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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  jaschier on Mon Jan 12, 2009 2:18 pm

actually i found it funny!!! lol! but why is it dougie and leah have to hide when they are already dead? dinaman sila nakikita... scratch
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:32 pm

Haha. Yeah, that made me think about it too! Laughing

nicoleaika wrote:
KAI wrote:I almost forgot Kelly doesn't see Dougie. I was confused why Kelly wasn't talking to Dougie. Yun pala di niya pala nakikita si Dougie. Haha. Silly me.
Leah: “No, it’s not. It’s just your tongue” --- Hahahahaha Hahaha
Dougie's genius!!!! PBJT!
I thought it was end. Meron pa ba?

yeah... I think 1-2 chap.. na lang

Aw. 1-2 more chaps Sad
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  PuDd_T on Mon Jan 12, 2009 9:38 pm

nice.nice. keep going! Smile Approve!
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Tue Jan 13, 2009 6:56 pm

tnx for reading! Very Happy

jaschier wrote:actually i found it funny!!! lol! but why is it dougie and leah have to hide when they are already dead? dinaman sila nakikita... scratch

i didn't say Leah hides... only Dougie because he likes to follow Kelly Very Happy (Gandang palusot eh, noh? XD)

KAI wrote:Aw. 1-2 more chaps Sad

I dunno kung 1-2 chaps. Pwedeng umabot ng 3 chaps. Basta 1-3 or 1-2
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  kaisthelimit on Tue Jan 13, 2009 8:41 pm

nicoleaika wrote:
KAI wrote:Aw. 1-2 more chaps Sad

I dunno kung 1-2 chaps. Pwedeng umabot ng 3 chaps. Basta 1-3 or 1-2

Yay. One moree! cheers
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  jaschier on Fri Jan 16, 2009 10:23 am

its so sad to end a story... study
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Sat Jan 17, 2009 9:07 am

jaschier wrote:its so sad to end a story... study

yeah... pero kung ipagpapatuloy ko pa kasi baka mawala sa storyline..
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  anika on Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:31 pm

OMD!! He killed Danny's mom?? Nooo. hahaha. poor Danny. Sad Sad
My gosh. Dougie's funny when he competes with Harry. Yup. He's a genius. haha.
Updaate!! Very Happy
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Sat Jan 24, 2009 7:20 pm

Sorry for VERY LATE UPDATE... actually I already finished typing this fic and will just post it na lang... pero one chapter nalang muna ipopost ko Very Happy

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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Sat Jan 24, 2009 7:24 pm

Chapter 14: The End?

The next day... Leah, Dougie, Tom, Kelly, and a funeral thingy (coz it’s gross to bring Leah’s body to Danny without any cover or something) go to Danny’s home to show him Leah’s body, to prove she’s already dead...

Tom: (knocking) “Danny! Danny!”
Danny: “What do you want?”
Tom: “Condolence... (and shows him Leah’s body)”
Danny: (Controlling his emotion) “Oh... it’s... it’s her...”
Kelly: “Condolence Danny..”
Danny: “It’s okay... It’s okay... at least now we have a proof that... that... (cries and hurriedly approach Leah’s body---w/c is inside a coffin...) Leah... I’m so sorry... I really, really, felt horrific... I alleged you so bad because you’re not able to meet my parents without knowing what happens to you... I... I’m so sorry... I didn’t do things to look for you... I... I...”
Leah: (Crying... Hugs Danny) “Danny... it’s... it’s okay...”

So... it’s the end... NAH! JUST KIDDING! After several MONTHS, Leah, and Dougie… and Harry...

Dougie: “HARRY!!! Nice hair! Semi-bald…”
Harry: “Oh, thanks…”
Leah: “So, what’s up, Harry? Any news?”
Harry: “Oh... news?? About??”
Leah: ”About everyone! I mean... everyone we knew like Danny”
Harry: “Oh... Tom and Kelly are already...”
Dougie: “WHAT?!”
Harry: “Entered the music industry. Kelly is the singer and Tom’s the songwriter. But Kelly’s still single... don’t worry...”
Dougie: “Okay...”
Leah: “Even though she’s still single, poor little Dougie will not able to be her boyfriend since he’s already dead... aww...”
Dougie: (Heave a huge sigh, then in a very soft voice) “Here we go again...”
Harry: “Dougie and Danny’s father are currently inside the jail. You know, coz Danny’s father killed Dougie and his mum and Dougie’s father killed Danny’s mum. (Whispers) Dang, lots of killing. (Back to his normal voice volume ) Danny... I heard that he already moved on. He also already got a new girl. A beauty queen I think...”
Leah: (Nodding) “Ahh... Good for him...”
Harry: “Uhm... Leah, do you still love him?”
Leah: (Sighs) “Of course I do. He’s my first love. He’s my first boyfriend... he’s also my first kiss... And...”
Harry: “Hey, um... I know this sounds crazy but... Speaking of that... Do you think we can...” (Pointing his lips and then Leah’s and back to his...)” Leah: “What?”
Dougie: (Snorts. Then pull a face.) “Yuck Harry”
Harry: “What’s yuck with that?!”
Dougie: “Get over it, Harry. Leah loves Danny very much.”
Leah: “Wait, guys. I don’t get it...”
Dougie: “Harry likes to kiss you.”
Leah: “Oh?”
Harry: “Look, I already touched you. Maybe I can... (Pause) oh shoot, sorry for my acts... I just have a little problem”
Leah: “You’re acting weird again, Har... what’s that little problem you have right now??”
Harry: “Remember when you brought your body to Danny’s, I’m not there, right?”
Leah: “Right... oh yeah, where are you that time?”
Harry: “I was confined in a Hospital---”
Dougie: “WHOA!”
Leah: “WHAT?! What… what happened to you? Are you alright now?”

Harry didn’t answer. And he was so much weirder at that time.

Dougie: “Hey, Harry, are you alright?”
Harry: “Literally, no… But emotionally, yeah…”
Leah: “You’re really weird again, you know. Wait, you said you’re literally not okay?”
Harry: “Yeah…”
Leah: “What’s the sick? (Jokingly) Is it love sick again?”
Harry: (Chuckles) “I hope so it is… (turned serious) but it wasn’t”
Leah: “So what is it?”

Harry didn’t answer again…

Dougie: “Hey, Harry, you okay?”
Leah: “Harry??”
Harry: “I… I---“
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  McFly(nick) on Sat Jan 24, 2009 7:30 pm

woooooooooo! hahaha

update... anu sasabihin ni hary?? hahaha XD Razz
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Jan 24, 2009 7:30 pm

Aww. No Danny and Leah? I like Leah pa naman.
Whoa. Weird chapter. What's wrong with Harry?
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Sat Jan 24, 2009 7:44 pm

Chapter 14.2

Leah: “Harry… what is it?”
Harry: “I… (took a deep breath) There’s a possibility that in one week, I’m going to leave in this world…”

Silence. Both Leah and Dougie are speechless.

Harry: “What I mean is… the doctor said I have cancer… and he told me that if I didn’t die in one week, then I’m still going to live my old, ordinary life… otherwise…”
Leah: “You will die…”
Harry: (Smiles) “Yeah---”

Dougie suddenly hit Harry very hard.

Harry: “Ouch! It hurts! (Jokingly) Sometimes I wish you guys can't touch us!”
Dougie: “You’re… You’re crazy!”
Harry: “Wha---What?!”
Dougie: “You’re smiling because you’re dying? You’re really crazy! (Sobbing) Look Harry, you’re lucky because you’re still living. You still have a chance to make your dreams come true! You’re still able to bond with your friends, and… your family… Then all of a sudden you want to die?! ARE YOU CRAZY---“
Harry: “But I wasn’t able to live with the girl I loved!”

Dougie shut his mouth.

Harry: (Crying) “You, you want to live because Kelly is still living. But in my case, Leah’s already dead… I just want to live with her forever…”
Leah: “Harry…”
Harry: “That’s why I don’t care if I’m going to die, as long as Leah’s waiting for me at the other world…”
Leah: “Harry… (Pause) You’re an idiot, you know…”
Dougie: “Agree”
Leah: “You’re really crazy”
Harry: “Leah...”
Leah: “Harry---”

Harry hugs Leah very tight.

Harry: “Promise me, when I died, you’ll meet me… and will love me forever…”
Leah: “But---But I already told you that I still love Danny”
Harry: “But he’s still living! Isn’t it hard to love someone who’s not like you?”
Leah: “You’re right, it’s hard… But---“
Harry: “What but?! No more buts! Leah… Please… It’s for you too. You’ll able to forget him. You’re not going to suffer anymore. I will help you to move on. Leah, please…”
Leah: "But I swear it's not going to be that easy..."
Harry: "Yeah, I know, but look... There's no impossible while living in eternity---"
Dougie: "Wow Harry"
Harry: "Be quiet, Dougie"
Dougie: "Wha---fine. Give Harry a moment..."
Harry: "Leah...?"
Leah: (Sigh) “Okay… I will…”
Harry: (Become happy) “Really?"
Leah: "What, you don't want?"
Harry: "No, no, don't take it back"

Harry hugs Leah tighter. But Leah didn’t react, and her face is so unpredictable. It was like sad but glad.
In one week, Harry collapsed, and you know what happened to him…
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While he was walking towards a white door…

Harry: “Just as expected, Leah’s not here… (Sigh) Dang, I'm a fool... I believe her that easily”
Leah: “Oh yeah? Maybe yes, you are... But (pause) even though you already know that I love Danny so much, you still believe me..."
Harry: (Smiles) “Leah!”
Leah: (Grins) “My conscience made me think… Seriously…”
Harry: (Laughs, and breaths deeply) “Okay, let’s go?”
Leah: “Just make sure you’re really going to make my life happier than what Danny’s going to give me.”
Harry: “Oh, c’mon! Of course… for you…”
Leah: “Sure?”
Harry: “Yeah”

They enter the eternity… and live happily ever after… ‘till Leah suddenly heard someone, calling her name…

Leah, Leah, LEAH!
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  kaisthelimit on Sat Jan 24, 2009 7:48 pm

I missed Danny!
Who's calling Leah?
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  anika on Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:41 pm

NOOO!!!
Nice twist!!! hahaha.
oohh. Who's calling leah? Very Happy
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  PuDd_T on Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:33 pm

OMG! nice! Harry's weird here though.. oh well! i still like him! Approve!
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  jaschier on Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:49 pm

.... ohh i thought it will going to end... harry got a cancer? dont tell me that the one who was calling leah was danny, and he is dead! nah hypothetically..

hehe nice one Approve!
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Mon Jan 26, 2009 8:10 pm

Chapter 15: She Falls Asleep

Leah opens her eyes to know who’s calling her… And she was so surprised…

Kelly: “Leah! We’re already here! I’m waking you up for almost 2 hours already! C’mon, stand up, let’s go. Danny’s parents getting impatient now”
Leah: “Kelly?”
Kelly: “What?”
Leah: “You’re talking to me?”
Kelly: “Of course!”
Leah: “And you told me you’re waking me up?”
Kelly: “Yeah, you fall asleep while on the road.”
Leah: “I fall asleep? So… everything that happens is just a dream?”
Kelly: “Everything that happens? Is your dream that wide? Looks like many things happened there, huh?” Leah: “So many! But weirdly, I forgot the faces and names of other people involved there, but I remembered what happened!”
Kelly: “Oh, really, just share that dream to me later. But first, get up now and let’s go meet Danny’s parents”
Leah: “Right… let’s go”

Kelly went out of the car, while Leah… She can’t believe everything that happens is just a dream, and she weirdly forgot the faces and names of the people involved (Of course, except to those she already knew before she dies like Kelly, Danny, and Tom). She smiles and breaths deeply---“Right, I can do it!” And she went out of the car…

Leah: “Okay, I’m nervous…”
Kelly: “It’s okay, just think positive”
Danny: “LEAH!”

Leah’s world suddenly stopped. Danny called her, and she can’t believe… She wants to cry, and so she did... She ran towards Danny and hugged him…

Danny: “Whoa! What’s up? You’re acting like we haven’t meet each other for several months”
Leah: “Yeah, I felt so… I’m just happy that finally, you can see me---“
Danny: “What?”
Leah: “Okay, I will just tell you about that later (Smiles)”
Danny: “Okay…”

And Danny introduced Leah to his father and mother… They’re so happy to meet her. They told Danny that Leah’s just the girl for Danny… After that~~~
Danny and Leah are walking to a room, holding hands…

Leah: “At last! They already met me. I’m so happy!”
Danny: “You know what? Me too…”
Leah: (Smiles) “Really?”
Danny: (Chuckles) “Of course, at least, (Stops walking and faces Leah) you already meet my parents. I wonder when I can meet your parents…”
Leah: (Hit Danny light-heartedly) “What, you don’t want to live with me?”
Danny: “Nah… I’m not saying, I wanna die to meet your parents. I mean… (Pause, and smiles) Okay, nevermind” (Laughs)
Kelly: “By the way, Leah, can you tell us about your dream now?”
Leah: “Sure!”

They enter a room where they see Tom.

Tom: “Aloha! (And raises his arms) Hello guys!”
Kelly: “Tom!”
Tom: “Kelly!”

Tom and Kelly hurriedly hug each other---

Leah: “Wait, are you guys... you know?”
Tom: “What?”
Kelly: “Of course not, we’re just the best of friends.”
Tom: “And Kels already like somebody.”
Leah: “EH?! Who---who—who?!”
Kelly: “You’ll know later. I already called him when I’m waking you up. He told me he’s on his way now.”
Leah: “Ahh… okay”
Danny: “So Leah, what’s your dream?”
Leah: “Oh, it started when I open my eyes and I’m inside a white room. Then a guy approached me and he knows my name---“
Tom: (raise his hand) “Is it me?”
Leah: “No, either you or Danny… it is someone else…”
Tom: (Naughtily) “OH MY! Danny! Leah dreamed someone else, not you! Ha-ha!”
Leah: “Wait, it’s just a dream. Actually I forgot his face and his name. (Pause) But one thing I remember is he’s 21 years old.”
Danny: “See, Leah didn’t even know who he is…”
Kelly: “But you’re jealous?”
Danny: (Blushing) “Eh?”
Tom: “Look! Danny’s jealous to a guy Leah dreamt about!” (Laughs)
Leah: (Blushing, too) “Hey, stop it… I told you it’s just a dream...”
Danny: “Yeah… I mean--- (thinks deeply) ---Yeah…”
Kelly: “Okay, okay, we will… Leah, continue your story…”
Leah: “Then I asked the guy if I’m already---“

Leah stopped when someone entered the room.

Danny: “Oh, by the way, Leah, here’s my new best friend---“ (Tom stared at Danny scarily) “---I mean, one of my best friends. I met him when our family visited my Grandma. And his name’s Harry…”
Leah: “Oh, hi, I’m Leah (shake hands with Harry) You know what? Your name’s familiar…”
Harry: “Well, yours too…” (Laughs)
Leah: “Really?”
Harry: “Yeah, coz my girl’s name is Leah too…”
Leah: (Nodding) “Ahh…”
Tom: “Oh, Harry, join us here, Leah is telling a fairytale---I mean, her dream”
Harry: “Sure…”
Kelly: “So, where are we?”
Danny: “Leah asked the guy if she’s already…”
Leah: “Oh, yeah… So I asked the guy if I’m already dead and he said yes I am.”

All of them, in chorus: “WHAT?!”

Leah: “Yeah… it’s weird. Then I asked him again how. He told me because of heart disease.”
Kelly: “Oh my God. Good thing it’s just a dream!”
Leah: “Yeah… but I can’t believe it’s just a dream. I tried my best to tell Danny that I’m already dead---“
Tom: “Ooh… scary…”
Leah: “Nah, not by haunting him…”
Tom: “Ahh… okay…”
Leah: “And then it’s just a dream. I fell asleep while on the road. (Sighs) But I’m glad it’s just a dream…”
Kelly: “And at least you’re going to meet him now”
Leah: “Him? Who is he?’”
Kelly: “My boyfriend, wait, I will just wait for him outside.”
Leah: “Okay”

Kelly went out.

Leah: “Wow, I can’t believe she already have a boyfriend.”
Tom: “Me too…”
Danny: “Okay, Tom’s jealous”
Tom: “Shut up. I’m not jealous. She’s just a friend of mine.”
Danny: “Ows?”
Tom: “Yeah”
Leah: (Laughs) “You guys are so cute”
Harry: (Laughs) “Yeah…”
Tom: “No, it’s just I’m not really jealous. It’s… I can’t believe too that Kelly already got a boyfriend”
Danny: “Nah… you’re jealous”
Tom: (Pretending he didn’t hear Danny) “WAAA!!! Lala! Lalala! Lalala!”

Danny, Leah, and Harry laughed and stopped when Kelly entered holding her boyfriend’s hand…

Kelly: “Leah, and everyone, here he is… Dougie”
Leah: “DOUGIE?!”
Dougie: “Yeah… and you’re… Leah?”
Leah: (Nods) “Yeah… (Sighs) By the way, have we met each other before?”
Dougie: “All I can say is, I dreamed about some thing this morning---too

THE END
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hope you like it Very Happy so yeah... i'm going to type my second fic na... and it's going to be weird, too


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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  kaisthelimit on Mon Jan 26, 2009 8:21 pm

Gosh, I was so shocked when I saw: finished
OMG this is really cool! I love the ending! It was all just a dream! Yay Dougie and me XD!I kid I kid! I soo like it! Approve! clap Rock On! PBJT!
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Post  nicoleaika on Mon Jan 26, 2009 8:24 pm

KAI wrote:Gosh, I was so shocked when I saw: finished
OMG this is really cool! I love the ending! It was all just a dream! Yay Dougie and me XD!I kid I kid! I soo like it! Approve! clap Rock On! PBJT!

yeah... actually tatapusin ko na dun sa part na nagkasama sila ni Harry... but I think Leah and Danny's better.. tapos naisip ko yung title mismo na 'She Falls Asleep'.. then yun na yung ending.. btw, tnx for reading it Very Happy
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  jaschier on Tue Jan 27, 2009 1:41 pm

i've just knew it !!! my theory was right!!! ahhh but, i refused to think, para di ko mapredict... hehe by the way, its a swweet ending... yeah, i like it, kaya lang natuldukan na ang fic mo... hehe, and dougie and kelly, sila na pala... so sweet!!! Approve! its so cool..

i'll wait for you new fic... Razz
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:35 pm

jaschier wrote:i've just knew it !!! my theory was right!!! ahhh but, i refused to think, para di ko mapredict... hehe by the way, its a swweet ending... yeah, i like it, kaya lang natuldukan na ang fic mo... hehe, and dougie and kelly, sila na pala... so sweet!!! Approve! its so cool..

i'll wait for you new fic... Razz

yeah... kailangan talagang i-end na Rolling Eyes

tnx for reading it Very Happy

..and sige... bout my new fic... sige sige... hindi ko lang sure kung magugustuhan niu
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  anika on Wed Jan 28, 2009 4:31 pm

I was so so shocked when I saw the word 'finished'. hahaha.
Anyways, nice ending! I loved it! Everyone got a good ending! Everything's such a funny coincidence.
Yey! She still ends up with Danny! Very Happy
I can't wait for your next fic! I love you I love you I love you
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  nicoleaika on Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:54 pm

anika wrote:I was so so shocked when I saw the word 'finished'. hahaha.
Anyways, nice ending! I loved it! Everyone got a good ending! Everything's such a funny coincidence.
Yey! She still ends up with Danny! Very Happy
I can't wait for your next fic! I love you I love you I love you

Yeah... actually at first parang ang weird ng ginawa kong ending... but.. yeah, glad you all liked it Very Happy

...yung sa next fic... actually di ko talaga sure kung magugustuhan niu.. (another Danny fic--- Rolling Eyes ---spoiler?)
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

Post  kaisthelimit on Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:42 pm

nicoleaika wrote:
KAI wrote:Gosh, I was so shocked when I saw: finished
OMG this is really cool! I love the ending! It was all just a dream! Yay Dougie and me XD!I kid I kid! I soo like it! Approve! clap Rock On! PBJT!

yeah... actually tatapusin ko na dun sa part na nagkasama sila ni Harry... but I think Leah and Danny's better.. tapos naisip ko yung title mismo na 'She Falls Asleep'.. then yun na yung ending.. btw, tnx for reading it Very Happy

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Sure no problem(:
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Re: She Falls Asleep (finished)

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