka! wrote:harry, no! don't follow your mother's commands! she's evil... Twisted Evil
hahaha... kidding.

wow! great update!
i love it... another twist. i never expected that harry would be danny's brother.. even though he's really not.

genius. Not worthy
aww... don't worry about the blackout. we'll wait patiently.

aww..thanks..lol...i'll update as soon as i can though...
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sat Jan 31, 2009 5:06 pm

anika wrote:OMD!! I'm like 'How could you follow your mother's orders Harry?'.
Harry's a royal? Whoa!! The plot really thickens! haha.
Danny, defend Lendi! Razz

well..i think harry's blinded by money or sumthin..lol...he just wants to follow his mommy...lol...mama's boy i guess
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Post  kaisthelimit Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:09 pm

OH MY GOD!!!! Shocked
Danny and Harry are half brothers?! Shocked Shocked
But this is more shocking. They are not real half brothers? Shocked Shocked Shocked
Harry's nan is so evil. Pure EVIL Twisted Evil
I love it!
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:31 pm

KAI wrote:OH MY GOD!!!! Shocked
Danny and Harry are half brothers?! Shocked Shocked
But this is more shocking. They are not real half brothers? Shocked Shocked Shocked
Harry's nan is so evil. Pure EVIL Twisted Evil
I love it!

LOL...harry's fooling everyone...evil mom..tnx for reading!! Razz
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Post  anika Sat Jan 31, 2009 8:45 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
anika wrote:OMD!! I'm like 'How could you follow your mother's orders Harry?'.
Harry's a royal? Whoa!! The plot really thickens! haha.
Danny, defend Lendi! Razz

well..i think harry's blinded by money or sumthin..lol...he just wants to follow his mommy...lol...mama's boy i guess

Evil mom!!! How dare she make sweet Harry do that?? Sad
hah. Anyways, I'm excited for the next chapters. Razz
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sun Feb 01, 2009 7:27 pm

so...we make harry stay...but i don't know if i'll be ok while he's here but the king made a public declaration that they should make an acknowledgement about harry's existence...and Danny felt bad..he was afraid that harry might took the throne...because Harry's older than him and i should be harry's wife right now..but i'm glad i was married to Danny..wouldn't want to be a queen of a bad king...anyways...we didn't attend the ceremony but we watched harry on TV...the king understand that danny and i still felt horrible for what he did to me so he didn't pushed us to attend...
i was leaning on danny's shoulder as we watched danny waved at people and stuff..
"would you look at that guy..." i said in disgust but Danny sit still and stared at Harry..
"hey..are you alright?" i asked him snapping my fingers in front of him..
"is he really my brother?" he asked me..
"don't know..you don't look alike..." i told him turning my face to the TV..."i really didn't expect he'll come to our lives..."
"whatever..." he ignored me and glared at him back..."you better not talk to him Lendi..."
"yes sir.." i told him attentively.."why would i talk to a guy like that..." then the ceremony ended...Danny and I moved to the pond to set our minds off of our lives for a while..we both sat down in the edge of the pond...i splashed water on Danny...and he fight back..
"we're getting wet!" i complained...
"you started it.." he chuckled then we both lie on the grass...and sighed
"how come life turned to be so complicated?" i asked him...
"don't know..." he sighed again....until we both fell asleep...

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"good job harry...now people around recognizes you as the king's eldest son..." she grinned...
"yeah sure...i just wanted you to be happy mom..." he answered rolling his eyes
"i know son..you still didn't make me happy..."she said as a matter of factly
"what do you want now?" he asked
"good question.." she walked around harry and whispered into his ear..."kill danny and make sure you will be king" harry's eyes widened as he heard those words....
"what?" he asked in outrage...
"please do..."his mom said..." and get rid of that Lendi girl in a good way..." she added...

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as i was sitting on the bench near the pond...i smelled the fresh air....i heard footsteps from behind me...i turned around..
"danny?" i told him but i was disappointed when i saw him.."what do you want?"
"i just wanna say sorry..and i didn't mean it.." he apologized...
"stay away from me okay..isn't it enough that you live in this house too...?" i asked him standing
"but isn't it odd if i live in a house that people around doesn't like me?" he asked walking towards me...
"well..it was your fault..." i told him walking one step backward
"i said i was sorry..i was just out of my mind before.." he explained
"really?" i told him giving the suspicious look..
"yes...i was bothered by the fact that i was danny's half brother..." he lied...
"then this time i'll give you a chance..." i told him crossing my arms...
"thank you lendi..you won't regret it..." then he hugged me..
"stay away from her..." danny untangled his hands from my waist
"danny..it's ok..." i told him
"what?" he asked
"he said sorry and i forgave him..." i explained
"is that enough..what if he will do it again?" he asked me...
"well..i have you..." i told him with a sweet smile...
"you better stay out from her!" he warned then walked away with me arm in arm...
"anyways..what did the king told you?" i asked him trying to avoid the subject
"he wants to celebrate our birthdays together in an island.." i forgot to tell you that we have the same birthdate..
"oh..why?" i asked him..
"well...it's time for us to be adults anyway..it's our 20th birthday.." he said smiling..and i didn't get why he's glowing so much...i wonder what did the king told him....

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Post  anika Sun Feb 01, 2009 7:33 pm

Harry how could you!!!! I haate the mom! hahaha. Razz
Nice update. I', loving it. It's so cute when they splash water at each other. Simply adorable! cheers
Ooh. What's gonna happen on the birthday?? Dance Dance Dance


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Post  ButterflyBibish Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:01 pm

anika wrote:Harry could you!!!! I haate the mom! hahaha. Razz
Nice update. I', loving it. It's so cute when they splash water at each other. Simply adorable! cheers
Ooh. What's gonna happen on the birthday?? Dance Dance Dance

lol..you'll find out soon...i'll update tomorrow...tnx for reading... Razz
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Post  nikka! Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:53 pm

WOAH. harry's mom is sooo severe. kill danny? Shocked
she must be bordering CRAZYness already.. hahaha. Razz
but that's good.. every story needs a character like that.. to add more fun. Very Happy Very Happy

oooh. i'm curious about the birthday.. bounce
nice add! Rock On!
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sun Feb 01, 2009 9:44 pm

nikka! wrote:WOAH. harry's mom is sooo severe. kill danny? Shocked
she must be bordering CRAZYness already.. hahaha. Razz
but that's good.. every story needs a character like that.. to add more fun. Very Happy Very Happy

oooh. i'm curious about the birthday.. bounce
nice add! Rock On!

yeah..haha...i'll update tomorrow...if you're curious about the birthday..be sure to read it...^_^..tnx...i was thinking if i was too mean about the mom thing but it was fun...LOL...
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