Prince Charming (*Dougie Fic* FINISHED!!!)
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Re: Prince Charming (*Dougie Fic* FINISHED!!!)
im back.. yey!!! "smuggled chaps" <--
i might be able to go online illegally too.. hahaha!!
cant wait for moreeeee!!!!!
i might be able to go online illegally too.. hahaha!!
cant wait for moreeeee!!!!!
mcflyJBdarch- Number of posts : 673
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Yeah. The smuggled ones are the only ones I could give you. lols. I write them during class hours when the teacher starts rambling about things I don't care about listening to. I cross my fingers at getting caught
I'll update later. I pwwwomise. And by later, I mean tonight or something. I don't feel like doing it now. I'm being lazy at the mo.
I'll update later. I pwwwomise. And by later, I mean tonight or something. I don't feel like doing it now. I'm being lazy at the mo.
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yey!! haha!! imma check it out later..
mcflyJBdarch- Number of posts : 673
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yay!
weekends!
and chapter 6!
hooray!
weekends!
and chapter 6!
hooray!
kaisthelimit- Number of posts : 1884
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OMG. Cute chapter XDD
And yes, it iiiis immensely short!
I like the way you write; very well-written, really.
More, more, more!
This is probably one of the first fics I actually read.
And yes, it iiiis immensely short!
I like the way you write; very well-written, really.
More, more, more!
This is probably one of the first fics I actually read.
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carmzy_sweetness wrote:Yeah. The smuggled ones are the only ones I could give you. lols. I write them during class hours when the teacher starts rambling about things I don't care about listening to.I cross my fingers at getting caught
Hahaha! Great job, great job
Keep that up, and we'll stay happy
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Jessica! wrote:Hahaha! Great job, great job
Keep that up, and we'll stay happy
Keeping you guys happy is what makes me keep going.
I don't see it as pressure at all (I'm serious)
I'll post later.
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hep hep hooray!
hep hep hooray!
hep hep hooray!
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^That reminds me of Wowowee <---- obviously dunno how to spell that
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hahaha
yea
we played it knina sa school(party)
lol
with pokwang and fafi
hahaha
yea
we played it knina sa school(party)
lol
with pokwang and fafi
hahaha
kaisthelimit- Number of posts : 1884
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I was in a really chronic corny mood today. Love was the topic for most conversations.
Anyways...here's the promised chap. I hope you like it. And this time....it's long.
CHAPTER 6
"Do I look okay?" I put in the stud of my right earring and did a slow turn in my brother's room.
"Where are you going?" He flopped down on his bed; eyeing me curiously.
"Dinner. Do I look okay?"
"With who?" He ignored me.
"You're not answering my question." I said in an annoyed tone.
"With who?" He repeated in a serious tone.
"Dougie." I shrugged.
"I told you he was asking you out. Did you tell him to keep cautious?"
"It's not a date." I crossed my arms across my chest and walked out of his room. "Gosh."
"What's with the pearl pendant neckace then? If I remember correctly, you wear that for good luck." Marco followed me out.
"It's so I don't mess up-"
"So you can impress him!" he cut in.
"Fu*ck off!" I slammed the door in his face.
I walked to my miror in a huff. I surveyed my reflection thoroughly.
"Aribella." A knock came to my door followed by my brother's voice. "I'm sorry. You look great by the way."
I sighed in defeat; calmed by his last two sentences. I walked over to my door and opened it to my brother. He pulled me into a hug.
"I'm sorry I'm being like this. I just...it's programmed in my head that I'm supposed to keep guys away from you. I don't want to see you get hurt." He said with a small smile.
"Yeah. I get that whole brother thing. You overdo it sometimes!" I complained with a laugh. "Don't worry though, I can take care of myself." I assured him.
"But-"
"Marco." I said in a warning tone. "Chill. When I do need help, you'll be the first one I'd call. Okay?"
----
"Aribella. Your date is here." My mum called from the bottom of the stairs. I looked my brother in the eye; my cheeks coloring. He flashed me a small smile and offered his hand. Together, we descended the stairs and found my mum and dad in the living room with Dougie.
"Mum, dad and Marco...this is-" I said.
"Dougie." Dad said in a serious tone.
"-and he's not my date." I added quickly. "He's my very first mate in school. Remember?" I looked at my mum.
"Oh. This is him? Nice to meet you then." My mother smiled.
"Likewise." Dougie beamed back. "So...uhh. Shall we go?"
"Yeah. Just let me get my coat and bag."
----
"Sorry about my weird family." I said as we walked to Dougie's car.
"It's okay." He opened the passenger's door for me and walked over to the driver's side.
Impressive. I didn't know guys like that still exist.
"So where are we going?" I said as he pulled away from our block.
"No idea, really. I'm going unplanned. You'll get a first-hand glimpse of my idea of a fun night." He declared.
"I'm ready." I sat back with a smile.
First stop: Arcade.
Dougie pulled over outside the local arcade.
"Gosh! I haven't been near an arcade for some time now!" I exclaimed as I eyed the arcade from inside the car. I looked over at Dougie who smiled brightly.
"Come on." He got out of the car and opened my door for me. He then locked the car and walked with me to the arcade. He grabbed some tokkens and we started searching for a nice game.
"Speed Racing?" He pointed to the racing game on one corner.
"Are you sure? If I remember right, I'm good with that." I said with a laugh.
With much taunting, I lost. Dougie was a natural at Speed Racer. What made it fun was the fact that he didn't go easy on me. I personally find it quite annoying when a guy does that; even my brother.
"So what's next?" I said as I walked beside him.
"Hmmm. You choose." He said with a smile.
"Basketball!!!" I pumped my fist in the air and led him to the hoops.
"This time, you're going down!" I said.
The game ended well. It was a definate match-up ending with an 87 to 90 score. The winner.......it was me!
Dougie couldn't believe his eyes when I started scoring. I was on a roll!
"How'd you manage to score higher?" He said as we walked to another corner.
"Marco used to make me play basketball at home. I've grown to love the game." I said with a proud laugh.
"I'm never good with sports." Dougie confessed.
"Really? What do you do in your spare time then?"
"Guitar. Bass. Sing. Whatever comes to mind." He shrugged.
"Interesting. You should give me a proper show next time."
We played a few more games before deciding we were hungry enough to go and eat. We left his car outside the arcade and walked to the pizza parlor about two blocks from there. We walked in silence under the moon-lit sky. Dougie offered to bring my purse, which was in his right hand, and his left arm was linked with mine. We remained silent the whole walk.
When we got there, we grabbed a nice table on one end of the parlor. We ordered a pepperoni and some drinks to go with it. Silence was still dawning over us after we ordered.
"I noticed you don't talk that much." I said.
"You'll be surprised that I don't actually talk at all. Well, except when I'm with you. I like talking to you." He said.
"Thanks, I think." He smiled. "Why is that? If I may ask."
He pondered on my question. "I don't know really. You're talkative. That's a fact. It just seems to rub off on me."
"Should I take that as a complement?" I said with a chuckle.
"Yes you should."
Our pizza arrived fifteen minutes after. Most of the wait was filled with silence and idle talk. It wasn't an awkward one. It wasn't near weird even. It just seemed like we were both caught up with our own thoughts and neither of us were bothered by the silence.
It was one night that I will truly remember. It was a night with my dearest mate.
To be continued...
Anyways...here's the promised chap. I hope you like it. And this time....it's long.
CHAPTER 6
"Do I look okay?" I put in the stud of my right earring and did a slow turn in my brother's room.
"Where are you going?" He flopped down on his bed; eyeing me curiously.
"Dinner. Do I look okay?"
"With who?" He ignored me.
"You're not answering my question." I said in an annoyed tone.
"With who?" He repeated in a serious tone.
"Dougie." I shrugged.
"I told you he was asking you out. Did you tell him to keep cautious?"
"It's not a date." I crossed my arms across my chest and walked out of his room. "Gosh."
"What's with the pearl pendant neckace then? If I remember correctly, you wear that for good luck." Marco followed me out.
"It's so I don't mess up-"
"So you can impress him!" he cut in.
"Fu*ck off!" I slammed the door in his face.
I walked to my miror in a huff. I surveyed my reflection thoroughly.
"Aribella." A knock came to my door followed by my brother's voice. "I'm sorry. You look great by the way."
I sighed in defeat; calmed by his last two sentences. I walked over to my door and opened it to my brother. He pulled me into a hug.
"I'm sorry I'm being like this. I just...it's programmed in my head that I'm supposed to keep guys away from you. I don't want to see you get hurt." He said with a small smile.
"Yeah. I get that whole brother thing. You overdo it sometimes!" I complained with a laugh. "Don't worry though, I can take care of myself." I assured him.
"But-"
"Marco." I said in a warning tone. "Chill. When I do need help, you'll be the first one I'd call. Okay?"
----
"Aribella. Your date is here." My mum called from the bottom of the stairs. I looked my brother in the eye; my cheeks coloring. He flashed me a small smile and offered his hand. Together, we descended the stairs and found my mum and dad in the living room with Dougie.
"Mum, dad and Marco...this is-" I said.
"Dougie." Dad said in a serious tone.
"-and he's not my date." I added quickly. "He's my very first mate in school. Remember?" I looked at my mum.
"Oh. This is him? Nice to meet you then." My mother smiled.
"Likewise." Dougie beamed back. "So...uhh. Shall we go?"
"Yeah. Just let me get my coat and bag."
----
"Sorry about my weird family." I said as we walked to Dougie's car.
"It's okay." He opened the passenger's door for me and walked over to the driver's side.
Impressive. I didn't know guys like that still exist.
"So where are we going?" I said as he pulled away from our block.
"No idea, really. I'm going unplanned. You'll get a first-hand glimpse of my idea of a fun night." He declared.
"I'm ready." I sat back with a smile.
First stop: Arcade.
Dougie pulled over outside the local arcade.
"Gosh! I haven't been near an arcade for some time now!" I exclaimed as I eyed the arcade from inside the car. I looked over at Dougie who smiled brightly.
"Come on." He got out of the car and opened my door for me. He then locked the car and walked with me to the arcade. He grabbed some tokkens and we started searching for a nice game.
"Speed Racing?" He pointed to the racing game on one corner.
"Are you sure? If I remember right, I'm good with that." I said with a laugh.
With much taunting, I lost. Dougie was a natural at Speed Racer. What made it fun was the fact that he didn't go easy on me. I personally find it quite annoying when a guy does that; even my brother.
"So what's next?" I said as I walked beside him.
"Hmmm. You choose." He said with a smile.
"Basketball!!!" I pumped my fist in the air and led him to the hoops.
"This time, you're going down!" I said.
The game ended well. It was a definate match-up ending with an 87 to 90 score. The winner.......it was me!
Dougie couldn't believe his eyes when I started scoring. I was on a roll!
"How'd you manage to score higher?" He said as we walked to another corner.
"Marco used to make me play basketball at home. I've grown to love the game." I said with a proud laugh.
"I'm never good with sports." Dougie confessed.
"Really? What do you do in your spare time then?"
"Guitar. Bass. Sing. Whatever comes to mind." He shrugged.
"Interesting. You should give me a proper show next time."
We played a few more games before deciding we were hungry enough to go and eat. We left his car outside the arcade and walked to the pizza parlor about two blocks from there. We walked in silence under the moon-lit sky. Dougie offered to bring my purse, which was in his right hand, and his left arm was linked with mine. We remained silent the whole walk.
When we got there, we grabbed a nice table on one end of the parlor. We ordered a pepperoni and some drinks to go with it. Silence was still dawning over us after we ordered.
"I noticed you don't talk that much." I said.
"You'll be surprised that I don't actually talk at all. Well, except when I'm with you. I like talking to you." He said.
"Thanks, I think." He smiled. "Why is that? If I may ask."
He pondered on my question. "I don't know really. You're talkative. That's a fact. It just seems to rub off on me."
"Should I take that as a complement?" I said with a chuckle.
"Yes you should."
Our pizza arrived fifteen minutes after. Most of the wait was filled with silence and idle talk. It wasn't an awkward one. It wasn't near weird even. It just seemed like we were both caught up with our own thoughts and neither of us were bothered by the silence.
It was one night that I will truly remember. It was a night with my dearest mate.
To be continued...
Last edited by carmzy_sweetness on Sun Jun 15, 2008 8:13 am; edited 4 times in total
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Jessica! wrote:OMG. Cute chapter XDD
And yes, it iiiis immensely short!
I like the way you write; very well-written, really.
More, more, more!
This is probably one of the first fics I actually read.
I just actually noticed you posted this.... How stupid of me.
Anyways...thanks so much. I'm glad you like the way I write
I hope I can keep writing adds that would keep YOU and my other readers reading *crosses fingers*.
KAI wrote:hahaha
yea
we played it knina sa school(party)
lol
with pokwang and fafi
hahaha
Lols. The real fafi and pokwang or your school's own???
I find that portion of the show utterly annoying. The oldies are nakakaawa. XD
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hep hep hooray!
hep hep hooray!
^That reminds me of Wowowee<---- obviously dunno how to spell that
Anyways...thanks so much. I'm glad you like the way I writewhich I personally think is crap
No problemo! And aww, don't think that.
Chapter 6 was brilliant
Dougie's so sweet. xDD
When do they fall in love?
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Jessica! wrote:No problemo! And aww, don't think that.
Chapter 6 was brilliant
Dougie's so sweet. xDD
When do they fall in love?
In five minutes. hahahahaha!!! Okay....so I made that up. Ewan. Maybe in five minutes nga. hahahaha
We'll see. And yeah......are there REAL guys who are like that? Sweet and gentlemanly I mean???
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carmzy_sweetness wrote:
Lols. The real fafi and pokwang or your school's own???
I find that portion of the show utterly annoying. The oldies are nakakaawa. XD
nah
just our classmaes
haha
lol
i don't even know that game
hahaha
that was the first time i heard it
hahaha
i don't watch afternoon shows kc
haha
btw
bloody brilliant chaptie!
just our classmaes
haha
lol
i don't even know that game
hahaha
that was the first time i heard it
hahaha
i don't watch afternoon shows kc
haha
btw
bloody brilliant chaptie!
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KAI wrote:nah
just our classmaes
haha
lol
i don't even know that game
hahaha
that was the first time i heard it
hahaha
i don't watch afternoon shows kc
haha
btw
bloody brilliant chaptie!
I watch it sometimes because my lola does. hahaha. Just some grandma bonding. hahaha
I heard you like the word "Bloody"??? hahahaha And thanks
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carmzy_sweetness wrote:
I watch it sometimes because my lola does. hahaha. Just some grandma bonding. hahaha
I heard you like the word "Bloody"??? hahahaha And thanks
haha
yea i do:)
it sounds cool
haha
ur welcome
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Another new chapter!!
Great chapter! I love it.
Make more while it's weekend!!
Can't wait for the next one!!
Great chapter! I love it.
Make more while it's weekend!!
Can't wait for the next one!!
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meah XD wrote:Another new chapter!!
Great chapter! I love it.
Make more while it's weekend!!
Can't wait for the next one!!
Thanks Mehhhh
Will try to write as much as I can. I have plans tomorrow the whole day though so I'm super sorry. It's my bestie's 15th on sunday and we're celebrating it tomorrow.
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Your bestie's birthday? Tell her Happy Birthday for me.
It's okaay. I understand that.
UPDATE SOON!
It's okaay. I understand that.
UPDATE SOON!
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nice chaaaap!!!!!!!!
dougie's soooo sweet.. im still wondering if there are guys who are like that..
more!!!!
WE WANT MOREE!!!!
kidding. <-- bout the evil part.. but really.. more..
dougie's soooo sweet.. im still wondering if there are guys who are like that..
more!!!!
WE WANT MOREE!!!!
kidding. <-- bout the evil part.. but really.. more..
mcflyJBdarch- Number of posts : 673
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Ooh, okay. You go and have fun then Just don't forget about your loyal fans! Hahaha.
And yes, tell her happy birthday for me, too!
The hep, hep, hooray segment of Wowowee is funny
I've only seen it about twice, and it's funnier when foreigners are on it.
We're yet to see if there are still guys like that out there. 8->
And yes, tell her happy birthday for me, too!
The hep, hep, hooray segment of Wowowee is funny
I've only seen it about twice, and it's funnier when foreigners are on it.
We're yet to see if there are still guys like that out there. 8->
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Meah:
Thanks. I'll greet her for you.
And thanks for understanding.
Cyra:
Yeah. Guys like that are very very scarce. It's very disappointing at times. Minsan nga there are those who act gentlemanly for girls they like pero pag ibang girls na, wala!
I'm training my cousins and twin to be chivalrous. They're about to kill me na. haha
Jessica:
Thanks. I'm leaving in a bit pero had to visit the forum muna.
Of course I'll never forget you guys!!! Naku naman. And fans? Wow. not worthy...but very well flattered
I'll greet her for you too.
And about the foreigners and guys thing....ditto.
KC:
Thanks!!!
Enjoying the boards so far?
Thanks. I'll greet her for you.
And thanks for understanding.
Cyra:
Yeah. Guys like that are very very scarce. It's very disappointing at times. Minsan nga there are those who act gentlemanly for girls they like pero pag ibang girls na, wala!
I'm training my cousins and twin to be chivalrous. They're about to kill me na. haha
Jessica:
Thanks. I'm leaving in a bit pero had to visit the forum muna.
Of course I'll never forget you guys!!! Naku naman. And fans? Wow. not worthy...but very well flattered
I'll greet her for you too.
And about the foreigners and guys thing....ditto.
KC:
Thanks!!!
Enjoying the boards so far?
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haha
wow
i didn't know you have a twin?
cool:)
wow
i didn't know you have a twin?
cool:)
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