Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
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Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
Awww. Very sorry to disappoint. Actually just got home and still feeling very ill.
I'll post the last two chaps tomorrow in one go to make up for not posting tonight.
Sorry Cyra. I really am.
I'll post the last two chaps tomorrow in one go to make up for not posting tonight.
Sorry Cyra. I really am.
Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
carmzy_sweetness wrote: Wow. So I have two sure readers na??? That's awesome!!!
I have two other fics on the making at the moment. Yes...I will post one after I'm done with this one for you two.
I'm sorry I can't update now though. I have to go do that stupid back to school shopping thing. I'll try putting up the update tonight though.
Thanks Cyra and Meah!!!
YEAH!! You have 2 VERY SURE READERS NA!!
It's okay. We'll be quite busy cos of...*sigh* school.
You're still ill?
Aww... hope you get better real soon.
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meah XD wrote:YEAH!! You have 2 VERY SURE READERS NA!!
It's okay. We'll be quite busy cos of...*sigh* school.
You're still ill?
Aww... hope you get better real soon.
Can't thank you enough.
I'll be pretty busy with school as well. I'm not allowed to use the computer on school days so *sigh*.
I'll post tomorrow. I promise.
Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
Awww. Very sorry to disappoint. Actually just got home and still feeling very ill.
I'll post the last two chaps tomorrow in one go to make up for not posting tonight.
Sorry Cyra. I really am.
its okay,, really... dont force urself if ur not feeling well..
get well soon!!
mcflyJBdarch- Number of posts : 673
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mcflyJBdarch wrote:its okay,, really... dont force urself if ur not feeling well..
get well soon!!
I'm not forcing myself...I want to coz yer comments and replies make me happy.
I really can't do it now though. I only have less than 5 minutes to get off this computer.
Night2 you too!!!
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haha! same here.. gotta goo real soon.. good night!!! get well.
mcflyJBdarch- Number of posts : 673
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Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
Well, obviously I'm up early. I really really want to finish the last updates.
So anyways...here's chap 20.
CHAPTER 20: SO CLOSE WAS WAITING
I hurried back to where the cab had dropped us off. Thankfully, Alex was speechless and did not follow me and stop me.
I don't think there's a better reason to explain what I'm feeling or doing right now, but I really really have to get to Danny and tell him I love him and that it's always going to be him.
I was panting halfway through, but I continued to hurry.
Once in the cab, I pulled out my phone and dialled Tom's number.
"Pick up pick up pick up..." I muttered.
"Tom!!!"
"Woah! Yeah? What?!" Tom answered; startled.
"Where are you going to have a gig tonight and tomorrow?" I asked in between pants.
"Uhhhh...both in Tonbridge. Why?"
"I'll explain some other time. I have to go."
"Wait! Why are you panting?"
"Early morning jogging. Gotta stay in shape! Bye Tom!" I ended the call just as th cab stopped in front of the hotel.
I paid the man the cab fee and made my way back to our suite. Luckily, my sister was in and I had someone to talk my head through.
"Klara! Help me! I'm going crazy!" I sat on my bed and faced my sister.
"Okay. Why?" She leand on the table in front of me.
"I feel bad about hanging out with Alex and I want to go home and go to Danny. Like you said! I might've broken up with him, but he'll always take care of me. Suddenly, I think I want to return the favor!"
"That's good, actually. So what's wrong?"
"Wow. So you're not stopping me?" I asked wide-eyed.
"No. Who am I to stop you? And I've been waiting for you to do this." She said; honestly.
"Thank you, little sister."
"Go!" Klara laughed. "Where are you going anyway?" She pulled me to our dresser.
"Tonbridge. I called Tom. He said they're playing there for two days."
"That's good..."
Klara helped me pack up some clothes and called the airline to reschedule my trip later on that day.
She was awesome and a really great help. Of course, she will have to help me on one more thing, explaining to mum. She did promise that she will though.
With everything settled, Klara went with me to the airport. My flight was about an hour or so and she helped me kill the time.
Who ever said you needed a lot of time to fly halfway across the globe is wrong.
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The flight attendant shook my arm softly to wake me up. I could see the cold, dark night of my beautiful country. Although it felt like I hadn't slept for three days, I was really excited.
After retrieving my one bag, I got on a taxi to a tube station where I would take a tube to Tonbridge. I'm almost there.
After the tube, I took another taxi to the biggest arena of Tonbridge. It was where the lads would play. I got off the cab and went around to the back of the venue.
"Tom. Come and get me please. I'm over at the back." I said into my phone.
"What? Are you kidding me? You're over at Australia."
"Am not. Just got back. Please come and get me. I'm knackered. Don't tell anyone though!"
Tom got out the back and let me in. He was absolutely surprised and was happy. He led me back to the dressing room where the lads prepared for the night.
"Danny!" I called as a man medium height and curly haired stood in front of me.
To be continued...
So anyways...here's chap 20.
CHAPTER 20: SO CLOSE WAS WAITING
I hurried back to where the cab had dropped us off. Thankfully, Alex was speechless and did not follow me and stop me.
I don't think there's a better reason to explain what I'm feeling or doing right now, but I really really have to get to Danny and tell him I love him and that it's always going to be him.
I was panting halfway through, but I continued to hurry.
Once in the cab, I pulled out my phone and dialled Tom's number.
"Pick up pick up pick up..." I muttered.
"Tom!!!"
"Woah! Yeah? What?!" Tom answered; startled.
"Where are you going to have a gig tonight and tomorrow?" I asked in between pants.
"Uhhhh...both in Tonbridge. Why?"
"I'll explain some other time. I have to go."
"Wait! Why are you panting?"
"Early morning jogging. Gotta stay in shape! Bye Tom!" I ended the call just as th cab stopped in front of the hotel.
I paid the man the cab fee and made my way back to our suite. Luckily, my sister was in and I had someone to talk my head through.
"Klara! Help me! I'm going crazy!" I sat on my bed and faced my sister.
"Okay. Why?" She leand on the table in front of me.
"I feel bad about hanging out with Alex and I want to go home and go to Danny. Like you said! I might've broken up with him, but he'll always take care of me. Suddenly, I think I want to return the favor!"
"That's good, actually. So what's wrong?"
"Wow. So you're not stopping me?" I asked wide-eyed.
"No. Who am I to stop you? And I've been waiting for you to do this." She said; honestly.
"Thank you, little sister."
"Go!" Klara laughed. "Where are you going anyway?" She pulled me to our dresser.
"Tonbridge. I called Tom. He said they're playing there for two days."
"That's good..."
Klara helped me pack up some clothes and called the airline to reschedule my trip later on that day.
She was awesome and a really great help. Of course, she will have to help me on one more thing, explaining to mum. She did promise that she will though.
With everything settled, Klara went with me to the airport. My flight was about an hour or so and she helped me kill the time.
Who ever said you needed a lot of time to fly halfway across the globe is wrong.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The flight attendant shook my arm softly to wake me up. I could see the cold, dark night of my beautiful country. Although it felt like I hadn't slept for three days, I was really excited.
After retrieving my one bag, I got on a taxi to a tube station where I would take a tube to Tonbridge. I'm almost there.
After the tube, I took another taxi to the biggest arena of Tonbridge. It was where the lads would play. I got off the cab and went around to the back of the venue.
"Tom. Come and get me please. I'm over at the back." I said into my phone.
"What? Are you kidding me? You're over at Australia."
"Am not. Just got back. Please come and get me. I'm knackered. Don't tell anyone though!"
Tom got out the back and let me in. He was absolutely surprised and was happy. He led me back to the dressing room where the lads prepared for the night.
"Danny!" I called as a man medium height and curly haired stood in front of me.
To be continued...
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CHAPTER 21: BELIEVING THIS WAS NOT PRETEND
I sat at on the small rug I laid near my father's gravestone. It was a nice sunny day and it was today that I decided to visit him.
"I came back for him and, like he promised, he was waiting for me.
Although no explanations were needed, I explained everything to Danny. I explained why I was so lost, how I met Alex, why I hung out with Alex, how Alex halped me realize that he was th right one for me.
I'll never forget the look on his face that moment he saw me. It was a mixture of surprise, shock and affection.
It's been four years since that night. We've been married for three years now.
Speaking of marriage! I wish you could've been there at my wedding, daddy. It would have been much more special if you could've been there for the ceremonial handing over of the bride."
"Mommy!!!" A brown haired toddler ran into my arms.
She was followed by that medium height, curly haired man. I kissed the little girl and smiled up to the man who stood over us.
"Sorry. She wouldn't believe me when I told her you were talking to your own daddy." Danny apologized with a sweet smile.
"Silly man!" I said playfully with a laugh. "Now, honey? Mommy wants you to go and play with daddy for a few more minutes while I finish up here, okay?" I talked to the little girl. She nodded, her chubby head bobbing slowly. I smiled to myself as she took her father's hand and walked away happily.
"So there they are now, dad. My family. Danny and Emily. I couldn't be more thankful.
I also wish you could've seen your first grandchild. She's an angel. She's two and half at the moment.
As you just heard, she's getting a bit restless so I better take her away from here before she starts crying and disturbing everyone's eternal sleep."
I stood up and straightened the creases on my clothes.
"I love you dad. Always have and always will. You'll be living in here." I patted my chest.
I looked at the gravestone one more time and finally turned and walked over to where my husband and daughter were playing.
I sat at on the small rug I laid near my father's gravestone. It was a nice sunny day and it was today that I decided to visit him.
"I came back for him and, like he promised, he was waiting for me.
Although no explanations were needed, I explained everything to Danny. I explained why I was so lost, how I met Alex, why I hung out with Alex, how Alex halped me realize that he was th right one for me.
I'll never forget the look on his face that moment he saw me. It was a mixture of surprise, shock and affection.
It's been four years since that night. We've been married for three years now.
Speaking of marriage! I wish you could've been there at my wedding, daddy. It would have been much more special if you could've been there for the ceremonial handing over of the bride."
"Mommy!!!" A brown haired toddler ran into my arms.
She was followed by that medium height, curly haired man. I kissed the little girl and smiled up to the man who stood over us.
"Sorry. She wouldn't believe me when I told her you were talking to your own daddy." Danny apologized with a sweet smile.
"Silly man!" I said playfully with a laugh. "Now, honey? Mommy wants you to go and play with daddy for a few more minutes while I finish up here, okay?" I talked to the little girl. She nodded, her chubby head bobbing slowly. I smiled to myself as she took her father's hand and walked away happily.
"So there they are now, dad. My family. Danny and Emily. I couldn't be more thankful.
I also wish you could've seen your first grandchild. She's an angel. She's two and half at the moment.
As you just heard, she's getting a bit restless so I better take her away from here before she starts crying and disturbing everyone's eternal sleep."
I stood up and straightened the creases on my clothes.
"I love you dad. Always have and always will. You'll be living in here." I patted my chest.
I looked at the gravestone one more time and finally turned and walked over to where my husband and daughter were playing.
I swear, like the shadow that's by your side, I'll be there.
For better or worse, 'till death do us part.
I'll love you with every beat of my heart.
I swear.
THE END
For better or worse, 'till death do us part.
I'll love you with every beat of my heart.
I swear.
THE END
Last edited by carmzy_sweetness on Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:11 am; edited 1 time in total
Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
There you have it. The last two. Sorry the last chap was more of a prologue.
Thank you for reaching this far!!! I applaud you!
Thank you for reaching this far!!! I applaud you!
Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
yiipee!! omfg!!! nice two chaps!!! whoootwhhoot!!
i didn't quite understand the last chap.. when the daddy thing happened na..
pero,, still nice ending!!
hahahah!! CONGRATZZ!! great great great fic!! this is the only fic i actually read.. errr.. and also who's david...
i applaud u for waking up reeeeaaaally early just to put up both chaps!!
i didn't quite understand the last chap.. when the daddy thing happened na..
pero,, still nice ending!!
hahahah!! CONGRATZZ!! great great great fic!! this is the only fic i actually read.. errr.. and also who's david...
i applaud u for waking up reeeeaaaally early just to put up both chaps!!
mcflyJBdarch- Number of posts : 673
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mcflyJBdarch wrote:yiipee!! omfg!!! nice two chaps!!! whoootwhhoot!!
i didn't quite understand the last chap.. when the daddy thing happened na..
pero,, still nice ending!!
hahahah!! CONGRATZZ!! great great great fic!! this is the only fic i actually read.. errr.. and also who's david...
i applaud u for waking up reeeeaaaally early just to put up both chaps!!
lols. She's talking to her dad on the last chap. Kind of the end is she's giving her dad views of what happened in her life after he died. Something like that.
Thanks to you...I'll clarify that end part. Let's just say half asleep pa ako nun. )
There's your happy ending btw.
Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
hahaha!! really nice ending!! haha!
cant wait for u to put up a new fic..
thnx for clarifying it..
cant wait for u to put up a new fic..
thnx for clarifying it..
mcflyJBdarch- Number of posts : 673
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^lols. I have a bit of a problemo. My two other fics are danny ones since I was so addicted to him last year when I started making them.
I'll try thinking up a nice Dougie fic para iba naman and since you're one of my 'faithful' readers and you love Dougie.
I'll post up agad if I think of one.
I'll try thinking up a nice Dougie fic para iba naman and since you're one of my 'faithful' readers and you love Dougie.
I'll post up agad if I think of one.
Re: Some Things Never Change (FINISHED!!!)
^ haha! yippeee!!
cant wait for a new fic!! =] and now,, ur officially one of my idols!! weeee!!
cant wait for a new fic!! =] and now,, ur officially one of my idols!! weeee!!
mcflyJBdarch- Number of posts : 673
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Ahhhh!! I love it!!
Too bad her dad's not there...
I love the fic!!
Post another one!!
Too bad her dad's not there...
I love the fic!!
Post another one!!
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meah XD wrote:Ahhhh!! I love it!!
Too bad her dad's not there...
I love the fic!!
Post another one!!
Thanks Mehh!
I'm getting right into brainstorming already. I'll post one pretty soon.
Btw...who's your fave lad???
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omg
i missed so much
i was at my lola for 6 days and there's n internet in there
no forum
anyhoo
love it<3
post another fic
please?
i missed so much
i was at my lola for 6 days and there's n internet in there
no forum
anyhoo
love it<3
post another fic
please?
kaisthelimit- Number of posts : 1884
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KAI wrote:omg
i missed so much
i was at my lola for 6 days and there's n internet in there
no forum
anyhoo
love it<3
post another fic
please?
No wonder I've been missing out on your comments! lols.
As I've said before...you still make me happy if you continue to read and reply no matter how late.
I STILL LOVE YOU!!!
I will post a new one soon enough. Good news!!! It's a Dougie fic!!! I'm brainstorming now. I think I have a few ideas and hopefully I'll be able to post it up before school starts. XD
Thanks a bunch again Kai!!!
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carmzy_sweetness wrote:
No wonder I've been missing out on your comments! lols.
As I've said before...you still make me happy if you continue to read and reply no matter how late.
I STILL LOVE YOU!!!
I will post a new one soon enough. Good news!!! It's a Dougie fic!!! I'm brainstorming now. I think I have a few ideas and hopefully I'll be able to post it up before school starts. XD
Thanks a bunch again Kai!!!
yay!!!
hooray for dougie fic!
and btw
I LOVE YOU MORRE!
for making a dougie fic
kaisthelimit- Number of posts : 1884
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KAI wrote:
yay!!!
hooray for dougie fic!
and btw
I LOVE YOU MORRE!
for making a dougie fic
lols. Nah! I love you more coz you read my stuff.
I actually need help with for the graphic I'm attempting to make for the Dougie fic.
I've been asking around for this so I might as well ask help from you guys here.
Do you have that Dougie pic where he's wearing a crown??? It was from a Christams video of theirs. I desperately need it. Thanks in advance to anyone who has it. <3
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