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Post  ButterflyBibish Thu Dec 25, 2008 12:25 am

TITLE:dream or love?
AUTHOR: butterflybibish
CHARACTERS: Splendora Guille,Danny jones etc.

DISCLAIMER: I don't know Danny or the rest of McFLY.
SUMMARY:
hey guys..this is my first fic here and it's not one-shot...
i don't have any drafts in here..i just type things on what pops in my head...it's 11:53 and yet i'm still awake...waiting for christmas i guess...i'm bored so i'll just make a fic..a danny fic i guess...i don't really know what's it all about..anyways...i'll put up a sneak peek and if you like it i'll continue..if you don't i'll stop...less talking and more story telling... Razz

here it goes..

The day i took a step on that hallway was...ok i guess...(i was still a kid back then)...i never got the idea on how is this thing goin' to change my life throughout...

the name's Splendora Guille...19 yrs of age...they call me Lendi or Guille...currently studying at royal school but it doesn't mean everyone belongs to royal families...they're just rich...i started studying here from the age of 5 or 6 i guess..i nearly grow up here...i'm the next queen and everyone treats me a princess...well that's true but i don't really like being a princess...i have friends...the long haired girl is taylor..the girl that has squinty eyes is bella and the short haired girl is keisha....we grew up together...i don't talk to anybody else...

i'm focusing on my music...i play the guitar and i do the vocals...sometimes i ask myself why me?why do i have to be the princess?

i'm not the kind of princess in fairytales that have prince charmings and have happy endings...being a princess is having a big responsibility to your country and it's agony i tell you...everyday..you have to study the rules and regulations..it's too boring...until i met that certain guy...we're not close though and he's not that nice but he's the only person who treats me as an ordinary person...he's danny jones...we're in the same class...

i met him a couple months ago...he's an exchange student and has a cold attitude...

anyways...i realized the day i stepped in at this school...i feel that i have bigger responsibilities and i can't do anything i want...it's sucks...

i have to give up my dreams to be a singer but it's ok..i mean it runs through the family...people adored and respect us royals and i appreciate that and that's why i've come this far being a princess...the people makes me stronger knowing that they love us and trusting us...

i want to give them my best in this thing...i want to rule..and that's my future.....even if i change my mind it won't change the fact that i'm a princess....


hope you like it guys...i'll stop if you don't like it... -.-;

Lendi has to choose between love and dream of being a queen someday....


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Post  Kerstien Thu Dec 25, 2008 8:05 am

continue mo ha! XD
and you SHOULD figure out what this is all about! Very Happy
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Post  ButterflyBibish Thu Dec 25, 2008 10:40 am

i don't even know how to continue...lol!!!!but i'll do my best...LOL....i was just bored last night,,,and i'm not good in one-shots so i'm amaking this fic...ang aga mo nagonline ah!....Merry christmas...!!!! tongue
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Post  ButterflyBibish Thu Dec 25, 2008 9:00 pm

"princess...time to wake up now or you're goin' to be late..."the guards knock at the princess' door...
"princess? are you getting ready?"they opened the door and found nothin'..they started to worry and call help looking for the princess...saying..."the princess is missing"...

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"hey guys!" i waved to my friends..."good morning!"
"what were you doing Lendi?" Taylor gave me a furious look
"what did i do?" (did i mention i was super sneaky) i gave them the innocent look
"it's all over the school that you were missing since this morning!" Bella scolded me..."are you insane?"
"fine...sorry...i just wanted to use my bike for a while..."I gave them the pouty look "i don't wanna ride that car full with---"
"with what?" Keisha continued "full with guards?"
"you were this close to my answer..." i joked "i was goin' to say full of wheels...you know...it had 4 wheels and i want to use my 2 wheeled bike...and--"
"haha...funny..." Bella fake a smile
"anyways..." trying to change the topic "i've bought a new guitar and...i've written some songs..."
"really...???" Keisha giggled "so how was it?"
"it's terrific.." I grabbed a guitar and played it..i was a little clumsy with my actions while playing the guitar that i stepped at someone's shoes.."i'm so sorry...i didn't mean to---" by the time i looked up from the shoe i was trying to clean..i saw his face...
"on second thought...i'm so not..."
"what? oh!? i'm sorry my princess...do you want me to say sorry instead or i'll just clean my own shoe...oh right..it's my own shoe,i can clean it...it's not like i don't have my hands or anything..." Danny answered me..
"was that an insult?" I asked having second thoughts...
"what do you think?"
"i think that was an insult!" I answered back " just because i don't do things that much..i can do things on my own too you know......it's not that everyone in the palace do everything for me..." I defended myself
"ok then.."he left arrogantly
I stuck my tongue unto him until he was gone
"what's up with that?" Taylor ask out of awkwardness
"i don't know about you but he's actually cute and pretty annoying" Bella gave me the look
"oh no no no...i'm absolutely not having that kind of feeling towards him..." Lendi defended
"oh...what's that?" Keisha asked me with a curious look "what's that again? being defensive?"
"whatever.." when i was about to turn i saw them...
"princess..." the guards bowed before me "good thing that we found you..."
"what is it?" I ask them
"the elders want to see you..."
"now? can't i see them after my classes?" i complained
"we already managed your classes..you can leave now..."
"fine..." they got my things.."bye guys..i'll just call you and see you tomorrow...i'll have to get back to my loving family..." i faked a smile...
"have fun!.."Bella yelled
"i'll try!!!" i replied...once i reached at the car..they opened it for me to enter...

To be continued
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Post  anika Fri Dec 26, 2008 9:43 am

Oh my goosh! So cuuute! Loove it. hahaha. Danny's adorable!! hahaha.
CONTINUE!!
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Post  nicoleaika Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:00 am

Update!!!! WEEEE!!! Danny, bounce
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:15 pm

"do you have any idea what you just did?" my mom, i mean the queen scolded me...(we never use the words mom and dad here inside the palace..one of the things i hate to be in here...we can't have the normal family things...it's like we are all strangers in here)...
"i'm sorry...i just wanted to use my bike..." i protested trying my best to calm down
"use your bike?" she asked sarcastically..."you have a car...we gave you that for protection..."
"i won't do it again..."
"what if something happened to you? you're the crown princess of this country and you're the only heir!" the queen gave me a huge sigh...
"it's ok now...just don't do it again.."the king finally spoke..."you can go now..."
"yes your majesty..." i bowed before them and leave...

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"what were you thinking....riding your bike?" i scolded myself in my room...
"urrrgggghhh...they are so protective...i hate them...if i wasn't the heir..maybe i could do the things i want..."i stood up and opened my glass door to take a peek...then i tiptoed my way out..
"where are you goin' my princess?" a lady called me..as i crossed my fingers hoping it's not her...then i turned around..
"oh hi....miss mai!" i greeted...she's one of the teachers in the palace handling my subjects and everything...
"may i know where were you goin'?" she asked again
"oh nothin'...i'll be right back..." i run away from her and i could still hear her yelling..."don't run around in the palace!"...
"it makes me sick!" i thought....i reached to a place where i'm the only one who knows about this...it's the attic room...i really like staying in here and there's a huge window to look at the trees....so calming...

ring ring ring

"hello?" i picked up my phone...
"hey! it's taylor!" she greeted me and i was happy that she called
"what's up..?"
"i want to tell you that the queen asked the teacher to gave you some extra credits for your school..."
"what extra credits?" i asked curiously
"you have to do some activities here...like cleaning the classroom..."she said hesitately...
"WHAT???"i yelled..."i mean...huh? why?"i soften my voice to avoid them from hearing me all the way up here....
"but you're not the only one who's cleaning it...i heard the queen gave you some company.."
"oh ok..that would be great if i have a company..."i said in relief..
"uhmmm..."taylor said..
"taylor?are you hiding something from me..?" i asked her
"nothin'...it's just that..i know who's you're company but i don't think you'll be happy to know..."
"who is it?" i gave her the spill-it-out tone
"no one..." then she hang up the phone...
"how rude!" i put down my phone....wondering who would it be...

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morning came....then the guards opened the car's door for me...when i got out..i heard yelling...i don't really have any difference from celebs...the guards followed me...
"you can wait here.." i said arrogantly
"but the queen's order is to follow you...."the man in black suit told me
"you can guard at the gate.." i said
"but princess...they might be people around here to----"
"you can wait at the gate..."this time i added the pissed tone...
"yes princess.." then he bowed and left...

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"taylor!" i yelled at the classroom...
"gotte go guys...bye!" Taylor run off....bid goodbye to bella and keisha....
"hey Lendi...!" Bella waved at me
"hey...." i walk near to them...
"what's up with her?" Keisha asked...
"don't know...anyways...do you know who's my company in cleaning the classroom...??"
"oh....i forgot i have an appointment...bye..have to go...."Bella said
"me too...! bye Lendi....!" Keisha said pinching my cheek
"...guys...wait!!!!!!" they probably know....they are so not supportive....i crossed my arms while waiting for the teacher...
"princess..."someone called me out....and i faced her....
"yes..."i answered back..."please excuse me for letting you clean the classroom...
"oh it's ok...it's the queen's orders right...???"i asked her innocently
"yes...but you have a company..." she said calling someone from the outside of the room..."come in now..."
then i watched him entering the room from toe to head...he's actually wearing those white sneakers..... then i almost fainted when i saw his face...i'm not cleaning with him...

To be continued
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:39 pm

nicoleaika wrote:Update!!!! WEEEE!!! Danny, bounce

i've updated this fic...tnx for reading my fic...
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:40 pm

anika wrote:Oh my goosh! So cuuute! Loove it. hahaha. Danny's adorable!! hahaha.
CONTINUE!!

thank you so much..... Embarassed
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Post  nicoleaika Fri Dec 26, 2008 4:42 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:Update!!!! WEEEE!!! Danny, bounce

i've updated this fic...tnx for reading my fic...

I already read the add.. OMG, so excited who's that guy! (Danny? weeee!! bounce )
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 4:44 pm

nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:Update!!!! WEEEE!!! Danny, bounce

i've updated this fic...tnx for reading my fic...

I already read the add.. OMG, so excited who's that guy! (Danny? weeee!! bounce )

LOL...maybe i'll update tonight...BTW....how old are you?
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Post  nicoleaika Fri Dec 26, 2008 5:04 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:Update!!!! WEEEE!!! Danny, bounce

i've updated this fic...tnx for reading my fic...

I already read the add.. OMG, so excited who's that guy! (Danny? weeee!! bounce )

LOL...maybe i'll update tonight...BTW....how old are you?

me? err... 13..... pale
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 5:24 pm

nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:Update!!!! WEEEE!!! Danny, bounce

i've updated this fic...tnx for reading my fic...

I already read the add.. OMG, so excited who's that guy! (Danny? weeee!! bounce )

LOL...maybe i'll update tonight...BTW....how old are you?

me? err... 13..... pale

that's cool.....i'm 14 turning 15.... Approve!
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Post  nicoleaika Fri Dec 26, 2008 5:30 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:Update!!!! WEEEE!!! Danny, bounce

i've updated this fic...tnx for reading my fic...

I already read the add.. OMG, so excited who's that guy! (Danny? weeee!! bounce )

LOL...maybe i'll update tonight...BTW....how old are you?

me? err... 13..... pale

that's cool.....i'm 14 turning 15.... Approve!

err.... yeah i know..i'm still just a kid bounce

but here we can act like we're at the same age XD
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:39 pm

"what is he doing here??" i asked the teacher taking two or three steps back from my original place...
"oh...he is your company princess?"she answered formally...
"i think you got the wrong guy....!"
"why would someone like the queen got the wrong guy?" danny finally spoke giving me the innocent look
"i'm certain princess that he is the right guy....the guards were the ones brought him up to me...."she explained
"what???then i'm not cleaning..." i attempted to leave but...
"no please princess....don't leave...the queen might scold me for this..." she gave me the doggy pout look
"fine...but for the record....i'm not talking to him..." she gave me a smile then left us with rags and water...brooms and stuff for cleaning the classroom....i got out my iPOD and played the max volume so that i can avoid that arrogant guy....
" do ya do ya do ya love me?" i sang as i scrub the floor....while danny was mopping the other side of the room with water....i danced my way of cleaning...i was really captivated by this song do ya by mcfly...i really like it and why do i suddenly feel that i stepped at a wet place...
"what happened?" i asked as i pulled out my earphones..."did i so something wrong?" i looked at his furious face...
"oh no princess...you just kicked the pale while you were dancing a while ago and now it's dirty and to top that, it's wet...not really a wrong thing princess..."he answered calmly while giving me a fake smile
"uhmmm..."i gulped..."i'm sorry i didn't mean to---"
"you didn't mean to but you just did..." danny said frankly
"fine...let me help you..."
"did the princess just offered help?" danny ask
"whatever..."then we helped each other until we finished cleaning and we really are exhausted...
"now...time to go home.." danny stretched his arms...
"wait...!" i stopped him
"what is it now?" danny asked frustrated " i thought you weren't goin' to talk to me?"
"can we just calm down and put down on whatever arguments we have?" i told him pleading
"why?you can't keep up with me?" he said boastfully..
"no!..it's just that i'm tired fighting" i explained "i'm splendora guille" i hand out my hands for him to shake
"i'm danny...danny jones.." he shook my hands..
"now...that's great isn't it?" i gave him a huge smile...."you can let go of my hand now..."
"sorry princess..." he sighed...
"one more thing...just call me Lendi or whatever you wanna call me....just not princess..."
"ok prin---oh sorry...i mean lendi.." he smiled...aww...he's more cute when he smiles...ok...did i just say that?
"ok...gotta go...the palace awaits..so..bye..."
"ok bye...." he waved his hands....

To be continued....
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:39 pm

nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
nicoleaika wrote:Update!!!! WEEEE!!! Danny, bounce

i've updated this fic...tnx for reading my fic...

I already read the add.. OMG, so excited who's that guy! (Danny? weeee!! bounce )

LOL...maybe i'll update tonight...BTW....how old are you?

me? err... 13..... pale

that's cool.....i'm 14 turning 15.... Approve!

err.... yeah i know..i'm still just a kid bounce

but here we can act like we're at the same age XD

yeah!!!! i just posted the 3rd chap....
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Post  anika Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:46 pm

hahaha. Danny's tpp much!! Aw... They're friends now? How cuuute!!! Group hug Group hug
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:49 pm

anika wrote:hahaha. Danny's tpp much!! Aw... They're friends now? How cuuute!!! Group hug Group hug

LOL...tnx for reading...i'm goin' to post the 4th chap tomorrow....
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Post  anika Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:51 pm

ButterflyBibish wrote:
anika wrote:hahaha. Danny's tpp much!! Aw... They're friends now? How cuuute!!! Group hug Group hug

LOL...tnx for reading...i'm goin' to post the 4th chap tomorrow....

OOH! I cannot wait! hahaha. Joy! Joy!
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 6:54 pm

anika wrote:
ButterflyBibish wrote:
anika wrote:hahaha. Danny's tpp much!! Aw... They're friends now? How cuuute!!! Group hug Group hug

LOL...tnx for reading...i'm goin' to post the 4th chap tomorrow....

OOH! I cannot wait! hahaha. Joy! Joy!

i've never been so overwhelmed before...LOL...naturally i really think my fics are not that good...i didn't think that some people is really paying attention to my fics before... Joy!
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Post  Zehr Fri Dec 26, 2008 8:32 pm

Ahhhhhh! I love how Danny acts here. OMD. xDD
Can`t wait for the next! Keep it up. I love it. Smile
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 8:34 pm

Zehr wrote:Ahhhhhh! I love how Danny acts here. OMD. xDD
Can`t wait for the next! Keep it up. I love it. Smile

geez....thanks....LOL...tnx for reading... tongue ..i'll update tomorrow....
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Post  ButterflyBibish Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:48 pm

"so princess...did that activity made you realize that being the crown princess of a country isn't just about playing?" the queen ask hoping i would answer her a positive result
"yes, your majesty.."I gave her a slight smile
"now..that's good...you can leave and go back to miss mai's lessons.."
"your majesty...i have a question..."i told her
"what is it princess...?
"why did you chose danny?"
"hmmm?" she gave me the who's-dannny look
"i meant the one who accompanied me in cleaning..."i explained
"you'll know someday if it's time..."she said leaving a big question mark on my mind...

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"you know what taylor..." i started talking "my mom gave me the most mysterious answer.."
"what mysterious answer?"she asked
"you'll know someday if it's time..."i said mimicking my mom's action...
"she can't be that formal...?"bella and keisha laughed....
"really....!!"i insisted...
"anyways..what did you and danny do yesterday?"bella asked all giggly...
"nothin'..."i gave them a mysterious smile...
"oh my goodness!!!they kissed..."keisha yelled and all of the students stared at us...then i hit keisha
"ouch...that hurts!.."she complained touching her head...
"i would never get that far just for him!!..."i defended
"then what the heck happened???" taylor asked "will you just tell us before these 2 jump to conclusions!" she continued while pinching my cheek..
"awwww..."i rubbed my cheek "we became friends...that's all...."
"lendi..lendi..lendi..."bella walked around me and tapped my shoulder..
"what's your problem?" i asked her sarcastically...
"i pity you.."bella told me blinking her squinty eyes..."you're too slow for a guy..."
"bella...bella...bella..."i followed her and hit her on the head...
"what did you do that for?"
"i'm the princess and i have to watch my actions towards people...!"i reminded them...
"hey lendi!"danny greeted me with a warm smile
"hey danny...."i greeted back while the 3 at the back giggled

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"bye guys...have to go..."the guards nearly opened the door for me but a student asked me something about our activities in school and....
"bye lendi....see you around..."danny bid goodbye
"is he your friend?the student asked"you're friends with a weirdo?"
"no....he's not weird but totally not my friend..." i answered back....
"oh cool..."then the student left...and i didn't know that danny heard all of that
"i'm sorry danny..it's just that...---"i tried to explained but..
"thanks a lot...princess..."he showed me that look again from when we have our fights back then...i can't believe i just denied him as my friend...

to be continued...

please do give me comments....it encourages me to put the next chapters....
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Post  nicoleaika Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:08 pm

Ooh...

you'll know someday if it's time...

that one makes me more exciting!!! clap


put the next chapter now!! Joy!
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Post  ButterflyBibish Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:21 pm

nicoleaika wrote:Ooh...

you'll know someday if it's time...

that one makes me more exciting!!! clap


put the next chapter now!! Joy!

lol...i'll put up the next chapter...tnx for reading..and giving comments...it encourages to put the next one....
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